Cultivating Immortality with a Life Lamp, Starting as a Blood Slave

If the author says it's not a harem novel, then give it a five-star rating and add it to your bookshelf. The author tricked people into killing him. Two days ago he talked about a single female protagonist, and now he talks about a double protagonist. Anyone who reads the article about a single female protagonist runs away.

The plot is well written, and the style is more serious than humorous. You can also feel the author's efforts in conceiving the plot. Perhaps due to writing habits, there are some places in the first paragraph that overemphasize the signs of the Blood Sect, and no one except the protagonist noticed it. The plot in the middle and latter parts is somewhat fragmented and there are no complicated starting and ending points. The advantage is that it is relatively easy for readers to read. The disadvantage is that it is too loose for readers who pursue solidity. The introduction mentions that this is a time-travel novel, and its role in the text seems to only serve to transform the protagonist into a thirteen-year-old body with an inconsistent way of thinking. If supplemented by plots such as perspectives and ideas from past lives, maybe the novel can be brought into a different world instead of the aborigine?

The character of the protagonist is a bit vague, but the rhythm is steady. The plot can be a bit new except that the first 10 chapters are a bit easy to give up at a glance. The sentences in the front can be slightly changed. At present, it seems to be flat and I hope it will become more and more exciting in the future (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧. The plot can be more novel.

Yes, the real score in Tomato can be above 8.5. Currently, there are only more than 100 chapters. There are basically no poisonous points. The author can express his meaning clearly and the plot arrangement is relatively good.

The writing style is superb, and it reads so fluently that I couldn't put it down at all. Very well written ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧. The writing style is also very sophisticated and there is nothing wrong with it. It doesn't have much impact on the plot, but two updates a day are too few. I hope you can update more [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The objective review is really good. I was surprised to see this on the foreign persimmon. It is a high-quality book in a certain way. The author of the traditional cultivating immortality has his own ideas and a relatively typical plot, but he handles it very well. The plot in the early and middle stages is clear and subjective. I look forward to the subsequent plot. It's finally starting to feel good

Recommended by old bookworms, the book is quite good, Liangcao+, it has only been read for tens of thousands of people. It has no obvious poisonous points, the structure is clear, and the logic is reasonable. However, the character development is a bit flat. If the character arc can be written well, it will be a masterpiece.

So far, the writing is pretty good, but the most I can accept is a single female protagonist (preferably one without a female protagonist, a common problem in male-female stories is that when a female is written, the plot is too small to control the big one)

Not bad, it should be the route of practicing casually and then joining the sect. The plot is probably that the protagonist is kicked by various people like a dog. When can the protagonist, a wild dog, take the initiative to bite people?

Current number of chapters: 207 Reading experience: Except for some blurry golden fingers, there are no big problems ps: Chapter 207 is a continuous reading without changing books in between. Summary: Stay calm, I will give it five stars if it ends normally.