After Returning from Time Travel, the Goddess from Another World Chases Her Husband at the Crematorium

I have seen that as of Chapter 138, the emotional drama written by the author is quite sloppy. It can almost be said that there is no emotional drama at all. I only rely on simple events to tell you that because of xxx, the heroine fell in love with it, and then what happened after falling in love. If you can accept it, the daily plot is like summer herbal tea, sweet and soothing. (Compared to many newbies, it's pretty good control. You don't have to worry too much about logic.) I really like some of the short-lived plots and characters. Summarized as follows Big simple rescue, said a few words, and then fell in love 2. Simply cooperate, say a few words, and then fall in love 3. Gentle mother, the hero fell in love with her 4. If you want to become a human being, what will teach you to love? Crazy Props Store Manager and Sanwu Tomboy AI Five encounters in the ghetto, pure kindness and pure heart. The wooden idiot and the genius girl

It is indeed very interesting. The plot is a template for the uncle from another world who travels to another world and comes back. However, since no one has written this kind of plot, it can almost be said to be something completely new. It is understandable to write some paragraphs about the real world. But if the characters are so two-dimensional, it would be better to write more jokes to make the atmosphere of the whole article more relaxed. You can even make the pretentious parts of the real world more serious for comparison to highlight the differences between the two worlds. Because although the author said that the different world is very difficult, the plot did not reflect it at all, and the funny and romantic parts accounted for a larger proportion.

It's a potentially good book with a great idea. It follows the same path as Uncle From Another World and travels back from another world. The difference is that the ability system for traveling across the world is different, and there are more invasion plots here. It is interspersed with some memories from time to time. It not only retains the funny points of Uncle From Another World (same principle but different content), but also has the feeling of returning from another world at full level and being a boss. It is still a very good book.

This book is very fresh. Although it imitates the return route of my uncle from another world, the combat system is completely different. It is still worth reading. It is written by Shuang Wenshuang. It is not written by AI, so it is perfect [laughter]

See comments on Chapter 193 The plot is very interesting, similar to Uncle Isekai, but much better than Uncle Isekai. The protagonist in Uncle Isekai simply likes to play games, can't understand anything, and is very ugly. I don't like this setting very much. The protagonist of this novel is different. He can understand the girl's reaction and feel whether the girl likes him. However, because he has been a clown too many times, every time he thinks that she likes me, he subconsciously rejects it as one of the three major illusions in life. He finally opens up his heart and eavesdrops when the store manager asks. Unexpectedly, he meets a tsundere who asks, "Who will like him?" Then I will write a letter to you thoroughly In the novel, the protagonist travels with his soul, so his practice in another world is very slow. After his soul comes back, the world where the protagonist lives and the world he traveled through will soon merge. At the same time, the cumulative number of 10,000 games played by the protagonist has not been reduced, and he directly becomes a licensed player, giving his niece a good life and helping him embark on the path of a player. At the same time, he allows them to watch the memory playback in their minds step by step, just like the uncle from another world, because the niece has this animation there. In the end, the niece and the protagonist's apprentice temporarily arrived at the continent where the protagonist traveled due to time interaction. I had an orgasm watching it because the author made more updates, and finally he is no longer a short and weak author. Today's update reaches chapter 398 and has been read. I hate Le Yao very much. She clearly signed a contract unilaterally, which was entirely her own imagination. The protagonist was completely unaware of it. However, she had the nerve to treat herself as a victim, acted unreasonably, and forced Hoshino Hikaru to use her power to leave. Is she worthy of being the number one villain? It disgusts me. This book is very interesting and to my liking. I like it very much, but I can't accept this character. I understand that the author has his own ideas and arrangements, so I just complained and left. 5 Stars is a parting gift

It's very beautiful, funny and humorous, and the player settings are also very cool. It has all the functions you can think of. There is a slight flaw, being a nanny for my niece and apprentice, but I can tolerate it, after all, my niece has taken care of the vegetative protagonist for so many years.

Okay, okay~ This idea is quite comfortable to read~ But the writing style is not very good and it looks like a novice. It's so annoying to keep eating settings! It must be emphasized all the time that energy is conserved in all things and the meter cannot be turned upside down. Why make such an absolute setting? Especially the extraordinary world, you just have to be able to write it well! The key is to keep eating this setting! If your combat power doesn't collapse, just eat this setting like crazy! The collapse of combat power is forced to be explained by the law of conservation of energy. There are also various self-righteous explanations! What kind of pistol has 5 tons of kinetic energy? What kind of 6-pack abs can be developed into 8-packs (as we all know, how many abdominal muscles are born)~ Now that AI is so developed, can't you check the information? Don't write self-righteously, okay?

