Urban: In Ten Days, I'll Become a Divine Transformation Expert

The writing technique is still immature. It is recommended to reduce the line description of psychological activities and instead use language and behavior to show the character's psychology. Especially the handling of the shock of the characters, "This... This..." Appears repeatedly, which is not in line with the cultivation and habits of those in high positions, and the reactions of different characters should not be too similar. But the creativity is good and commendable

Under normal circumstances, it is basically difficult to find when you go out to sea. The protagonist does not need to consider the return journey. He will abandon the boat halfway and just bring a wooden board to survive. Three days of water and food are enough. It is enough to drift randomly on the sea without docking.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, and I dare to write about it, but I always feel like there are a lot of flaws. Also, you must have used Al, not just hand rubbing. But it is this creativity that deserves 4 stars. Come on author, thank you!

Not bad. Don't give up just because the protagonist is stupid, because he is not the one responsible for intelligence. There will be several people responsible for intelligence to help him plan later.

It seems fine so far, more than 150 chapters have been completed, but the author seems to be planning to let the protagonist continue to play this game. The purpose is to survive to give him the strength to survive the tribulation period. There is no plan to directly give him the invincible strength. Let's see tomorrow's update. If so, the seven stars will be changed. Author, please continue playing the game. Whoever likes this book will read it.

It's best to make progress quickly. I want to see when I succeed. I was really convinced. I persisted for 10 days and started a new round of survival. Why am I always being a grandson? After becoming a grandson with more than 300,000 words, I suddenly became invincible and started to be a grandson again. Pinduoduo cuts a knife, gold coins and diamonds, are you so afraid of the unwritten ones?

Your subject matter is really awesome. If you are not stupid, it will definitely be a masterpiece. But it may get 404. No wonder the update is so slow.

I have read Chapter 35 so far. My idea is to tell Wuchang frankly that they can go back and become stronger, and let them think about whether they should stand against the protagonist. I believe that there is a high probability that they will become friends with the protagonist, but by then the author will not have to write.

The battle of wits and courage during the escape is indeed very interesting to watch. It's a bit like a spy novel. It reincarnates again and again, collecting information and loyal people, increasing the winning rate little by little. After success, there is also the refreshing point of liquidation. Overall, it is very interesting to watch.

Is there a complete ending to this kind of novel? I couldn't get enough of it after reading half of it.