After Being Transformed into Cannon Fodder, He Plucked Long Aotian All Over.

In the early part of the plot, almost every line has a female rival [I'm about to cry]. I'm watching from behind. I hope the author will try not to use female rivalry to promote the development of the plot. It makes people uncomfortable to watch [crying] The heroine's character is very good! Stay true to your heart and remain unmoved [love]

It's super, super good-looking, and the heroine has different plans for each of the male protagonists, Long Aotian. The first one is a mortal woman and the second one is a blind woman. And when the author wrote it, it felt like an independent story line. Every pull feels very strong, and the most important thing is that it feels very immersive. There will be no drama. It's very, very beautiful. I hope the author will make more fun and more fun.

After reading it for a long time, almost all the male protagonists suddenly had a strange feeling for the girl, and then fell in love at first sight. The writing of how they fell in love was actually very weak, except for the sword fairy who was a little thinner, but I still felt that the emotional line was abrupt. Sometimes it feels like it's too fast and everything happens without any preliminary preparation. It can be seen that the author wants to distinguish between the original body and different clones (the heroine pinches her own face, so let's call it a clone). The clones also have names, but I think if they are all clones, can't they all be named Yun? When Yun Qing thinks of the original body, will the collapse fall faster? Since the heroine They all planned to have clones, but they were completely separated once they were clones. Unrelated names are more real; and when I read the article, I found that the author had crossed out his own name. The male protagonist of the clone strategy actually called the female protagonist's original name several times, which was particularly dramatic. This kind of loophole appeared many times. So that's why I asked the author to give him an unrelated name, because the name is written in the splits many times. However, the writing is good, and I also like the character of the heroine. She is a hard-working and motivated person who is not in love and only pursues becoming stronger. Some of the details of the fighting are well written, and overall, it can be seen. I wish the author will get stronger as he writes and the novel will sell well!

The plot is okay, the heroine's character is also good, but there are a lot of typos, and the author won't change them [smile][smile][smile]

Although the content of female competition in the first few paragraphs makes others feel uncomfortable, the author writes about rape and robbery, which feels very exciting and becomes more and more exciting. However, this is Long Ao Tianwen. Long Ao Tianwen generally has many harems and the like. It is natural to have other female partners. However, the author has too little content. It is recommended to keep the book.

In fact, we can't say female competition, those characters are more like tool people, because the character description is not full enough, but the text written by the author is fast-paced. After all, the text is not long. You can choose some characters like Lu and Liu who do not conflict with each other for long-term characterization. It is also good for the author to bring out contradictory ideas through them (the supplement like Liu's paragraph is good, maybe some arcs of the characters can be added) For example, the role of the male supporting character in the second guide is the same as that of other characters. Without these, it is difficult to promote development and make the article outstanding.

It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it! Very nice! The heroine is very sober and smart, and the scripts she develops for each Long Aotian are different. The heroine completes the task and escapes, just do it! Neat! It's not romantic at all, and it doesn't abuse women, so feel free to watch it! Very touching! Big cheers for the author!

This book is more interesting, specifically because of the heroine. She changes different identities in the same world to conquer the Son of Heaven, and each identity has a different personality and appearance. As for the emotional development of the guide, the clues are relatively clear, but the emotional development is relatively fast, and then there will be some competitive plots, and the character creation is also relatively good. I really like the two characters of the mortal, the gentle medical girl, the ignorant shark who can sing beautifully. In terms of plot, what I'm seeing now is Shura Field, that is, the identity is revealed, and then it almost feels like it should be over. I hope that the author can perfect the relationship when it is over, and the characteristics of the heroine's character can be more prominent (I really hope to see her different views on the strategies for different Sons of Heaven) and the reasons why she chose this way, not just for a simple mission.

The style of this article is bold, the strategy changes according to the target, and the emotions are delicate and sticky. Plot: The heroine is a character from another world. She is ordered by Heaven to guide the male protagonist to weaken his luck, consolidate the world of cultivation, and strengthen himself. The early stage is similar to the fast travel story of the world of cultivation, which is 1v1. The story of each stage of the strategy is different. Occasionally, the characters are connected in series. Some strategies will have female competition to promote development, but it is tolerable. In the later stage, it should lose its horse. Personality: The heroine is at the level of a movie queen, passionate and ruthless. She regards men as achievements. She will run away and change to the next one after getting the guide. The characters are clear and diverse. There are gentle and friendly women, and there are also jealous bad women. I think I have conquered them all. As long as the heroine is not abused and has a bit of androgyny, it doesn't matter. Most of the male protagonists are affectionate and paranoid. Disadvantages: Because of the female competition, most readers may not be able to accept it, resulting in low ratings. Summary: The movie queen travels to the world of cultivation and explores the story of the male protagonist to strengthen himself. It can be understood as: sacrificing men can increase cultivation, the plot is not procrastinating, the heroine is sober and rational, and has a little bit of female rivalry. Recommended

The beautiful heroine clearly knows what she wants. By the way, I heard that an author updated 500 chapters a day and got rich and went abroad to play. Update soon.

