I'm a Respectable Evil God, and I Only Accept Legal Sacrifices

Write slowly and pace yourself. There can be less pretense than the plot in the future. Some content can be supplemented with more vocabulary. For example, when you and your sister go home for dinner, don't just eat in the previous paragraph and lie down in bed to sleep in the next paragraph. Add an extra transition. Control the rhythm well, don't burst out suddenly and then suppress the combat power. If you feel that the emotional scene is not good, just skip it or skip it.

I have read Chapter 43 so far. For me, it can be rated as a good one. Goldfinger and the opening are considered novel. The supporting characters are still a bit smart, but the plot has some minor flaws, but as long as you don't mind it, you can still watch it. The main thing I want to remind the author is that when writing this kind of urban novel based on the earth and the protagonist has normal outlook on life, if a demon eats an innocent person, he will definitely die, so there cannot be any statements biased towards it. If it were a novel about other different worlds, no one would delve into who killed how many innocent people, because there would be no sense of involvement. But as long as you write a parallel world based on the earth and it is very similar, then most readers will involuntarily enter it and judge the plot with their own three views. It is commonly known as using your brain, so you need to write more logically, so as not to make people feel unreasonable for a moment. The main representative part is that after the protagonist reports to the police that the culprit of the extraordinary case is the cat on campus, he can't find several cats for several days. What about the surveillance? And the school hasn't informed students to stay away from cats? And cats can be fed by humans to produce dozens of infected people? There are others that I won't list one by one. In short, it is still worth reading during the book shortage period, mainly because it is free, so cheers for the author.

It's okay, the setting is similar to the previous ones but has its own thing, but it feels a bit vague. For example, in the first two chapters, after the cyclist crashes into the protagonist's car, the subsequent descriptions have no visual sense and do not match the characters. It is recommended that the main character not use special symbols in his inner words.

It's a good read and I'll have fun reading it. The title of the book is a bit too late.

There are currently 62 chapters. At least the content is well written so far. I hope it won't collapse in the future. But looking at this introduction, I thought the protagonist was behind the scenes, influencing the world as a god🤦🤦🤦🤦It turned out to be just a "transaction" rather than a "sacrifice/blessing"

The writing style, plot, and feeling are all pretty good. It's just a matter of learning right and wrong. If you wait and practice hard, or run around to find opportunities, your development speed will be much faster. It feels like I can't write without going to school or to suppress the protagonist's development speed.

Very good, as long as the author is not lazy in using AI, he can become a classic if he continues!

Let me comment on this book, "I am not an expert in this field, but I still want to express my opinion. After I carefully read your question and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to answer it. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this field."

Recommended, it actually looks pretty cool, there's nothing wrong with it, and Bigger looks pretty high, but I don't know how to describe this combat power.

It feels like a cool novel, but the plot and emotional descriptions are really good, and it looks good [laughs crookedly] [laughs crookedly] But I want to say, do you want this outrageous, new author to write something so beautiful?