Time Stops? There's Something Wrong with This Female Lord's World

This book was originally intended to be read as a pornographic book, but after reading the latest chapter, I unexpectedly felt that the quality of the whole novel was surprisingly high. The author made many moves that were beyond my expectation. I initially thought that the female protagonist was a classic yellow-haired template, and the male protagonist was a standard green one. Tea, seeing that the male protagonist is now keeping in mind whoever treats me well, I also remember whoever treats me badly. He is a character who dares to love and hate. The female protagonist also has subtle tenderness and dares to act. To be honest, I kind of hope that this is a pure love story. Come on, author.

Very good-looking uncle, five stars help the author become a breeding star 🤓👍🏿

To be honest, the female protagonists are all gods. If the gender is changed, it is just a bloody story about a few wretched men harassing the beautiful and weak female protagonist. But the characters they portray are so amazing, so they have a different flavor.

Very good article, Wenquxing descends to the earth Although I feel that Yumei will be punished by fate and have a high probability of being offline in the mid-term, but in any case, looking at it now, she is really the best to the protagonist. The feeling of two people redeeming each other together is the feeling of pure love. From the perspective of readers, I still hope to see the story of the final victory of the party struggle. The protagonist has changed Yumei too much. She can definitely become a very good person. The setbacks in the middle are of course, but no matter what Onigai Wadasi Please give Yumi a good ending, I will do anything [crying] [crying]

The writing is good, but I feel like the male protagonist could be removed from the time traveler. Completely pure local, maybe even the person. Not only is he shy towards women, his economic concepts are completely the same as mine. Except for the additional system and the fact that the character is not as transparent as the original owner, it is basically the same as the original owner.

What I like about it is that Liu Bei's writing is amazing. The point of demining is Xiao Nanliang's facial makeup setting, which is similar to the little white flower in the ancient Ba Zong's article. She is already far away from people. She is kind and unyielding, tender and pitiful, silly and sweet [laughing and crying]

Niu Cries. The male protagonist and Yumei wrote such a pure love story that it made me feel uncomfortable watching it. My stomach hurts so much

Fairy product, astringent but not sentimental, unexpectedly very sweet More too slow Author I like you

Although this is indeed a novel about women, the gender-changing setting makes readers forget their past prejudices about the relationship between men and women. The strong character setting supports the most solid skeleton of the work, making people unable to put it down.

My fists really want to drink blood. If I don't punch something for a day, I feel uncomfortable all over. I kill 10,000 enemies in my mind every day, and they pop up again after killing them. I can't finish them all, I can't finish them at all. Opponent? I left them all behind yesterday, and no one can beat them. I wash myself with sweat, pour myself with blood, and my bones are full of echoes of battle. I lose when I stand still - but that day will never come. The wound had just closed and opened again, just in time, a new exit. Fighting. Still fighting. Can't stop. Can't stop. Can't stop. I can easily knock out an adult African elephant with one punch. I usually engage in one-on-one combat training with 800kg giant brown bears. My bite force has reached a terrifying 1 million Newtons. Because I have been biting each other with Tyrannosaurus rex for a long time, my amazing bite force is enough to crush everything. I go to the national highway every day for collision training with Universiade heavy trucks. My body has been trained to the extreme. My flesh has been trained into steel. Want to compete with me? I advise you to give up this idea as soon as possible. Even if you use military force, you will not be able to kill me. My strength will always be above yours. I have restrained my desire to hunt all of you. If you dare to challenge my lower limit again, I don't mind letting my fists eat my heart today. You may be joking, but I really think so. When I was a child, I was a very honest student, and then a student in the same grade came to tease me. As a result, I threw him to the ground with a little force. Then I have always thought that if I punched with all my strength, I might seriously injure people, so you are just the prey I hunt.

The only drawback is that this system is really too generous, and the rewards are comparable to the meals served by the aunt in the school cafeteria🥱

The big brother who writes about Liu Bei must be pure love, it must be pure love. Ah Grandma [almost crying]

The author's writing style is very good, especially Knife [Wrath]. I can only say that I hope the author can give grandma a better ending. Furthermore, although Yumei is very bad in any way, but here I can only say that she is good and like an angel. I hope that Yumei can be rescued by the protagonist when she is punished by the big hand of fate in the later stage.

