One Piece: The Burning Flame

Everyone throw up breakfast, lunch and dinner and eat this! I know this is hard, but it's an order! If you like Ace, you must read this article, it has a unique flavor. There is no plot like in conventional fan fiction, where a person suddenly goes in and gives Ace some profound insights and saves Ace. It is completely like Ace kitten using his whiskers to sense the smell of happiness in the air bit by bit. The redemption that determines the value of his own existence, the redemption that tens of thousands of characters related to him pull him up! Not brainless, logical, not exaggerated, no obvious character OOC, no time travel, no leather jacket, no Long Aotian. The characters are three-dimensional and deep, in line with Ace's way of getting into trouble and thinking logic. It is a novel entirely with Ace as the main body, without inexplicable or illogical character cheats. It is very deep, and it also has the sense of despair that fate vaguely controls life. The writing is very true. It's like the feeling of a butterfly flapping its wings desperately on the spider web of fate. Each character is portrayed in a correct three-dimensional manner, with contradictions and no facial expressions. It is completely consistent. If Ace and other characters react according to this fate development situation, I think the most powerful point (personally think the biggest advantage of this article) is that the author is very good at writing a macroscopic thing. For example, the protagonist needs to go from A to B. Some other novels may only write about the protagonist's vision and what kind of efforts the protagonist has made. At most, the supporting characters can help. The perspective is mainly on the protagonist, and the spotlight is only given to the protagonist, but this article is different. It writes about the kind of process when something goes from a to b, different people participate for various reasons (I don't think it is the kind of instrumental participation, but the kind where they have their own purpose, subjectivity, and thinking), and it feels like many threads in different directions are tied together. It's not that the protagonist wants this thing to succeed, so this thing is achieved. It is the feeling of a butterfly flapping its wings that triggers different reactions from different characters under the change of the protagonist's behavior, and then the actions of all characters are mixed up, which is also the sense of destiny that is achieved. That's why it seems very real and touching, and there is no "perspective" from God's perspective. When he was mistakenly sent a bounty because he couldn't contact Garp, Ace's sense of abandonment and confusion seeped out like water. There are few direct descriptions, but it can make people feel it. And Ace's growth is gradual. Who knows, when I saw Ace looking like a stray cat who had been wandering for a long time and was soaked by the rain, and was disheartened by the world, suddenly Whisker felt the feeling of happiness for the first time!! My mom! Ace Ji Tui people are so happy!! Ace just wants to be happy! Moreover, regarding Ace, a series of psychological activities and behavioral standards such as his contradictory and guilty self-disgust, his thorny attitude towards the outside world, and his doubts about his own existence are all portrayed very comfortably. It doesn't make people feel OOC at all. Ace's character portrays a neutral and three-dimensional character in such contradictions, showing the charm of this person's character to the fullest! Completely a restored role. Ace, I guarantee you are a little angel! In fact, I have read a lot of fanfics about Ace, and most of them gave me a feeling of being unsatisfactory but mindless. Many people write about Ace and like to use their own self-understanding to shape him, but inappropriate self-understanding accounts for a bit of weight. So when I read this article, I felt like I had found gold in shit. I liked this article so much. Ace should grow up with everyone's love! You must give me a lot of happiness! 😢I've read all the fanfics, but if Ace can't be happy, then I'm still reading shitty fanfics. The biggest regret is that when I clicked in to read it, I didn't pay attention to whether it was finished before, so I subconsciously regarded it as finished. But I was so happy that I watched it in the middle of the night, and suddenly found that it was not finished, and it was tied. I was so anxious that I was scratching my head. The author should stop taking a rest. Please finish it in one day! 😢

It's great to watch. Ace's character is super thoughtful and a bit sadistic. I really cried all the time. Baby Ace 😢 Garp also cries easily. The cp is a bit complicated, that is, I hope it doesn't exist (continue the original work to maintain the setting) and I hope there is (just like the article says, someone can serve as an anchor to hold Ace). I hope the emotional line can be handled well. This kind of unclear cp writing and matching cp at the end is easy to make mistakes (I'm just worried, because I really like this article)

Ace's character is so cute [Bird Eater] [Bird Eater] [Bird Eater] No OOC!! And the writing is very good 😳😳 The writing is very good, and the people are so three-dimensional!! 😘😘😘 As soon as I checked in last night, I saw that it was finished at four in the morning, hahahahahahahahaha, the author, please give it a try!! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The writing is very good, and the characters are very close to each other. It is an authentic fanfic. There is no body snatching, no leather case, and no OC. It just writes another possibility of Ace being reborn in the world of pirates after he was 15 years old. Support, I hope you can keep writing.

Oh my god, you must keep updating. There are not many One Piece fandoms that are so logical, complete, and emotionally delicate. I give 4 stars because I heard that Tomato removes the highest and lowest scores.

Ace's character design is really cute, delicious, eat it, eat it😋

Nice! Delicious fanfic! It's a bit hard to accept that there is a suspected emotional line, but the self-consistency of the plot and logic is so delicious. The sense of fate of struggling with fate and being pushed back to the original position by the big hand of fate makes people want to stop. Fragrant rice (knock on the bowl)

It's a very well written book, and it describes Ace's struggle against reality in a very detailed way. 👍🏻I just want to update it quickly and kill Teach. I hope Ace doesn't have a love line.

Although it's quite good-looking, this Ace book won't have any CP, right? I don't think I remember it, I feel a little bit uncomfortable, 🥺

The plot is super good. Although it is really difficult to write about Ace being a marine, the teacher's grasp of it is indeed impeccable. At first glance, it seems to be very different from the original work, but in many places it is rounded out in unexpected ways. In summary, it is a rare and good book.