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Found new treasures. So far there is no problem The heroine has her mother's surname, and the male-female ratio is 8:2. The female characters currently appearing have their own character creations. Although it is an unlimited stream, the setting is unconventional. Players can actively become dungeon planners, which is eye-catching. It should be combined with the setting of cultivating immortals. The rhythm is comfortable and the creativity is great~

It's not bad, but it's too little. There are only more than 50 chapters at the moment. The female to male ratio is 8:2 which is very friendly. When writing poems about women without disobedience, they will consciously use words such as mother, father, grandma, etc. And the heroine takes her mother's surname. There are many female characters, and they are very memorable. They are tall and strong. There are male characters who are cannon fodder and weak. The friendship between sisters is so awesome. The content is good and the writing is online. The character design of the protagonist is also very vivid and full of character, he is bad-tempered, and his little tiger teeth are very recognizable.

Female-centered unlimited streaming! ! ! ! ! ! It's good to read. There are many classic sentences in the article [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]. The ratio of women to men is very high. The social background should be that women and men are equal. There are not too many rules in the current dungeon, and it is quite easy to remember. The content is logical and self-consistent. I hope there will be more exciting dungeons in the future, and most of the highlights are on women, and the survival rate is higher! ! !

It's good to watch, very good to watch. As long as it doesn't fall apart, it's constantly updated, the heroine's character doesn't fall apart, there's no inexplicable plot, and there's no mentally retarded supporting characters to highlight the heroine's IQ. That book is sure to be a hit. It really became popular (as I expected)

Holy shit! ! ! This book is really about loving my daughter. How could there be such a wonderful author in the world! ! ! But I just don't know why there is no traffic, anyway, just keep working! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's okay, it's female-friendly, and it has a simple sense of loving women. However, the author himself may not be very sensitive to words. The good thing is that he was very persuasive [laughing and crying] and changed all the readers' suggestions.

Looks good! Everyone, look! The setting is not cliché at all, this is the first time I've seen it, and the wording is well received! [Send heart] The female characters all have strength and wisdom, and there are very few male characters, but even this book is too new. [Grief] Come on, author!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, female-oriented

It's good to read. I like the new book\(//∇//)\but it's too new and I haven't even read 100,000 words. It's not satisfying.

It's good-looking, very interesting, and the content is very interesting. There are also many women with different personalities. The language is relatively friendly. The author also listens to suggestions in terms of wording, such as spoiling and crying. The character of the protagonist is also very interesting. I like the friendship between girls, but it's a bit unread_(:з∠)_

It's very good-looking. Every female character is very interesting and not stereotyped. Teacher Douya has created the image of the heroine very well. She is a kind of chaotic and kind-hearted one. Sometimes there are some little villains who are particularly cute. I also particularly like the cute little green pet, he is also very cute. ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 I am very much looking forward to Douya's subsequent creations. Please don't rest or be tired. I came to follow up the review, and I lamented that the women in the author's works are interesting and not all are good people, and they are all running for their own interests. I really like Grandma Zhou Xiaomei in the first dungeon. She is very well portrayed and not cliché at all. The author has good intentions towards middle-aged and elderly women and does not portray them in a mindless and vicious way. The worldview he writes should be about equality between men and women in the real world, but in the game world, women and men are equal because there are no restrictions on women. Whoever is stronger can be the boss, so women are very powerful. The two major families in the game world are founded by women. I am very much looking forward to the collision between the heroine and the women of these two families.

I've read most of the author's first book, and it's generally good, but the focus is not on the protagonist. The biggest problem is that the protagonist is like a background board. Some of the protagonist's highlight moments can be added. If the protagonist has strong mental power, then his IQ should also be very high. Doesn't the protagonist bring a lot of moths? When encountering a large map, you can leave the moth out for an extra day to monitor and look for more clues. The main reason is that I think the overall plot is too bland and lacks a very exciting point. There should be major events later, because now the player's game wants to invade reality. This is a good entry point. The author can also polish his book more, and the writing is also very good. But can you add some more interesting copies? And the overall plot seems too bland, and you can watch it in one sitting, but the interest in following it may not be very high. You can add some levels, and you can intuitively feel the gap between the protagonist and others. The most important thing is that the combat experience is not obvious. When the game invades reality, everyone on the earth can know, and It doesn't need to be limited to this planet. For example, there are many nightmare games. There will be nightmare games on almost every planet with life forms. The nightmare games will become stronger as the number of players increases. The earth can be set as the protagonist of the planet village. After coming out of the novice village, you can face more and wider worlds. There are also some problems with the dungeons. I feel that some dungeons are specifically waiting for the protagonist to clear the level. There is a problem with the combat power design. If you are a little unsure about your combat power, you can use level, which is the most intuitive expression. The biggest common problem in writing unlimited flow is that if the dungeon design is not good, the protagonist will become the dominant one. That is, many dungeons are set to have extremely high combat power, and everyone will basically die. If only the protagonist can be written like this, it will make the dungeon particularly difficult, and the world view needs to be polished. It can be seen that the author wants to write a group portrait article. The biggest charm of a group portrait article is that everyone is highlighted, but there is a backbone. The protagonist is a monk halfway and joins someone else's team. It may not be expressed at first. The relationship between the protagonist and his teammates is not a big problem. However, if the author wants to create a better article, or wants to write the article for a longer time, he can try to expand the world view. However, there are no major flaws. The author is also very careful in his choice of words. It can be seen that the author wants to write a good work. Most of the books written by the author before were romance novels, and novels about heroines with no CP group characters. I feel that it is also a kind of ideological progress. The current low score may be because the early stage is relatively dull [thinking]. If you want to attract people to read, you must have a small climax, or a relatively good feeling. The author must seize those opportunities in the future, because the Tomato author mainly reads books. In the early stage, he used careful wording to attract a group of readers, but if the plot does not keep up in the later stage, it will be easy to lose. In the later stage, the protagonist probably relies on poison and mental power. It feels like it is a relatively niche subject. I hope the author can keep writing [blowing kiss] and give me a five-star support.