For now, this book may still be pure love. It probably doesn't seem like there will be multiple female protagonists. Let me talk about the good points first, the characters are distinct, each character has its own characteristics, and it is attractive and attractive for people to keep watching. There are many bad points, and they are also very trivial. Overall, it can be said that there is not enough foreshadowing, and the author is too anxious to advance. The first part is about the younger sister. I want to write about the influence of the mastermind behind the scenes. The turning point is too sudden. The younger sister in the front is still a coward, but later she dares to pretend to be happy. The second one is about the feather. The protagonist has special feelings for that feather, but he still takes it out. OK, if you want to look at it every day, that's fine, but do you want your intention to be so obvious? The reason for taking out the feathers earlier was not sufficient at all, and the aunt came in right after, just to further the plot. The third part is the part where Kutiao wakes up. It was written in a hurry. It was supposed to be a very tender climax, and I could even use a whole page to write about this emotion, but it didn't happen. Instead, it was diluted by my younger brother's distrust and other things. What follows is a seed of doubt, it's too fast, I'm not saying that's bad, but it's written so tightly that you don't even have time to breathe. The character design of the protagonist is also a bit tool-like. You can see the little sister's little thoughts and know how to rebel against the store manager, but sometimes she is very slow. In short, if it is the next one, I will probably follow up on it, because although there are these flaws, it is generally good. Maybe the author focused on the climax and plot, but I think this should also be about emotions. Maybe I can try to give more words to emotions.

Come on, Sister Youmei! Use your superpowers to drive away the cows! [Cry]

Some book clubs may not like reading The Abuser, but the emotional drama in this book really touched me. If you can accept it, I highly recommend it😋 It's so delicious, such a twisted feeling😋I haven't eaten such a delicious novel in a long time😋

Haha, I don't know how Kujo Yumi wins at the moment. I've already read Chapter 72 and I don't know how Kujo Yumi wins even if I haven't looked back. Maybe it's because I have a big brain. Her younger sister's abilities can perfectly transform into others at the initial stage and I still can't tell. I boldly think about whether after upgrading, I can directly use the ability of the transformed person. This is not bad, not to mention that the hypnotist is currently semi-invincible. The competitors that appear now are more powerful than the other, and I can't see how Kujo Yumi can win.

How to say it? Is the male protagonist one of those bullied classmates or the only one bullied by different people? Anyway, I don't understand what's so interesting about this. But I generally won't give low marks, the writing is very good. How can I put it, the male protagonist is worse off alive than dead. The male protagonist has no role at all. Except for causing trouble

It's a bit interesting. I always think that the mother is not the problem. The problem is whether there is a bottom line and whether there are distinct characteristics of the character. Knowing how to refuse (although it failed) has at least opened up the pure sexual transformation a lot. Moreover, the system's tasks are also in place as a tool. Objectively, it really advances the plot very well. This is the right way and how it should be used.

It looks good, but I wish the system was less coercive.

Come on, big brother who writes wild books

Hurry up and serve it, I hope there will be more male and female parts.

As soon as I started writing about the sword, I became ruthless and forgot about my feelings. The writing style has also improved, as if the literary star descended to earth. [Cry][cry][cry] Super pretty!

To be honest, it's very good. But author, do you really not consider a single female protagonist? It's very beautiful if it's strengthened. If it's not strengthened, I'll give you a two-star review first. I'll give it a five-star rating after it's strengthened.

I feel like it would be better to change it to pure love

All I can say is, is Brother Bai a good boy? [Laughing evilly] To be honest, this book is actually for... [Laughs crookedly]

Surprisingly, it's pretty good-looking. I thought it was the same type as before where many people fell into evil situations. Isn't this pure love?

I won't say anything else, just give it five stars.

It's okay. After reading it, I feel that if I write it like this, it will be a single female protagonist.

We must let pure love and sweetness continue forever Tonic knife, tonic knife, no need If possible, we must let Bai and grandma reunite [crying]