The evaluation didn't go well, so I'm not updating this here anymore. (See The Dark Lord's White Moonlight next door)
“That place will eventually belong to a ghost.” The mistress of the Black family shrieked, pointing straight at the position beside the Dark Lord.
Who was she? Young Selwyn asked herself. She began searching for the woman's name. Above her, a pair of scarlet eyes watched it all without blinking.
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A silver ring gleamed on the man's right ring finger, as piercing and dazzling as the girl's resolute words had been long ago.
He clenched the never-closing eye in his palm until it sank into his flesh and merged with his pulse.
Hate or love, it didn't matter. Even if she was dead, even if her soul had faded away, she could only ever be his ghost.
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[White-moonlight romance + love and hate intertwined + GB/BG/GL + Mary Sue golden finger + apologies to everyone + Marauders' Era]
I have a talent for writing over-the-top prose. If you don't like it, please don't flame me.
The heroine is my darling, and I started writing this book to give every character from the original a happy ending and keep them all alive. The first section (the first ten chapters) is pure setup. Starting with chapter eleven, even I think it gets really good, so hurry and read it.
