
The System Gave Me Immortality, but I Feel Like I’m About to Die
系统赋我长生,感觉快死了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 531k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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254Chapters
30.3kReads
6.3Score
2.5kShelves
13.9kListens
238.3kReads · all time
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The writing is very good and fluent. I can't say that I read it heartily in one sitting, but it is completed in one go. The problem is that the plot is quite frustrating. It can be said that it is not exciting at all. Well, it is not not at all, but it is nothing compared to the suffering of the protagonist. It is not worth mentioning, and it is not to the level of abuse. Okay, it is also a bit abusive. Anyway, although I read the latest chapter in one go, I have no desire to follow up.
It was so beautiful that men looked at menstruation and women looked crazy. It was the nemesis of depression. It was a vegetative alarm clock. It was so beautiful that tears flowed from the corners of the mouth and became the tide of the Qiantang River. God was my rose. It illuminated my dark life and gave meaning to my world. I ran and jumped. I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20-storey building. I realized that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.
I saw many people in the book reviews saying that this book was not enjoyable enough, that the protagonist was indecisive, and that the plot was dragging, but I thought it was a rare good book. I have been reading online books for more than ten years, and now it is difficult to find a novel that I am willing to read. Most of the male novels are too mindless and entertaining, and there are even more bad books written by female readers. Many people in the reviews of this book said that the book was written by a female author and that it was not good at writing male videos. In fact, I'm not sure what people who read books now like to read. In my opinion, this book is very good. The writing is smooth, the plot advances quickly, and the connection is smooth. Where is the procrastination? Does it take an average of several chapters to kill one person to avoid procrastination?
[Laughs] This book is very realistic and makes us realize the difficulty of living in the world. It is not like those time-travel novels that are fake and empty-handed and always talk about unrealistic things, such as pie in the sky and so on. Just look at the protagonist, the experience he describes, how old he is, and how he has no experience, and how he dies after living to 70 years old. This is a modern society, a true portrayal of a normal person. Reading this book makes you feel like you have traveled thousands of miles in life. The more you read, the more you will understand, and you will understand everything. It is a fairy tale.
I came from the comic book, and I feel that this novel is well written. To be honest, it is better than many novels written nowadays. There is no big poisonous point, and it feels a little bit like Xianni when I read it. I personally like to watch Xianni very much. What I recommend is to watch the comic first, then get to the end, and then come back to read the novel. Just read it from the end of the comic. Personally, I feel that it is quite good, and the rating can actually be higher.
In fact, it's still very good, and it feels like an elixir. The protagonist's character and growth have also improved. In the early stage, he was indeed a little silly and his thoughts were not delicate enough. Some comments said that it was a frustrating story, so I had expectations in mind and it wasn't too uncomfortable to watch. I've just watched the latest chapter. And this frustration is not the frustration of pretending to be a pig and eating feed, it is real frustration, just like nine out of ten times when life is not what you want, there is nothing you can do about it most of the time. The protagonist also makes progress through his own efforts. Whether you like this book or not varies from person to person, but I thought it was okay.
The introduction is just one sentence: the protagonist becomes stronger after dying one after another. He is relatively useless in the early stage, with some small highlights interspersed in the middle, and then it is fun to take off (probably this is the routine). The plot of the book is relatively compact, and some pitfalls can be filled in. The fly in the ointment is that there are few chapters now, and the early stage is a bit frustrating. Of course, there are some exciting points at present. Even after updating a few chapters (40 to 50 chapters), there are also some small exciting points in the middle chapters. You can look forward to the following plots. (There is a high probability that it will become more and more enjoyable, after all, you will become stronger after dying once), but the previous plot has some small poisonous points, it depends on whether you can accept it. I gave 4 stars because there are not many updated chapters, but it seems to be OK at the moment. It depends on how the author Sang writes. Generally speaking, it is worth a try, but this kind of article still needs more chapters to read.
It's really exciting. In the cruel world of immortality, the male protagonist has worked hard for many lives to avenge his wife. The modeling is also great, in line with the original work's fresh appearance and the sense of the vicissitudes of time that have been reincarnated for many lives. After reading the plot, I read the Tomato novel (the poor author's data is not very good), hoping that the release of the comic will bring about a change in him. This style is really like "The Immortal Rebellion", and revenge is indeed the constant routine of Shuangwen. The emotional road is relatively clear, but all his sincere feelings are reserved for his first wife. People will be trapped for one (n) lifetimes by things they can't get when they are young. I think the male protagonist deserves sympathy! Currently being serialized, the mystery of the wife's identity in the introduction has not yet been revealed, so I hope there will be more updates! [Ask for more updates][Original Party][Sparrow Food Masterpiece]
At the moment, it seems to be somewhere between enjoyable and unpleasant. Every reincarnation has a tail that cannot be dealt with. The protagonist always survives to cause trouble even if he wants to kill him. Although I know it is foreshadowing, I still feel a little aggrieved. But in general, if there is foreshadowing, there will be an explosion. It is worth looking forward to [smile]
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