It's beautiful. I clicked on the cover. Is it the manuscript that the author requested?

The author's writing is quite interesting, and the characters are well created. The whole novel is very friendly to women, with a growth-oriented protagonist. I think the little green moth is very cute (don't cut it), and the protagonist's strength is very good. (The nightmare will invade reality later. I'm curious why there is no official organization on the nightmare side in this book, only the family (or it hasn't been written yet). The official should not be inactive [what]

Why is the rating so low? An infinite horror novel, the copy is not the traditional and cliched kind, it is quite innovative, the protagonist's character is very distinctive, and the golden finger is just right. The male-female ratio of the characters is very comfortable, and there are many outstanding female characters who take their mother's surname by default. Moreover, the author pays great attention to the word choice, and will promptly change any word that is inappropriate if a reader points it out. Outside the game world is the configuration of the real world, but the author writes in a female-centered way, and inside the game world is a completely matriarchal society. There's nothing wrong with the writing style, and there's nothing wrong with the logic of the writing. Grandma passing by can take a look, it will definitely not get such a low rating.

From what I've read so far, the wording in the article is very comfortable. The author also listens to readers' opinions. But to put it bluntly, I feel that the plot is not realistic enough, not that sinister and a bit light-hearted. To be precise, I think it is a bit mindless. Well, there's a lot of room for improvement. The character development of the protagonist is very good except for what I just said. It feels like a kitten and there are not so many words describing the appearance. The female to male ratio is also comfortable. Better than some Tomato books.

It's very good, but those who are afraid of bugs and have strong imaginations should be a little more cautious. After all, the content expressed in the article described by the author is really true, and it is not annoying and cute. After reading a few chapters, it is also very smart.

Overall it's pretty good-looking, not particularly boring, and has rich imagination. Many of the characters are very likable. However, I personally feel that the system is cheating the heroine of her money when she is shopping with the system, and I feel that it is difficult to obtain nightmare coins as described in the description. But later when the heroine was trading with the system and didn't care much about the nightmare coins, she always felt a little unconvinced (she just wanted to bargain with the system). This is purely a personal opinion, don't scold me (serious nonsense_(:з∠)_) I think it's very beautiful. This book by the author will definitely become popular (°Д°) Ъ thumbs up!

A treasure trove of great books! The author will also change the lyrics in a timely manner!

Very nice! Most of the characters are super strong girls. [Like] The protagonist is super charming, and the sick and weak boy with high IQ is so attractive. There are some complications in the middle. For example, the explanation about the club is a bit too stiff and cumbersome. There are several super long paragraphs, so I don't have the patience to read it... But overall it's still great! It's really not enough! ! ! How dare the author suddenly update 100 chapters and scare me to death! ! Quietly ask: When will Bufan's body recover? Looking forward to seeing Bu Fan who is 1.8 Meters tall! ! !

The subject matter is novel and the writing is also very good [flying kiss] [flying kiss] good-looking (♥∀♥) I love reading [adoration] [adoration] More chapters would be better ^_________^

The writing is very good and the plot is very attractive. I love watching it. ^-------------^ ( @ • W • @ ) | >❤< | |☆ ( nnn ) ( nnn )/ ===== =====

It's very interesting, but this seedling is too new [crying]. The plot is quite interesting and the protagonist's abilities are also very interesting, but it's too short and not enough to watch...

I don't like to see the forced recommendation of RN words. I can only see Xiao Si Fu here.

I am a girl, and I am very satisfied with this book. The plot is good, and there are not many mistakes. It is just not very friendly to boys. I don't recommend it to boys, but I recommend it to girls. There are basically no major flaws.

It's good-looking and female-oriented. I think the heroine is so cute [shy] and it feels so warm to see the heroine get along with others. The pacing feels pretty good too, and as long as it doesn't fall apart and doesn't add any inexplicable plot, it will definitely become a hit. How can there be such a good-looking novel, but there are too few chapters now, not enough to read [cry][cry][cry]. The author is really awesome [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss].

Very delicious. . ! Strong women come from God. . To sum up, he is a strong woman and a charming man, which makes me feel very comfortable. Then I also like the settings and everything (✪▽✪) Give me a pound here👍

Very nice, recommended!

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The plot has ups and downs, and I really like the protagonist, teammates, script NPCs, and character settings. It is my favorite online novel. After being pushed by several fake girls trying to get a baby boy, I really laughed out loud. Reading this book is really a wash for my eyes.