The Villain in the Book Turns the Dank Heroine into a Yandere

Advantages: The characters are vivid and three-dimensional. Disadvantages: The heroine's emotional expression is so obvious in the back, and the protagonist does not react (ok, let's pretend that Lao Nan is a piece of wood). Let's look at Chapter 107. The heroine confesses directly, and the hero is still saying something about being out of touch with the main line and plot [face covering]. The change in the heroine is quite obvious. I don't believe that the hero can't notice it. There is no need to do this to promote the plot. This is a big poisonous point. There are no other problems. The plot is too rigid, and the male protagonist's emotional module is just like that of Mechagodzilla [laughs], he has no emotional module at all. What kind of yin was Bai Yueguang in her previous life? [Hold face] In Chapter 111, you can read it for yourself. [Hold face] [Like] There is also a part of mixed society in the early stage. If you can't accept it, you can skip reading or skip the chapter.

The delicate emotional lines written in this book are fascinating, but I really don't want to see the AI ​​comic of this novel disappear [cry][cry]

I'll give it four stars, mainly because the routines are too familiar. I've watched a lot of them just because the foot was injured and then the plot was advanced. No major poisonous spots have been found yet. I don't understand why a main character is added to the plot

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Noah hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! This book is still waiting for Zihan to fight with Ye Fan in order to win the quota to take the Western Scripture. Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma, so Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became the Emperor Yan.

I'll give you the most straightforward, objective, and non-circumstantial review. This book is really good. I was originally short on books. This is the only book I've read from beginning to end. The emotional line is quite delicate.

Not bad, I think it's okay [Like] The plot design is very good Since the heroine was suddenly claimed back, I haven't watched the rest of that part. The transition is abrupt, and the hero's character is also a mess, which is only as good as the previous part.

It's not love at first sight. In the early stage, the female protagonist does not trust the male protagonist at all and thinks it is his new prank; in the middle stage, she is a little shaken and curious; in the later stage, she is completely defeated and develops a strong desire for exclusivity. The atmosphere of love and hate is well created, and the ambiguous tension is very strong.

Can you talk to dy's @me about cooperation?

This writing is pretty good among foreign persimmons. It's a bit off-putting in the early stages, but compared to other writings, it's good. If you think it's 🐢, you can read the harem story. There are so many requirements for a pure love story. If you like someone, you have to be responsible for them.

Can you give the copyright to Douyin? I'll listen to you. His is really beautiful.

It's very nice to watch, especially the cosplay of Sun Wukong in Armor Warrior vs. Ultraman Transformers is very nice.

I went there because I watched the AI ​​short drama, which gave me the beginning. What followed was a completely enjoyable version. I was so happy. Everyone who watched it said it was a good one. It deserves five stars! ! !

Version 2 (short and concise advanced short review, suitable for book review area/book list) Use a light pen to write deep feelings, and use a microscopic view to see people's hearts. The narrative of the book is freely retractable, the characters are full of texture, the love description is restrained and advanced, it abandons clichés and clichés, and depicts the true appearance of intimate relationships in a delicate and touching way. The foreshadowing is dense, the intention is far-reaching, the text is both beautiful and powerful, and the aftertaste lingers after reading it. It is a high-quality love novel that can be read over and over again and often read again. At first glance, it is a very good novel. Thanks to my Chinese skills

[Love][Love][Love] Nice little sweet article, I like it. The contrast between the heroine's early and late stages gives people a sense of freshness and a feeling that is different from industrial saccharine. I like it. Author quick update After not watching it for a few days, it suddenly became a little disenchanted. Now looking back at the plots I have watched before, the poisonous points are not many, but very big. One is that the male protagonist has never been wise, and has been slow to improve the male protagonist's wisdom. He keeps putting off the word count. The second one is to destroy the character. The cold heroine is dragged by her best friend to wash the feet of a male technician in the city, which is a bit to destroy the character to promote the plot. The third is the setting of the male protagonist. In order to create a male protagonist who does not want to be too involved with the female protagonist and wants to escape from his shell; eh, this is a good character setting, but the anchor point that keeps the male protagonist from wanting to have a deepening relationship with the female protagonist is Bai Yueguang in the previous life! ? [Smile][Smile][Smile] If you write later that the male and female protagonists are together, where will you put the Bai Yueguang in this past life? Will you slap yourself in the face? I was short of books before and wanted to find some sweet articles to read. Then I found out that many people were reading this book, so I clicked in and read it. I was fascinated by the tension between the male and female protagonists, and after reading it all, I gave it a good review. And now I play it a second time. I am really angry at Laonan's later brain circuits and I'm going to vomit blood. Bai Yueguang, who has been rehabilitated in his previous life, is even more terrible when he comes out. From more than 500,000 readers before to more than 800,000 readers now, the author is neither productive nor high-quality. Two small water seals come out every day. This is the first time I have seen a book that requires the reader to coax the author.