Good-looking and good-looking. Why is the book review only 7.1? After reading it, I think it can be rated 9.8, Yes. I really like it, the author writes it so well. The plot is logical, not the kind of mindless thing. The more you watch it, the more you like it. Although Married at First Sight is a cool story, it directly hit my xp. The plot I watched later is a word of cool. When will the author update the 10 chapters? What can I say? [Sending my heart] [Please update] [Shy] I saw the White-haired Immortal. Although I am really looking forward to the Shura Field later on, please don't rush and write slowly. It's a bit hasty [Sending Hearts]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I hate it so much, why is it serialized? Ohhhhhhhh, even if it is serialized, there are still so few ooohhhh [crying]

It seems that every male protagonist is the tool of the female protagonist, but this setting is very good. I hope her vest can last longer. The female competition part may be because his original setting is the male protagonist in Long Ao Tianwen, or it is for the face-slapping part. The character of the heroine is really good and well-shaped. Come on✊

There are more plots about love at first sight, and then the male protagonist falls in love more and more as we get along with him. Cool article

The fishing actor is a heartthrob, the heroine is very strong, the story of her growth experience is also well written, her strength is gradually increasing, she is very clear-headed, super good-looking, highly recommended. Multiple male protagonists, multiple plots, a bit like fake robbery

This is what I love to watch! A particularly good-looking strategy plan. The heroine is smart and always knows what she wants. She never stops for something she shouldn't. I really like it! Moreover, the male protagonists each have their own characteristics, clean in body and mind, and very comfortable to watch. The Shura field is well arranged, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed. The plot is novel and addictive. Full marks, highly recommended≡ω≡

Oh, it's so beautiful, I like it so much. The author is really good at writing, and it's not the kind of writing that just goes through the plot perfunctorily. It can be seen that the writing was done seriously, and I also watched it seriously. The plot was so enjoyable to watch. Yes, yes, abuse them like this, abuse them like this. I'm really curious about what the strongest elder's love tribulation will look like. I pulled up the directory and the results are still being updated. How can I see it if I visit so little? I can't stand it anymore, I feel so itchy.

Please update quickly! The first thing I do when I open my eyes every day is to refresh the page, and I have to click on the article several times before going to bed. The plot is stuck at key points, which makes me feel nervous. Staying updated has become a daily obsession. I am always looking forward to new chapters, eagerly waiting for you to write. Never stop updating. Readers are looking forward to it and are crazy about fresh plots. Please hurry up and fill in the gaps!

I like the setting, especially the heroine's two identities. It would be better if the plot and emotional lines were richer.

The book's rating is very low now, but it's actually very well written, but it's too realistic. The evil side of people is written too clearly and realistically. People are like this in reality, which makes readers very angry. I have encountered too many [grievances] in reality, and I wanted to escape reality and feel more relaxed by reading books. [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting. The heroine has different scripts for everyone, and the heroine is still very sober. It's very interesting. It would be better if the author did more.

The imagination is very interesting, and the setting of the protagonist running away after completing the task is very fresh. The early rhythm is brisk, and the atmosphere of cultivating immortals and traveling through books is in place. Long Aotian goes from being used to being paranoid and chasing people, which is full of tension. The motivations of some characters are insufficiently developed. It focuses on light-hearted sand sculptures and is suitable for entertainment in the literary wilderness. Readers who want to see the crematorium of Chasing His Wife can read it.

It's so good. I've been following it for a few months. There are more authors and there's a shortage of books. The heroine is calm and sober. I love it.

Although the pace is a bit fast, it's good.

Very nice looking

I like it so much, I feel it looks good But there are some plots that I feel are unnecessary, such as Fang and Chu [a bit of female rivalry], there are some poisonous points.

In the first chapter, the original heroine came to the heroine and kept insulting her in front of the door. The hero went out and said that I miss you as my junior sister and left. Yes, no more. "Junior Sister Su. My affairs have nothing to do with you." Xie Linyuan's tone was indifferent. "You are not allowed to make noise here anymore, and you are not allowed to insult Yao'er anymore." "If you still know that she is my junior sister, please leave here."

Regarding the female rivalry, the author only has the first line, and the next two plots are missing. As for why it is rated four stars, the heroine changed her name and kept using that name in that line. Several times, the men called the heroine her real name. I thought she lost her horse😓

It looks good, it combines face pinching + pseudo-coercion + sick and weak female protagonist + male abuse

It's a good-looking, very novel subject matter, and the female protagonist's baby is full marks. The male protagonists are just like the ancient male protagonists. They are overbearing and possessive. The female protagonist is the property of only one person, hoping that the female protagonist can rise to the top and have three thousand beauties in the harem. These feelings are not worthy of the female protagonist.