
Bump: Can Players in the Third Game HE?
凹凸:三周目玩家可以HE吗?
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37Chapters
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Is There No One Who Can Hit the Bump?
The girl who begs for concave and convex female videos is already starved of books.
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Is There Any Aotuwen Who Participated in the Competition from the Beginning? the Original Person Has Something to Do with Lei Shi.
I want to read a book similar to "[Bump] It's Too Late to Apologize to Lei Shi".
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Is There Any Bump+bengtie or Genshin Impact?
Are there any books similar to "When the Silver Wolf Comes to Outu"?
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Who Else Has High-Quality Embossed Writing? the Child Has No Books! ! Almost Starving to Death
I would like to read a book similar to "Concave and Concave World: Hey, Beware of That Contestant".
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Very beautiful! The characters are very three-dimensional. Although I have not read the original work, I can tell that the author has tried his best to restore the characters and personalities of the original work. The writing style is also very good, and the story logic and other things can be said to be particularly good. You can see it. The author writes the book carefully, it is very delicious ᕦ(⚆Ѡ⚆)ᕥ(*^3^)/~☆
Although it is a new book, it has obvious potential. Once the number of words is enough, it is almost inevitable that it will become better. The writing is a little better than "fluent", and it feels a bit like picking it up at your fingertips; the rhythm of the story is also natural. I personally think that the plot processing of the week is quite good, and the sense of dissonance of being "out of touch with the main text" is almost gone. And comparing the beginning with the present, you can feel the slight improvement in the author's writing. I have to say that the potential is indeed huge. The end of the first program is a small climax, and it is also my favorite part; it feels like the very light and slow sound of water droplets is used as a countdown. Although it is a bit dramatic to end with a direct cut of the net, it still cannot conceal the overall excellence; besides, this is the need of the story line and can be understood. I have always been in the habit of writing long reviews, but firstly, this book has a relatively small number of words, and secondly, I don't have much time now, so I will simply write a few sentences, and maybe I will follow up with a review later when I have the opportunity.
So far it looks good! The characters written by the teacher are very emotional and the integration of the two different circles is not too abrupt (´▽`★) I feel so happy to see Lei Le sick and weak, boss! I hope the teacher can continue to maintain ww
The only drawback is that it's too seedy. It's delicious. Boss, you must finish writing this article. It's delicious.
Very heartwarming story
I went there. It totally matches my XP. I haven't seen this kind of subject matter in hundreds of years. It's really beautiful.
There's nothing wrong with it at the moment, it's just that there are too few chapters and there's not enough to eat [face covering]
It looks good, it looks good, it looks good! ! ! ! !