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I have read ten chapters so far, and the content is very rich and a bit complicated. The background is not explained. The team is divided into the main team and the tail car. The main team members do not show much appearance. It seems that only the protagonist is working in the tail car. It's okay for the home team to use the tail car as cannon fodder, but does the cannon fodder have to be followed by the main force so that the main force can benefit? The current writing feels like there is no protagonist, and the cannon fodder in the tail car will die. The writing is interesting, but I can't read it
The protagonist lives worse than a dog
Messy
I can't understand what's written.
Sorry, I can't understand
I can't stand it at all. The team made it too complicated and even arranged numbers. These simple things are the most taboo to be complicated
Start with a broken eDonkey, upgrade a battery car and deduct Soso's
Literation of parts one by one
I have read ten chapters so far, and the content is very rich and a bit complicated. The background is not explained. The team is divided into the main team and the tail car. The main team members do not show much appearance. It seems that only the protagonist is working in the tail car. It's okay for the home team to use the tail car as cannon fodder, but does the cannon fodder have to be followed by the main force so that the main force can benefit? The current writing feels like there is no protagonist, and the cannon fodder in the tail car will die. The writing is interesting, but I can't read it
The protagonist lives worse than a dog
Messy
I can't understand what's written.
Sorry, I can't understand
I can't stand it at all. The team made it too complicated and even arranged numbers. These simple things are the most taboo to be complicated
Start with a broken eDonkey, upgrade a battery car and deduct Soso's Literation of parts one by one
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