(The ratings have just come out + Invincible Style + Freshman + Lezi Immortal + High-profile God + Sanqing Immortals Haunted)
Muscular ManSocial AnimalBig StarZero
One day, freshman Chen Chuan noticed that entries like this appeared one after another on people's heads.
And he can freely buy and sell these entries.
All living beings prayed to the immortals and gods, and only Chen Chuan answered them.
Mortals offer [wealth] in exchange for the blessing of [health].
The extraordinary person offered [Muscle Strengthening] in exchange for the blessing of [Aura Extraction].
The evil god of the abyss offered [loyalty] in exchange for the blessing of [freedom].
After smelting the ordinary entries, Chen Chuan obtained evil special entries one after another.
[Muscle Strengthening + Aura Strengthening] = [Emperor Engine]
[Muscles + Bones + Epidermis + Agility + Nerves + Strengthening of Five Internal Organs] = [Innocent Golden Elixir]
[Beast language + Spiritual sound] = [Heart voice perception]
In the era of spiritual recovery, his painting style gradually changed!
Until one day, a man carrying the entry "Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun" slowly walked towards Chen Chuan.
"Fellow Taoist, may your blessings be immeasurable!"
Reader comments
Write slowly and pace yourself.
There can be less pretense than the plot in the future.
Some content can be supplemented with more vocabulary. For example, when you and your sister go home for dinner, don't just eat in the previous paragraph and lie down in bed to sleep in the next paragraph. Add an extra transition.
Control the rhythm well, don't burst out suddenly and then suppress the combat power.
If you feel that the emotional scene is not well written, you can just brush it off or leave it out.
I have read Chapter 43 so far. For me, it can be rated as fodder. Goldfinger and the opening are considered novel. The supporting characters are still a bit smart, but the plot has some minor flaws, but as long as you don't mind it, you can still watch it.
The main thing I want to remind the author is that when writing this kind of urban novel based on the earth and the protagonist has normal views, if a demon eats an innocent person, he will definitely die, and there cannot be any statements biased towards it. If it were a novel about other different worlds, no one would delve into who killed how many innocent people, because there would be no sense of involvement. But as long as you write a parallel world based on the earth and it is very similar, then most readers will involuntarily enter it and judge the plot with their own three perspectives. It is commonly known as using your brain, so you need to write more logically, so as not to make people feel unreasonable for a moment. The main representative part is that after the protagonist reports to the police that the culprit of the extraordinary case is the cat on campus, he unexpectedly cannot find several cats for several days. What about the surveillance? And the school hasn't informed students to stay away from cats? And cats can then be fed by humans to produce dozens of infected people? There are others that I won't list one by one.
In short, it is still worth reading during the book shortage period, mainly because it is free, so cheers for the author.
It's okay, the setting is similar to the previous ones but has its own thing, but it feels a bit vague. For example, in the first two chapters, after the cyclist crashes into the protagonist's car, the subsequent descriptions have no visual sense and do not match the characters. It is recommended that the main character not use special symbols in his inner words.
There are currently 62 chapters. At least the content is well written so far. I hope it won't collapse in the future.
But looking at this introduction, I thought the protagonist was behind the scenes, influencing the world as a god [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] It turns out that it is just a "transaction" rather than a "sacrifice/blessing"
It's a good read and I'll have fun reading it. The title of the book is a bit too late.
Very good, as long as the author is not lazy in using AI, he can become a classic if he continues!
Let me comment on this book, "I am not an expert in this field, but I still want to express my opinion. After I carefully read your question and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to answer it. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this field."
It feels like a cool novel, but the plot and emotional descriptions are really good, and it looks good [laughs crookedly] [laughs crookedly] But I want to say, do you want this outrageous, new author to write something so beautiful?
Goldfinger and the world view are quite interesting, and can satisfy your craving for books.
Gold found in shit 💰
Recommended, it actually looks pretty cool, there's nothing wrong with it, and Bigger looks pretty high, but I don't know how to describe this combat power.
Sure enough, the end of the world is preparation.
It's pretty good, but it updates too slowly.
I admit that what you wrote was very enjoyable, and I also enjoyed reading it.
It's indeed possible, very nice, it has a bookshelf! ! !
It looks really good, very rhythmic
The writing style, plot, and feeling are all pretty good. It's just a matter of learning right and wrong. If you wait and practice hard, or run around to find opportunities, your development speed will be much faster. It feels like I can't write without going to school or to suppress the protagonist's development speed.
A very good novel, the main character is a normal person. He is not a holy father, but he does not kill innocent people indiscriminately either.
I always feel that you have written a book before that enhanced the monster killing and upgrading of the red mist in the world, but that book was later taken off the shelves.
Yes, I can write so well for the first time. Take your time. As long as you keep going, I will most likely not give up.
