Aotu World: Can a Third-Loop Player Get a Happy Ending?

Thank you, teacher. It turned out that I suffered from demonic body, origin stone disease, Pamish infection, heavy rain syndrome, vocal cord worm infection, collapse syndrome, abstraction, money infection, radiation infection, cyberpsychosis, and fear of gas inhalation. , Homesickness, urban disease, distortion, slow shock, chuunibyou, zombie transformation, anentropy, witch transformation, madness, Honkai disease, extraordinary being out of control, hypothermia, Kara disease, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, flood infection, anti-life equation corrosion , subspace corruption, now I am completely healed as soon as I see the work made by the teacher ✧₍^˶- ˕ -˵^₎✧ It's so beautiful that men are menstruating and women are going insane. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. She is so beautiful that the five guards in the village miss and love the widow. She is so handsome that tears flow from the corners of her mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. She is so beautiful. She is a god. My rose tears illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran and jumped. I performed the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I cried. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water (ฅ⁍̴̀◊⁍̴́)و ̑̑ ദ്ദി◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ

Although it is a new book, it has obvious potential. Once the number of words is enough, it is almost inevitable that it will become better. The writing is a little better than "fluent", and it feels a bit like picking it up at your fingertips; the rhythm of the story is also natural. I personally think that the plot processing of the week is quite good, and the sense of dissonance of being "out of touch with the main text" is almost gone. And comparing the beginning with the present, you can feel the slight improvement in the author's writing. I have to say that the potential is indeed huge. The end of the first program is a small climax, and it is also my favorite part; it feels like the very light and slow sound of water droplets is used as a countdown. Although it is a bit dramatic to end with a direct cut of the net, it still cannot conceal the overall excellence; besides, this is the need of the story line and can be understood. I have always been in the habit of writing long reviews, but firstly, this book has a relatively small number of words, and secondly, I don't have much time now, so I will simply write a few sentences, and maybe I will follow up with a review later when I have the opportunity.

What the boss writes is really beautiful!!! The character interaction is really interesting 🥰 The character creation is also great, I really like Xiaole 😳 I hope the author makes this book popular [Sending my heart]

I read it in one go and it was so well written. The Honkai Impact setting is well integrated and there is no mess at all. The author also has a very thorough understanding of the characters without feeling OOC. I am really looking forward to the follow-up plot [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Sorry, I haven't read much, but I still want to post this book review Let's talk about the advantages of this book first. For most concave and convex fanfics, this one is considered mature. The writing is delicate, the plot is not very fast or very delayed, and the update frequency is also good. I think it won't be updated inexplicably like other concave and convex novels. What needs to be avoided is, let me talk about the chapters I saw first. It has the same criticism as most online articles. It is too dense with memes. For many people, this is very uncomfortable, unless it is a joke. But this book does not feel like a joke to me. It has its own structure and plot, which makes me feel that the author actually has a lot of ideas, but he cannot handle the distribution of memes and text well, so I will avoid the lightning with you here. Overall, this is a good work for convex and concave fanfics, but for fanfics, it can only be regarded as smooth, and not enough for a good work of convex and convex fanfics. If you like to read concave and convex novels, it is worth a look [Blow kiss]

Very beautiful! The characters are very three-dimensional. Although I have not read the original work, I can tell that the author has tried his best to restore the characters and personalities of the original work. The writing style is also very good, and the story logic and other things can be said to be particularly good. You can see it. The author writes the book carefully, it is very delicious ᕦ(⚆Ѡ⚆)ᕥ (*^3^)/~☆

It looks good. The author's writing style and the framework of the work are quite good. It feels very comfortable to watch. I just wish that the original character could only be the protagonist. If there are too many original characters, it will not be very comfortable.

It is a very innovative book. Unlike other books, the identity of the protagonist is thought of from the very beginning, and it is peeled off layer by layer, with a little ups and downs of memories. The author writes really well. The process of the protagonist's feelings being gradually affected by the outside world and becoming more popular is really well written! Each character is not very occ, and the description of Lei Shi is the best among the many fanfics I have read! I am not too naive. I think that since living in the palace, Lace was not simply written as an innocent, cheerful, and courageous little boy when he was a child. I think that since Lei Shi can have the ideal of being a pirate and wants to find his own freedom, he must not have chosen blindly. If he has always received royal education, how should I say, he can think and measure.

The only drawback is that it's too seedy. It's delicious. Boss, you must finish writing this article. It's delicious. Great, great

I really like what the boss wrote. The writing is really very similar to the emotion of the original work. He is not very close to other characters, and the protagonist also has his own highlights and things do not revolve around the original protagonist and supporting characters. In fact, based on this alone, I think the writing is very good, and I particularly like the character of the protagonist. I prefer the weekly version and the little dummy. Please let me die and accept my willfulness, etc. It tastes so good. Okay, maybe it's because I love pain literature. But I really think it smells so good, it smells so good