Man in Warhammer: Picked up a Horus at the Beginning

There is indeed no stench of AI in it, it is purely handmade by the author. Although there are some minor flaws, the child-rearing line is very cute. It is great if there is no love line and no heroine. Long live no heroine! Waaaagh! Very delicious and chewy

It looks good. As long as you don't engage in emotional drama in Warhammer, it won't be bad.

The needle is not poking, this is a protagonist who was first manipulated by Aha, then by Tzeentch, and then was reduced to raising cubs for the old man Huang. The protagonist should have been in Bengtie, and he can compete with the four peddlers in terms of force. His personality is a bit funny, and he raises the cubs very well. They fight with each other, and even have a funny personality [smile]

Very nice! I've never read a Warhammer fanfic before, but this is the first one I've read. The author's writing has successfully given me another fanfic option. The plot setting is very interesting. The protagonist adopted the originals when they were children and appeared as an adoptive father. He raised them well. Her own strength is invincible, she is not aggrieved at all, she does not show off for the sake of showing off, and she has highlights of showing off her force. She has a humorous and humorous personality, and she is also the mother of a straight boy with long black hair. It's really good to watch. I have read the latest chapter 187. There is no thunder. The protagonist is a long-haired male mother, a pure military commander, the person who best understands the psychology of children of the original body. No CP, no ambiguity, just raising children. The plot is very interesting, there is daily infrastructure, and the friendship with the emperor is very funny. Horus be like: I followed my father as soon as I came out of the space capsule. My father carried me as an infant and killed everyone in the hive. My father and I spent three years together in Corsonia. Three years is actually not a long time. For three hundred or three thousand years, it is actually just a moment... Three years! He followed his father as soon as he opened his eyes from the space capsule. He and his father spent three full years together, just the two of them, father and son. Three years was not a long time, but it was the happiest period of his life. Even if he lived for thirty, three hundred, or thirty thousand years in the future, he would never forget those three years of good time.

It's super, super good-looking. Tang and Song are really like a mother. [Shy] It's really interesting to get along with the original bodies. Huang Pizi hides his identity and Tang and Song Maomao hides the original body. The two confront each other, each with his own guilty conscience, which is super funny. It really gets better and better the more you watch it, even people who have never seen Warhammer can understand it. Really highly recommended [Bird Food Masterpiece] [Bird Food Masterpiece]

The plot the author has written so far is very good, but judging from the introduction, I personally have some immature suggestions. I hope the male protagonist can be made more independent. Don't end up working hard for several years just to help the emperor raise his son's horses and horses, and finally have to succumb to the emperor. [Laughing][laughing]

Author, please tell me whether you prefer to read book reviews or leave comments at the end of chapters, and I will interact there in the future. Let me talk about my views on the recent chapters. I think the essence of a novel is a story, and it is the core need that the story must solve. Some novels are meant to make up for regrets, such as various historical time travel novels. Some novels are for imagining the future, such as various science fiction novels. Some novels are meant to satirize reality, such as those who have no money to become immortals. I think this novel of yours is to make up for the regrets, to make up for the miserable childhoods of the Primarchs, and to make up for the readers' imagination that if the Primarchs all had a good childhood, would the Emperor rule the galaxy, and eventually humanity would live a good life. Your painting style in the early stage is relaxed, happy and happy, so Angron should not be a three-meter-long man, he should be a child of seventy or eighty centimeters. Because of the slave owner's control, they could not grow taller. And Angron happened to be able to sense emotions, so every time he was indecisive, Leon Horus would tell him as the big brother not to be afraid, we will help you. Like your last chapter, if Angron was a child, he said I was a slave and you are noble. Horus could punch him on the top of the head and say that we are all brothers, and then each of Leonkoz and the others would punch him on the head. It could even become a routine, where every time a new Primarch is found to join the team, they each give them a fist bump. In this case, the main mission of the story is to find all the Primarchs, build their planets, and then leave the Archons. The last one to find Guilliman, and then the 21 primarchs will work together with their planet to unify the galaxy, and finally have a happy ending. You have just written Angron now, so just revise these chapters. If anyone questions why after hundreds of years of searching for the Primarch, Horus and the others are still in the shape of children, the question is that the Primarch is a demigod, and they deliberately control themselves to look like half-grown children to enjoy their father's love. Some people questioned why after a hundred years of searching, the original body still looked like it had just arrived on the planet. It was Tzeentch's trick to ask.

