【代向】乙女短篇，吃一口吧

God... I like it... It's not just a cookie-cutter template and character design, it's really trying to improve the logic of the story and portray the male protagonist. The various descriptions of "I" are also very easy to substitute. The most important thing is that it is very female-centered and does not have the discomfort of literature about wives. I will always follow! Yes, another advantage is that it doesn't just focus on emotional development and divorces reality. The horror game version expands the world view at the end, which really suits my liking.

So delicious😋The writing is very good and delicate. Although the settings are very common, the teachers have written them with different flavors... After reading the first two articles, I just want to say that inferiority complex is the best dowry for a man! Then this second part really made me happy. The mute stray dog ​​was domesticated by me into a docile domestic dog. It really made me dance like crazy and wanted to chat with the teacher for a whole night of self-study! Why did I have to discover this book when I was just a baby? It's not enough to read or eat TT

The author's writing style is very good, the plot is very smooth, and he tells it like a story. I really like this style ~ the light fragrance, like the smell of bamboo blown by the summer wind, is very refreshing and comfortable I really like the character backgrounds in the second and third chapters o(≧v≦)o. It's a bit novel (≧∇≦), I've never seen anything like it before. Although the 23 articles written by the author are time travel stories, they feel inexplicably close to real life, and the detailed descriptions are particularly good... Like the dirty snow left by people walking on the roadside, or the various steps of making tofu, it is very immersive. I love it~ After reading this article before going to bed, I put down my phone and closed my eyes, feeling a faint sense of happiness.

Super super super super super super super super nice otome novel! This is the most comfortable and beautiful otome novel I have ever read among all the otome novels on Tomato! Strongly Strongly Strongly Strongly Highly Highly Recommended! ! ! I want to kiss the author!

I felt so comfortable reading it. It's my favorite B-generation novel in Tomato. I particularly like the speed and way of emotional advancement! ! ! And the author is working hard to improve the worldview. I like it. Author, please write more. I really follow it in Japan. . Is it really possible that the interrupted article didn't read the synopsis? Woohoo, wooooooo, I'm just curious about how it will develop. .

I sincerely invite all otome lovers to read this article. The author's wife's writing is really very immersive. The more you read, the more you read it. As the plot develops, it becomes more and more immersive. You can't stop reading it once you start reading! I will always follow my wife, please send me more [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]! ! !

It's very beautiful. The story about Yin Su made me cry. The plot of Yin Qiao, Li Xiao and Yin Su in the original novel "Bitter Winter" really makes people feel that their lives are miserable. It is obvious that all three people are good, but the ending is tragic. Fortunately, I changed the ending, which makes my heart warm.

It's so refreshing... The teacher is a god. I felt so happy after reading the first article. I took all my brother and younger brother into consideration, as well as the pull between me and them. Oh, I went, I love you goddess. Especially that brother is so gentle and I love him so much. And that younger brother's little tricks are so cute, and I was so coquettish when my younger brother faced me later (nosebleeds). I'm really begging you, please come and watch it. It's a masterpiece. It's so beautiful. I couldn't wait to burst into flames even before I finished the first chapter.

This is the most gentle and delicate book I have read since I read Otodai. The ones I have read before are all fast-paced and fun. Of course, those are also very interesting, but this one is long-lasting, eloquent, and very warm. I have read the third story so far, and I like the second one the most. The gentleness and kindness of human nature are really well written, and there is no malicious plot. You can also see the author's thinking in it, and it feels like a close friend. The wording is even better! ! ! It's a very comfortable writing method and style that makes people feel no discomfort at all. Author, I love you!

I especially like Bai Yueguang's article! ! ! Shao Chen's portrayal is so vivid that it's hard not to fall in love with him! ! What's the best thing in the year of low self-esteem! The author's writing style is also very good, I look forward to other chapters in the future!