It's really beautiful! ! ! The resources of fairy grass Brief summary: A replica of Uncle Another World, original and more suitable for Chinese babies' physiques. There seems to be a harem connection. No obvious poisonous spots have been seen so far

The player system is very novel, and the underlying logic and computing power will not collapse. If you polish it carefully, it will be an excellent work. I have not found a similar book so far. It can be regarded as a new system [Like] [Like]

It has a lot of imagination and an innovative training system. The ratings have just come out and are mostly positive. I think it was a brush review, so the score is relatively low. A score of 9 or above may be falsely high, but an 8 is a solid score. The plot is not too cliche. It is worth watching.

Cool article, good to read and love to read The coolness of Lao Mao is trustworthy [laughter]

Today I am still thinking whether this book was written out of pure love! But the label clearly means opening a harem. Lao Zhou is a man recognized by the Will of Wood and has always been a piece of wood. There are already more than 10 harems, and Lao Zhou still thinks that the heroines don't like him. Is this also called opening a harem? I was thinking that Lao Zhou had always sealed his heart like this, and didn't choose a girl to marry him until the end of the story. But this is wrong. The label of the book says a harem, so why does it become pure love? It wasn't until I read this chapter that I understood that prison week was finally going to be open to non-vegetarian options and you could eat meat [laughing][laughing] By the way, the author's arrangement is very good. I have read so many harem stories. I actually saw a piece of wood in the harem, and then it took more than 400 chapters to eat meat. Not one of them was really the first one. Not bad, not bad, very interesting! Come on, author!

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! !

It looks good, Xiancao, but there are too many things in reality, and the settings are written a bit frequently and too densely. This aspect can be deleted, or slightly less. After all, the player's superpowers must be fully understood before they can be used, so it can actually be explained in a few sentences.

The subject matter is very new, and the ability settings are also relatively new. It is very similar to the story of the old man from another world. As for the love line, I personally think it can have a lot of elements. After reading other people's comments, I feel that the first few love line stories are very cliche, but many stories are like this. I think the love line is okay, and there is no need to pursue perfection. It's more of a daily story, interspersed with the story of an old uncle running away from another world. In fact, writing the story of one of the worlds alone will be interesting at first, but will become boring after a long time. The author's interweaving of different world stories and real-life stories is actually quite interesting. Personally, the most toxic part is the scene at the beginning when the old uncle helps his niece to take revenge on her junior high school classmates. The rest of the story is okay. Good grass [salute]

The biggest reason for giving it five stars is that I started reading it when the author had 500,000 or 600,000 words. If I had started reading when the author had 100,000 words or so, I might have given it four stars. The plot is mainly the same as that of the alien uncle, divided into modern life and another world. The modern one is mainly integrated with the other world, and the protagonist has advance knowledge and strength (partly), and will help the country (not blindly); the other world memories are similar to the alien uncle. Others asked about the protagonist. This is what I started to say, because the dialogue will take up some space, and I watched it late, so it seems to be smooth, and there will be no feeling like watching but not watching anything (although the author has abbreviated some places) The emotional shaping needs to be improved, but it is passable, and there are still some foreshadowings (for example, why one and two are so interested in the protagonist, it is explained at the beginning of three) In the end, the author's setting is very good, and it is summarized as the conservation of energy and matter. The battle inside is like a computer battle a long time ago. It gives you a core and other defensive attacks. You need to write your own code and use the code to attack each other. It is impossible to write a code that makes you invincible and then become invincible (to give an understandable example - the Minecraft kill command actually gives the target a ridiculously high damage. The bedrock cannot be dug out. In fact, its hardness is negative, and the original version cannot do it or be immune. However, some mods ignore these rules and proceed according to the rules of the mod). Upgrading is to upgrade your own hardware, so the level is absolute but not complete (CS allows a gun with a few frames and a gun with 120 frames, and a gun with 60 frames and 120 frames. The latter can be steamed by technology, but the former is completely unplayable)

It turned out to be Infinite Cats, so I thought it was so good-looking. This time I have a blueprint as a reference. I hope I don't run out of inspiration so quickly. The current narrative rhythm is very good.