It's a very good-looking fanfic, almost similar to the princess and the eldest princess next door.

There is no poison, no heroine, no inexplicable emotional lines, and no AI flavor. It is a delicious and heartwarming journey of raising a baby. The author did hand rub it using the ancient method, which is a bonus.

It is very good-looking. The powerful force value of Tang and Song Dynasties makes people feel safe. The IQ and EQ are both online, and the yellow skin is still a banana. The descriptions of the primarchs are also lovely, and Horus was very happy when he saw his offspring for the first time. Looking forward to the subsequent return of the original body. Now two of the four vendors have been beaten, and I look forward to the famous beating scene of the other two [Thoughts]

Although it looks very good, I found three problems. There are really three problems without making fun of them. The first is the problem of Angron. The planet he is on is not very backward. On the contrary, it is very technological. It is a high-tech planet. It is just because the nobles are not very good people that the gap between the civilians is too big. Moreover, their nobles just like to watch duels. It does not mean that they are in the Middle Ages. Otherwise, why would you think a creation in the dark technological age would be... Yes, Butcher's Nail, if you really throw it to a backward medieval planet, then it will be just a useless scrap metal, not a high-tech. The second is a problem that many authors will make. Regarding subspace, the one who is in charge of wisdom, he likes change, not change. All lives are staked. For example, you are a planet. Governor, you predicted that you will die at night. Even if you hide in the safest fortress on the entire planet and arrange the most elite soldiers to protect you, you will still die at night. You may be smashed to death by a chandelier, choke to death from drinking water, choking to death from eating, or being frightened to death by things that suddenly fall. In short, you will die irreversibly. Tzeentch will only make your death more interesting. For example, you choked on the water but did not die, and then let the chandelier smash you half to death. What makes you most fortunate after that is that when your most trusted soldier came to save you, he was accidentally killed by a fire. The wise man in the exhibition hall will only make this richer and more fun, but will not change him. He will revive this mortal man. The Emperor and the four subspace ones are chess.

