Zhang Xingchen, a contemporary young man, found himself transformed into a fool in the courtyard full of love when he woke up. Let's see how he writes his own story in this era.
This article is not too violent and focuses on daily life.
Reader comments
The time traveler travels through the Silly Pillar. Comes with frozen space.
The writing style is warm and soothing, not so violent. The characters who have appeared so far are relatively consistent with the original work. The first uncle is a good old man who likes to meddle in other people's business. Jia Dongxu has a little personality but can afford to let things go. Xu Damao is a villain who never succeeds in doing bad things but is unyielding [laughs]
In addition, other characters are also relatively restrained. Even if they conflict with the protagonist, there is no drama about revenge or private curses. At most, the protagonist cooked meat, and Jia Zhang cursed a few times. The protagonist was careless and made the neighbors hungry.
There is no door-to-door asking for meat, no forcing others to call Zhuzi, no reporting, and none of the common nonsense of Siheyuan fandom. It is just a plain and genuine article, which is refreshing in this era. It even makes people feel that the author has not read much fan fiction.
Ps: I think the handling of rainwater is very good. I acknowledge Yuyu's bad qualities, but don't bring future perspectives to the present, and decide to educate them well. When I watched the original drama, I disliked the character of Yu Yu. If the protagonist in the drama would blame all the faults on He Yuzhu and then lick the rain, I don't think the new protagonist could lick the rain better than He Yuzhu, and the ending would be more perfect than that of He Yuzhu.
The writing is very good, and the story is eloquent. If it doesn't come up, it will be a fight to the death. I don't know why this kind of book is almost impossible to find! They all just talk nonsense about the past life for a few chapters or are demonized and disgusting. If you want to read something normal like this, you can't find it! !
It's quite good-looking, unlike the others, which are always fighting with the old men in the yard, which makes it boring to watch.
I read Chapter 22, but I have never seen anything written about the improvement of Silly Zhu's cooking skills. In fact, in this kind of daily novel, the improvement of cooking skills is a very exciting point and can give readers good positive feedback.
It has just been tied, but it is true that I haven't written about the improvement of Sha Zhu's cooking skills. Author, you really need to think carefully about how to improve Sha Zhu's cooking skills in a good and reasonable way. You can refer to some dishes from later generations. After all, it is a time travel. Even if you don't know how to cook it, you must have seen some videos. Another thing is that as time goes by, you cook more dishes, and your cooking skills are also improving unknowingly.
When we were making dinner for the reception or making noodles for the banquet, the supporting character casually mentioned that Master He's craftsmanship was better than before.
Good, good, good, good, good, good
It's not such a low score. It's well written.
Not too bad, not too angry
Where does so much violence come from in life?
Take a good look at the children's homework. After they finish their homework, send it to me. I'll ask them if they have a chance and if they don't have time, they can watch the TV. How many phone calls come to me?
It's okay, there are no other time-travelers, the boss is Tian, and he is the second, that arrogant one.
The time traveler travels through the Silly Pillar. Comes with frozen space. The writing style is warm and soothing, not so violent. The characters who have appeared so far are relatively consistent with the original work. The first uncle is a good old man who likes to meddle in other people's business. Jia Dongxu has a little personality but can afford to let things go. Xu Damao is a villain who never succeeds in doing bad things but is unyielding [laughs] In addition, other characters are also relatively restrained. Even if they conflict with the protagonist, there is no drama about revenge or private curses. At most, the protagonist cooked meat, and Jia Zhang cursed a few times. The protagonist was careless and made the neighbors hungry. There is no door-to-door asking for meat, no forcing others to call Zhuzi, no reporting, and none of the common nonsense of Siheyuan fandom. It is just a plain and genuine article, which is refreshing in this era. It even makes people feel that the author has not read much fan fiction. Ps: I think the handling of rainwater is very good. I acknowledge Yuyu's bad qualities, but don't bring future perspectives to the present, and decide to educate them well. When I watched the original drama, I disliked the character of Yu Yu. If the protagonist in the drama would blame all the faults on He Yuzhu and then lick the rain, I don't think the new protagonist could lick the rain better than He Yuzhu, and the ending would be more perfect than that of He Yuzhu.
The writing is very good, and the story is eloquent. If it doesn't come up, it will be a fight to the death. I don't know why this kind of book is almost impossible to find! They all just talk nonsense about the past life for a few chapters or are demonized and disgusting. If you want to read something normal like this, you can't find it! !
It's quite good-looking, unlike the others, which are always fighting with the old men in the yard, which makes it boring to watch.
I read Chapter 22, but I have never seen anything written about the improvement of Silly Zhu's cooking skills. In fact, in this kind of daily novel, the improvement of cooking skills is a very exciting point and can give readers good positive feedback. It has just been tied, but it is true that I haven't written about the improvement of Sha Zhu's cooking skills. Author, you really need to think carefully about how to improve Sha Zhu's cooking skills in a good and reasonable way. You can refer to some dishes from later generations. After all, it is a time travel. Even if you don't know how to cook it, you must have seen some videos. Another thing is that as time goes by, you cook more dishes, and your cooking skills are also improving unknowingly. When we were making dinner for the reception or making noodles for the banquet, the supporting character casually mentioned that Master He's craftsmanship was better than before.
Good, good, good, good, good, good
It's not such a low score. It's well written.
Not too bad, not too angry
Where does so much violence come from in life?
Take a good look at the children's homework. After they finish their homework, send it to me. I'll ask them if they have a chance and if they don't have time, they can watch the TV. How many phone calls come to me?
It's okay, there are no other time-travelers, the boss is Tian, and he is the second, that arrogant one.