I came here from the AI ​​short drama. I really like this subject matter, and the characters portrayed by the author are also great! Many people couldn't accept the male protagonist's performance in the early stage, but in the male protagonist's opinion, he had bullied Xia Ningqi for a long time in order to pursue Lin before he traveled back in time. After he traveled back in time, he performed a series of compensatory actions towards Xia Ningqi in order to save his life and his family, but All Qi's overtures to Xia Ningqi were to make Xia Ningqi hate him less. He never thought or dared to think that he could make Xia Ningqi like him. In his opinion, no matter what he does in the future, he can't make up for the damage he did to Xia Ningqi before (I feel like he can bring In the form of a reference sound, Shoya Ishida was finally willing to sacrifice himself in order to make up for the harm he caused to Nishimiya Glass when he was a school student. Many people in the comments felt that even this could not erase the damage to Nishimiya Glass, and therefore felt that this movie glorified bullies. I think this is really a pity, this movie is really good), and I don't dare to expect that the things he did for Xia Ningqi will make Xia Ningqi like him, so Qi can only walk on thin ice and try to follow the plot of the novel and try not to spoil the plot. I think this is understandable, and it's pretty good that the male protagonist can actually get hard when he needs to be hard, and is not just a tortoise. Ps: The above is purely my personal opinion

The characters of this book are well created. Whether it is the cowardly character of the male protagonist in the early stage or the contradiction between love and hate of the female protagonist, they all add different characteristics compared to other books. Around chapter 130, the reason for the cowardice of the male protagonist is explained and it begins to rise. I also began to change my view of the male protagonist🐢. After chapter 134, the male protagonist becomes wise.

It's good to watch. I love watching it. Highly recommended. The male protagonist has a language system like Lu Mingfei's. The female protagonist is tsundere. The villain still has a transcendent brain. Highly recommended. Highly recommended.

Shennong tasted it and judged it to be high-quality grain and grass. The male protagonist has a very lovable personality. The current controversial point is that the male protagonist has been attacked by the female protagonist, but he just doesn't understand. In fact, many people are too sympathetic to the female protagonist. As for the male protagonist so far, the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are at most like a little, but not in love at all. The original protagonist experienced one of the ten tortures of the Qing Dynasty before his death. The male protagonist actually wanted to live a peaceful life, and his identity was not equal to that of the female protagonist. He accompanied him like a tiger every day. He was afraid that one day the female protagonist would settle accounts with him, and his life was only a matter of his words, so he wanted to stay away and live a salty life. Now the female protagonist is frantically pursuing the male protagonist, but the male protagonist has always refused to accept it and pretended to be confused, which led some readers to think that he was giving her away and wanted to run away. But in fact, there is no need to add the Bai Yueguang part, just say that you are not in love with the heroine. Most people think that the heroine is forced to love you like this. It is obvious that a super beauty is crazy about pursuing you. It feels unreasonable for the hero not to accept it. I have never thought about why the hero must like the heroine. He currently just wants to get rid of the heroine and make money to live a happy life. That's why we can gradually advance the plot until the heroine discovers that the hero won't shed tears without seeing the coffin, triggering the basement link [laughing]

It's so good. Just when the plot is about to reach its climax, the male protagonist is given a package to get into, with yellow hair and lip nails, and he hangs out in nightclubs. I'd like to explain that I haven't touched women at all. I heard that there is something about Bai Yueguang who died in his previous life, so let's just watch it.

Four stars is more appropriate. The beginning and overall outline are more classic than other novels of the same type, but the subsequent development is relatively fresh. The male protagonist's emotional intelligence is as good as an adult banana. The silly and sweet male protagonist's character is a little too hard. Other aspects are okay, but sometimes the characters are a bit confusing.

Can you cooperate with dy's anchor? The novel is so good

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It's very interesting. Can the author cooperate with the author of dy's comic? 🥺 Make a wish [cry]

It's so beautiful, it's like a peerless food, everyone is coming over to see it [vomit] Forget it, I won't trick you anymore

The writing is very good. The novel is filled with a lot of descriptions of the main characters' expressions and psychology. The plot has ups and downs, and the male protagonist gradually lets go of the contradictions and entanglements. It is particularly beautiful, but I couldn't sleep at night after reading it. . . This is salvation

It's a bit arrogant, a classic plot, a novel script from ten years ago, but it's not ugly, I just know how to proceed without having to guess, this feeling is not good

I just read this novel. Although it feels familiar because there are too many people writing this kind of novels, there are no follow-ups online. I saw this on Tomato Recommendation. The plot is very attractive. Although the plot is old-fashioned and has recent innovations, the writing is good. The more you look at it, the more delicious it becomes. (Tsundere is a thing of the past, now is the era of yandere)

Here are two anchors for those who are just reading this: There are more than 140 chapters in which the male protagonist and the female protagonist live together, and 167 chapters in which the male protagonist officially confesses his love (if you feel the progress is slow, you can read the novel The Voyage of Horror, where the male and female protagonists kiss at the end [laughs])

Yes, it's pretty good-looking, sweet and sadistic. I think the male protagonist did the right thing. One is afraid of the female protagonist, and the other is because he has someone he likes in his world. However, I still hope that the male protagonist and the female protagonist will be together in the end.

Support the Douyin anchor, I hear you say, the author should work harder