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It's quite interesting. Although there are some bugs and bloody scenes, it is indeed made by hand, and the imagination is quite interesting. It's getting more and more bloody. Your book is not originally about daily life. If you don't know how to write about daily life, just write less, or even not write at all. Why do you have to write such a poorly written plot? I waited until 12 o'clock to update, and you showed me this? The plot of the female character was also deleted. Do you think it would be less bloody without a female character? How many days have you been writing about buying a car? It seems that the bloody plot is coming again.

The book is a good book, novel, unlike the previous Shouyuan deal The protagonist's character and characterization are realistic and consistent with reality. The character of the person who just got the golden finger. Although I have only seen dozens of chapters, I can feel the protagonist's growth. Come on ⛽! Write quickly, write quickly!

It's nice to see, but how many days have passed and the official hasn't reacted to such a big thing? Don't you think it's very fragmented?

Chapter 30 mentions the ex-girlfriend three times. This is a poisonous point. Editor, please take it easy. If you lose one star now, it will not stop if it appears again [smile]

I really like the content setting, and I finished it in one go. However, I still want to make some suggestions: Since the protagonist is behind the scenes, I hope to give him less perspective. When there are new things, give the perspective of the protagonist and introduce it a little. Most of the content should be given to the outside world. Every time there are many good things introduced from the outside perspective, and then switch back to the protagonist, it feels like it is exciting at the beginning, but then it disappears after a while. I hope the author can give more evaluation or usage of the app and products from the outside perspective, so that it will look better.

It's good to watch, the title is quite novel, and it doesn't seem to have any bad points so far, because all the scenes involving female characters have been deleted, and it has caught up with the big army [full] [full] [full]

The setting is novel and eye-catching: the idea of ​​"monetizing lifespan" is very attractive, and the quantification of the value of life breaks the routine of traditional systematic writing. The rhythm is steady and refreshing: the lifespan value is gradual, and there is no blind accumulation of exaggerated data. The protagonist acts decisively, has three correct views, and focuses on his career. Pure without a heroine: It focuses on the game of survival and personal development, which is in line with the reading preferences of some readers. The quality is not yet stable: a score of 6.0 Indicates that there may be jerky writing or logical loopholes in the early stage, which need to be made up for by subsequent plots. The volume is relatively light: it currently only has 249,000 words. The worldview and system have not yet been fully developed, and there is a risk of water injection or collapse in the middle and later stages. Audience limitation: The extreme egoism and dark style may dissuade some readers who are looking for light reading.

It looks good so far. I hope the author can make some setting logic more rigorous. After all, this kind of novel is too setting-heavy.

So far, it's pretty good. There's nothing too big of a surprise. It's nice to look at.

The Baicao Garden is full of poisonous weeds, so you must try them.

Well, what can I say, the plot is good but a bit like the classic Dragon King with a Crooked Mouth, which may be a refreshing point for some boys, but those like me who don't like this kind of emotional line should run away. Is there any other similar love line? Thank you. Thank you🙏

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

It is recommended that the author make a patch so that the lifespan can only go up but not down when redeemed. For example, if you spend 5 million for the first time, you cannot exchange it for less than 5 million for the second time. Otherwise, the unlimited renewal is too unreasonable. The same goes for selling. It cannot be sold lower than the first sale price. This can also leave a way for ordinary people. The mall recommends not buying items that are too outrageous. To be honest, the storage ring is already a bit over the top. You can buy some functional items, such as short-term memory amplification, healing, and permanent props. Don't open too big a hole, otherwise it will collapse quickly in the later period.

You can watch it, but you can't use your brain [face covering] (This is the second book of the same type recently) I feel that this type of book is best behind the scenes, otherwise, although it can be rounded out later, the problem is that it feels too...

It's not bad, although it's a bit small and imprecise, but it's still fun to watch without thinking [Thinking]

Not bad, the setting is quite interesting. Because the settings of previous similar books were actually quite bad. I find this quite interesting, it's the first time I've seen it set up. Overall, I felt that the speed was a little slow, but nothing too big was still watchable. I hope what I write later will be interesting.

The theme of this time trading novel is so novel! Trading time as a commodity is something I have never seen before. In this world, the value of time is redefined, everyone's destiny is changed due to time trading, and it is full of infinite possibilities and surprises. The author's imagination is simply amazing, creating such a unique and fascinating story that you won't be able to put it down once you pick it up!

The writing is quite impressive, but the number of words is still too few. I'll add it to my bookshelf and read it again in three months.

Not bad. I seem to have seen a similar book before, but the reviews were all negative, so I didn't read it. I saw this book today, and all the reviews were positive. After reading it, it's really good, but there are too few updates.

Although the score is low, it is indeed very beautiful, because if there are any loopholes, the author will patch them, and then the protagonist is also growing, and there are some small poisonous spots, which are all because the protagonist has not grown up in the front, and there is a risk of exposing himself, but they will disappear later.

Well written. ,, Am I the first to comment?

Wouldn't it be better if it could be linked with the country? The invitation code can be specified, so that leaders who are important to our country and scientists in some key fields can use it first, buy life spans, and then let the country plan who can exchange life spans and who can exchange money. In this way, the protagonist's mission is also guaranteed, and he can contribute to the country without worrying about his status and security.

It's pretty good so far, but I don't know what new plot changes will happen in the future.

Although there are many minor logical problems, the later plot and ending are also a bit too sudden and hasty. But the idea is still very good.

Not bad, not bad, the subject matter is novel, the more I read, the more I like it 👍

It's pretty cool. I've never seen anything like this before. I think it's pretty cool at the moment. I don't know if it will be ugly in the future. I'm following up on updates.

I have a terminal illness and only a few months left to live. After the disease is cured, there are still a few months left to live. So have you recovered from your illness?

An underrated book, similar to the theme of Pawnshop No. 8

I'm a bitch and I love watching it. I wanted to give it a full six-star rating. It was incredible to me that the protagonist could still leave the hospital [laughing]

I rarely comment. Please update the author soon. The main word count is too few now.