I think it is really exciting and delicious, and I feel that it would be great if it could be made into a second-tier game (but I don't think it should be made into a second-tier game, because there may be deviations between the characters I imagined and the characters I created, and the author's writing style and my imagination are more interesting. Hehe) It's really good-looking, highly recommended! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (There is an incomplete scene in the middle. Ouch, I'm so anxious. I really want to see what happened in the middle [crying]. Can sh please let us kind-hearted authors and readers who love to read articles, please let us go, I really beg you)

Who knows how much I like the fourth chapter! ! ! ! ! ! ! I give all five stars to the fourth article, I really like it, it's so delicate, delicious, and pokey xp I love it so much! ! ! ! ! ! It's so good that I've been wondering. Is it really the only classic literature I've seen on Tomato that depicts all the details so beautifully? I suggest that everyone who likes to see strong women and weak men read this article. It's really not a loss to invest in it. You will thank me after reading it! ! ! ! ! ! !

I read the second and third stories. They were both delicious. Super delicious. The author described it very well. I skipped the first story because I don't like many people. Both stories are amazing, and the emotional drama is the best. Whether it's the interaction between young lovers or the live action of the senior group, the development of the story is very suitable for the background era. I have to say that it is very interesting to watch. The new stories are packed and beautiful to enjoy [shy] To sum it up in one word, it's super delicious! ! ! [Adoration]

Oh my gosh, it's a huge, huge, huge, delicious article. I don't think Otoshiro is very fond of short stories, but this one is really, really well written, with a plot and male protagonist that are not cliché at all. The writing is light and there are no major ups and downs. It just makes people feel like a long stream of water. The first article is very delicious, and the second article is even more invincible. I have never tasted this kind of taste. For the third article, I would like to call the author the king of short stories. Is there any character who can feel both young and old at the same time? [Crazy][crazy] This book is really well written. Are all the stories written by Mommy so touching? I originally thought that after watching so many plots, I wouldn't be interested in short stories anymore. But I didn't expect that every story in this book made me feel very fresh and interesting. The characters and stories in the book are very logical. They are not written for the sake of writing, nor are they written for the sake of love. Although sometimes there will be some content that I personally feel is a little bit subtle. But overall it was very unforgettable. Almost every time I finish reading a story, I have to stop and take a breath. Because the emotions he left for you will bring you endless aftertaste. Overall, it's very sweet. No matter what character it is, the author can control it very well. Although there are some chapters that are a little bit awkward and I can't stand it, it's still very interesting.

This must be heaven. Every volume is written in my heart. Why is this rice so delicious? The author is from God. I like you, the author. Why is your writing so good? [Blowing Kiss] The characters are simple and clear. I like it very much. It's really good-looking. People who are obsessed with the second generation must give it a look!

It's a fairy tale, the emotional description is very delicate, the length is short but the plot is smooth. It feels very good to the other generation. It feels a bit like prose. It can be seen that the teacher's writing skills are very good! And in this era when crazy criticism of yandere is popular, there are not many people who can write a normal male protagonist. Compared with other articles, the style is really different, and the writing is very delicate! Highly recommended!

This is the most delicious meal I've had at Tomato in a long time. Every time I watch it, I wish I had lost my memory and watched it N times again! ! ! The writing is delicate and smooth! The plot is also very smooth, and the emotional progression is very normal, especially the ambiguous pulling period (silent scream!!!). Every world is particularly to my liking. I really like it so much! ! ! After working hard every day and reading the article, my waist no longer hurts, my legs no longer ache, and my head no longer hurts. Just read it! I can't stop whining, woo woo woo, can the boss come back to feed the child? The child is starving to death. Why should the boss come back? [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

The author is God, the author is God, the author is God, it cannot be refuted, it cannot be refuted, it cannot be refuted! Everyone vomited their food to see this. The author's literary talent is overflowing, it's so refreshing, so refreshing, so refreshing. The gravity department is awesome! Goddess, please add another chapter😭😭I love you Goddess. My little brother worships and worships you. Goddess, I stumble towards you ♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿ ♿I stumbled towards you♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿I stumbled towards you♿♿