It's very beautiful. Although it's five pictures a day, it's probably done by AI. But in terms of viewing experience, the author has polished it very well. It's not the kind of 3D printing and then removing the nozzle. All the extra parts and so on are uploaded directly without processing at all. I saw a huge knight story before, and the most important part of AI, Kamen Rider, was not done yet. I just sat there and ignored it. Then a lot of people said that the writing is very good. I'm really at a loss.

I've seen Chapter 70 or 80. The writing is good, the thinking is good, and the logic is consistent. A rare good book. However, this kind of imaginative novel has a common problem, that is, the combat power is more likely to collapse in the later stages. In traditional novels, you would change the map and continue playing. I wonder how the author of this follow-up book will handle it this way? There is another question. At that time, I read that the protagonist's introduction was "reciting a long list of protections before starting a fight, rather than summarizing them all directly". The protagonist's answer is this: If you only talk about everything, then the protection generated will only be the protection method that comes to mind at that moment. If you didn't think of it at the time, you missed it. It's safer to read them one by one. The essential meaning is that you have to "think of it" before putting in skills. "Unexpected" won't work. Then there will be a loophole. Or an extreme. In battles between players, attack methods and protective methods in terms of memory are actually redundant. Or it's not that important. Suppose I have a skill that can make the target lose his memory instantly or turn him into an idiot. Then the battle is immediately over. Because if you don't expect it, you won't let it go. I've done too many things to you, what can you do if you don't think of it?

Wow, another treasure book The protagonist is equivalent to having 20 years of cultivation experience in the early stages of spiritual recovery (almost), and there are dungeon breakthrough plots such as Rules and Ghost Stories, as well as the entry point for plots such as the uncle from another world. The author has done a good job of integrating urban supernatural powers, similar writing methods, and strange rules. Unfortunately, this is a new book. I hope it can be completed to the end.

It only uses the character and memory routine of the uncle from another world. The setting and plot are all new. The combination of the uncle from another world template and the spiritual energy recovery set is quite novel. The combat power system is also a highlight of this book. The concepts borrowed from games and computers are easy to understand. Unlike some fairy tales that make up new words and you can't remember the cultivation system after reading the whole book, the author is very creative.

The book is a good book, but there are too many female protagonists and it's hard to read. I personally think that five female protagonists at most is enough. If there are too many female protagonists, I won't like it [facepalm]

Full marks, a rare good novel, this is what is said, "It's like listening to fairy music and your ears are temporarily bright" Withdraw review...

I have one thing to say, this author's writing is really good, the rhythm, plot, and writing are all very good, but there are some secondary expressions such as cooking that are difficult to watch and skip. Generally speaking, this flaw does not affect it. It is just that the real plot is less pretentious and not as exciting. I can still give it five stars.

The subject matter is novel and the author's writing skills are very stable. To be honest, there are so many articles about different worlds in games. At least in the past 10 years of my online writing career, I have read a lot of articles about other worlds in games, such as "Super Mechanic" and "Full-time Master of Online Games". This is really the first time I have seen such novel novels about other world games. The author has a good idea and the narrative is very smooth. It seems that it is a good source of food for Tomato at present. Seeing that there are no obvious surprises so far, I hope the author can finish this book perfectly.

Let me briefly talk about my point of view. There is no problem with the content rhythm, the trend is stable, the ups and downs are constant, the interspersed branch content is good, and it is not bad at all. In terms of characterization, the protagonist is distinct and memorable.

This book is amazing. After reading a few chapters, I felt like an equatorial stone. After a few days, I suddenly wanted to read it again. After reading a few chapters, I felt like an equatorial stone again [laughs]

When I saw the title of the book at first, I thought it was a fanfic about my uncle from another world. I didn't want to read it at first. However, I checked it out recently and found that the setting is quite rigorous and the content is also very interesting, especially the life of the player in my uncle from another world. There are so many aunts who stage various Shura fields. It's so exciting [Chigua] [Chigua]

A book that can pass the time. Comments on the emotional line: In the early stage, the protagonist did not find that the heroine's motives could be explained logically. Later, he forced himself to become a fool and insisted on Shura Field. He could only say that he didn't have to write if he didn't know how to write. There was no need to keep adding heroines. In terms of setting: innovative but very ordinary, fantasy is not fantasy, and science fiction is not solid. The author can only use his own logic and self-consistency, but he keeps saying it to affect the perception. Plot: novel

Judging from the current progress, the five-star recommendation is no problem. Earth, another world, and memories of another world are all quite interesting, but the upgrade of combat power is a bit slow, and it is foreseeable that there will be problems with the plot in the future. There are too many female protagonists, already seven or eight. I have never seen any author who can write so many female protagonists.