I'm Just an Invisible Little Boy, So Why Is a Yandere After Me?

Certified by Shennong, the male protagonist is a bit girly, but the look and feel is okay, and the yandere aspect is also very good, please update as soon as possible

What do you think? This is my yandere debut novel.

So far it's pretty good. I've shared some views on yandere literary works with people before. So far, this article is in line with my understanding of this type of work. It limits the influence of the male protagonist's subjective initiative by giving the female protagonist strong energy. The character's motivations are also relatively clear, and the character's emotional changes are relatively coherent. I look forward to the author's next performance 👍 👍 👍 However, out of considerations of plot rationality and logical perception, it would be better to put some restrictions on the male protagonist's personal abilities. For example, the paragraph "thinking about how to beat him without hurting the sports committee of Class 6" is obviously illogical. Later, there are descriptions of uncoordinated limbs and lack of flexibility in the three legs of the two people. However, this is also the author's debut novel and it is normal for it to have some flaws. I hope the author can get better and better and create better text works.

The emotions are well described and the logic is smooth. The plot progresses very naturally, without any inexplicable yandere

Ok ok ok

I slept soundly after watching this 😄

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Very good, Hao Chi😋😋😋

Big cheers for the author

It looks very nice so far