It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day
It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low?
It's broken, and it's a vicious villain in other places, but it seems to be wise here! The key is that what he did was quite humane, right?
It's okay, at least it makes me feel like I can watch it
It's really good-looking. Although the word count is a little short, I always have the desire to continue reading.
Not bad, very interesting
Awesome no need to say more
Single heroine? Multiple heroines?
I would like to give you a suggestion, don't use brackets like [ ] in mental activities. It looks very funny. I don't see any major problems with other things so far.
Well, it looks good and is well written. Come on, it's best to update it.
Long live the Sanqing Dynasty, may all spirits prosper
Write slowly and pace yourself. There can be less pretense than the plot in the future. Some content can be supplemented with more vocabulary. For example, when you and your sister go home for dinner, don't just eat in the previous paragraph and lie down in bed to sleep in the next paragraph. Add an extra transition. Control the rhythm well, don't burst out suddenly and then suppress the combat power. If you feel that the emotional scene is not well written, you can just brush it off or leave it out.
I have read Chapter 43 so far. For me, it can be rated as fodder. Goldfinger and the opening are considered novel. The supporting characters are still a bit smart, but the plot has some minor flaws, but as long as you don't mind it, you can still watch it. The main thing I want to remind the author is that when writing this kind of urban novel based on the earth and the protagonist has normal views, if a demon eats an innocent person, he will definitely die, and there cannot be any statements biased towards it. If it were a novel about other different worlds, no one would delve into who killed how many innocent people, because there would be no sense of involvement. But as long as you write a parallel world based on the earth and it is very similar, then most readers will involuntarily enter it and judge the plot with their own three perspectives. It is commonly known as using your brain, so you need to write more logically, so as not to make people feel unreasonable for a moment. The main representative part is that after the protagonist reports to the police that the culprit of the extraordinary case is the cat on campus, he unexpectedly cannot find several cats for several days. What about the surveillance? And the school hasn't informed students to stay away from cats? And cats can then be fed by humans to produce dozens of infected people? There are others that I won't list one by one. In short, it is still worth reading during the book shortage period, mainly because it is free, so cheers for the author.
It's okay, the setting is similar to the previous ones but has its own thing, but it feels a bit vague. For example, in the first two chapters, after the cyclist crashes into the protagonist's car, the subsequent descriptions have no visual sense and do not match the characters. It is recommended that the main character not use special symbols in his inner words.
There are currently 62 chapters. At least the content is well written so far. I hope it won't collapse in the future. But looking at this introduction, I thought the protagonist was behind the scenes, influencing the world as a god [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] It turns out that it is just a "transaction" rather than a "sacrifice/blessing"
It's a good read and I'll have fun reading it. The title of the book is a bit too late.
Very good, as long as the author is not lazy in using AI, he can become a classic if he continues!
Let me comment on this book, "I am not an expert in this field, but I still want to express my opinion. After I carefully read your question and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to answer it. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this field."
It feels like a cool novel, but the plot and emotional descriptions are really good, and it looks good [laughs crookedly] [laughs crookedly] But I want to say, do you want this outrageous, new author to write something so beautiful?
Goldfinger and the world view are quite interesting, and can satisfy your craving for books. Gold found in shit 💰
Recommended, it actually looks pretty cool, there's nothing wrong with it, and Bigger looks pretty high, but I don't know how to describe this combat power.
Sure enough, the end of the world is preparation.
It's pretty good, but it updates too slowly.
I admit that what you wrote was very enjoyable, and I also enjoyed reading it.
It's indeed possible, very nice, it has a bookshelf! ! !
It looks really good, very rhythmic
The writing style, plot, and feeling are all pretty good. It's just a matter of learning right and wrong. If you wait and practice hard, or run around to find opportunities, your development speed will be much faster. It feels like I can't write without going to school or to suppress the protagonist's development speed.
A very good novel, the main character is a normal person. He is not a holy father, but he does not kill innocent people indiscriminately either.
I always feel that you have written a book before that enhanced the monster killing and upgrading of the red mist in the world, but that book was later taken off the shelves.
Yes, I can write so well for the first time. Take your time. As long as you keep going, I will most likely not give up.
It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day
It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low?
It's broken, and it's a vicious villain in other places, but it seems to be wise here! The key is that what he did was quite humane, right?
It's okay, at least it makes me feel like I can watch it
It's really good-looking. Although the word count is a little short, I always have the desire to continue reading.
Not bad, very interesting
Awesome no need to say more
Single heroine? Multiple heroines?
I would like to give you a suggestion, don't use brackets like [ ] in mental activities. It looks very funny. I don't see any major problems with other things so far.
Well, it looks good and is well written. Come on, it's best to update it.
Long live the Sanqing Dynasty, may all spirits prosper