Those who like Otoshi must not miss this book! ! ! I particularly like the characters in the fourth chapter and the Western Fantasy chapter. They are so fun to watch on my XP. They are so delicious ~ I have read a lot of second-generation movies and I think the author's style is the best [Admiration] "My" character is not particularly radical, it feels natural and natural. The male protagonist's character and character are also very good. The author's highlights are also clearly marked (so considerate) and easy to read. Although there is no must-have highlight list at all, I didn't expect it to end so soon. I can't bear to leave it [crying] [crying] [crying] If a new article is published, I will look forward to it! [Sending Hearts]

It's so beautiful… It's really, really good to watch. It's not an embarrassing plot. I fell in love with it out of nowhere. The characters are all vivid and the writing is awesome. It's very to my liking. Oh, I can't say it. Anyway, it's really, really, really good-looking. Goddess, I will always support you….

The previous stories didn't catch me too much, so I just skipped to the last one, which is so delicious [Adoration] Although I was shocked at the beginning, I really felt that he became like a human being because of me, and the house slowly came to life. His world will not keep looping because of those memories because I am here... I see you.

It's so beautiful... Every character description is flesh-and-blood, and I ate the food cooked by the teacher! I will keep following up! The few lines in Shao Chen's story that describe my escape from marriage are amazing. I read them over and over again and found them wonderful. The writing is really great! ! !

Can the teacher see his own face when he looks in the mirror? Because Kannamoto no image [sends the heart] [sends the heart], the writing is really good. Why are so few people reading it? Come and read this otome novel! ! ! I really like the unique plumpness of each character's portrayal. Every character design has touched my heart, especially the one about Koike, it's so cute! ! ! ! So cute! ! ! ! It can be seen that the teacher really loves the characters he writes. The writing style is also very delicate, and the emotional lines are also long and flowing. I like this kind of thing very much. The teacher must continue to write! Waiting for the teacher's new book [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's delicious. The second part is really good. The child was saved. Good people are living happily. Those who read it will feel warm in their hearts.

It kept poking me. The writing style is beautiful, without any pretense, and all kinds of descriptions flow out naturally. I especially like to follow the words and imagine the pictures when reading, and the third one is even more beautiful to me... The story and characters are completely unconventional. Goddess I like you

I have been reading this book for a while. The character of the male protagonist in each small unit is very good, the storyline is particularly interesting, and the writing is very good. But I don't know why. Every substituting article always feels like there is an independent female protagonist. I can't bring it in, and the sense of substitution is not very strong. It always makes me feel that the story in it has nothing to do with me.

Shocking and delicious, each story ends with a very heartwarming ending. I like this Jianghu chapter the most. It is a refreshing novel that has accumulated over the years. Author, please don't be tired or idle. I'm looking forward to the next short story.ヾ(･ω･*)ﾉ

It's so delicious and beautiful. The setting of each article is so wonderful, so novel, and I love it. It can be written about any subject and is suitable for all types of men! ! I particularly like the ancient chapter. In fact, I like every chapter! ! Follow it If I could, I would give 100 10 points! ! Full of faintness! ! You all come and see

It's very beautiful, the author is very good at writing, and it fits my XP very well. Although each unit is very short, it doesn't feel like falling in love for no reason. It's not abrupt. The author is very good at writing, and the woman is usually the one who takes the initiative and is in control. It's a very good book. We Otome's just rely on the teacher to make delicious rice.

Perfect bedtime reading! It can be felt that the author has some skills, at least the idioms will not be used incorrectly. I like the characters very much, and there are light and emotional plots. Even some places that are completely unnecessary have been separated into paragraphs, one sentence at a time, which doesn't look very good^ The author must keep writing, okay? There are very few articles that are not brainless and logical. Ignore those who say you are bad, there will always be readers who like your writing style and setting^