Let me talk about my feelings first. I am currently reading Chapter 91. The author has not said that this book is a top-notch laugh or atmosphere. My point of view is similar to others, but that poisonous point is really too poisonous. The following content contains spoilers ① One star is deducted for this point The protagonist knew that the nail thing would happen a long time ago, and he also knew that he had no way to deal with the nail. Of course, I don't know if he dealt with it after Chapter 91. The author certainly said that it gave a family-friendly ending, which is commendable. If the author did not explain it at the end of each chapter, I might not have been able to read Chapter 91. As early as when he went to pick up the third child, he already knew that the one with the nails was the worst, and he needed to save it, and he was the most anxious. As a result, it took so long Of course some people will say, isn't this blocked by Khorne and the others? Then, the child on the poisonous planet was in quite a miserable condition, didn't he need to be saved? I feel that there is a very big loophole in it, which is the child with the poisonous gas. He went to the subspace to have a meal and was beaten for three months. During this period, he could have driven the spaceship by himself to rescue the child with the nails, and then returned to the poisonous planet to continue. If you say you're afraid of being blocked, wouldn't it be better if your protagonist goes alone in a car, or if you just let some evil god teleport you there directly? It just so happens that Nurgle owes the protagonist once. I think he would be happy to not fight Khorne and take away Khorne's big guarantee. And I learned about this very early. It's not that the protagonist has forgotten the plot, but that the plot has always been there, and the protagonist has always been among me. It seems that I have forgotten this matter when I experience every child planet, and I am not anxious at all. I can understand that the protagonist wants to give every child a good childhood, but I don't understand. What's the use of being so heartbroken when the child was nailed in the end? And I feel that the author can actually avoid this matter. For example, when they go to the nail planet, the nail is nailed in early, no matter when you go, it will be nailed in. This creates an irreversible established fact, which may make the readers feel better. Because the previous one is completely an invincible setting, and your suspense, and this matter is also a particularly tragic matter, buried in this matter very early, of course the audience wants to get an ending, I went to save the child in time, instead of delaying for a long time, in the end, someone just drove the nail in, and you came to give up this afterthought. I feel like we can't blame the protagonist for what he did wrong, or who did it wrong. Logically speaking, the plot of this setting will make people feel that someone did something wrong, but if you think about it carefully, you don't know who did it wrong. Because the protagonist just wants to change this fate, but if he does not change this fate, he will not lose anything. He said that it is a child, but it is not his flesh and blood, and he has never seen this child, so what can he do if he does not change it? It was the author who gave the protagonist this responsibility, and with layers of foreshadowing, everyone felt that the protagonist could save the child and give the child a good development, so there was a feeling of promotion first and then suppression. And there is another most amazing thing, that is, in about chapter 90 or 89, the nail kid asked the protagonist why you saved me. At that time, the protagonist didn't say it was his father, it was because the kid had grown so big. I was thinking, this child has experienced the worst of all children. Doesn't he yearn for his father's love the most? It turns out that because your parents are tall, you can't put them down, or something like that. I didn't understand the emotion he expressed at that time. What did it mean? The protagonist has given up on the idea of admitting that he is the father of the opposite party, so how can he want others to admit that you are his father? In my personal opinion, you might as well just say that you are his father, and then you can try to influence him, because he really didn't have a father when he was a child. Now, the meaning of why the protagonist wants to be their father is not clear, because before accepting this child, you want to give them fatherly love, but when this child is born, you obviously hesitate, because this child does not fit the image of a child, can you deny the previous meaning? ②No stars, just wanted to mention it I haven't seen this one yet. I only saw the subspace plot later on, so I'll mention it. I feel like it's a foreshadowing, asking the protagonist to work for the Emperor and the others. But the protagonist written by the author is the protagonist. If the original protagonists oppress the protagonist of this book, it will cause a certain amount of discomfort among readers. In particular, the author also set up an image of Xianyun Yehe for this protagonist. If he doesn't like the image of taking care of things, some people will say that he should be dragged back to work part-time, etc. Then I guess the character design will collapse. Of course, the protagonist will go back to help with big things. This is understandable. After all, this is what we are here for. If this is some kind of file, and the protagonist has to do everything from managing various legions, then he will be an old man. And I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and Huang Pizi when they met was strange. I don't know why, maybe there is something wrong with my understanding. Of course, I actually hope that the protagonist will not collect all the children and return them to the biological father. I read other book reviews that seem to have this trend. After all, I haven't finished reading it yet. Generally speaking, I still hope that the protagonist will not be treated as a tool. Summary: This book belongs to Yun Zhongyun and can be read with great pleasure. Enthusiastic book friends also answer the nouns and other questions. The interaction of the protagonist raising a baby is also very interesting and full of laughter. It is in the list of high-scoring books.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that there is not enough to read It's a good read and I love it. It's lighthearted and humorous. It's hand-written by an old artist. It has a lot of laughs. It's my first choice for relaxation. I can't think of words to describe it. All in all, it's a five-star review and I'll update soon! ! ! ! If I don't get updates, I'll eat the author alive

Raise twenty, a new experience, the author will update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

So far, the author has not been biased and treated them differently. On the other hand, there are some books next door where either the protagonist treats other primarchs well and then beats one of them up when he appears, or they devote a long paragraph to describing a certain primarch being humiliated, which makes people angry. The main character of this book is a very good male mother (Mist) and it's very cool that he doesn't treat the originals differently😋 (If there are other similar articles, you are welcome to recommend them, as long as they don't treat the originals differently)

Very nice (still want to see) ╰◟◞ ͜ ╭◜◝ ͡ ◜◝ ͡ ◝ ͡ ╮ (Please...)  ╰◟◞ ͜ ◟◞ ͜ ◟◞ ╯ __ ᐝ (T^T) / o しーJ

, Very good food. Although the protagonist is invincible at the beginning, I thought it was a cool article at first, and it is actually a cool article. However, this is not an ordinary cool article. This is a warm article about Warhammer 30K Kindergarten Development. Sbarasi, of course, is still a cool article.

The protagonist is very powerful, not boring or particularly useless. The emperor is still a social and engineering man, and his emotional intelligence is comparable to that of an adult banana! The protagonist raising a child is very cute, and being discovered by the emperor and fighting for custody is even more interesting! There is no heroine. The protagonist is not from Bengtie. Don't worry. The biggest shortcoming is that the update is too slow. I actually took a day off yesterday. It wasn't enough to watch, and I took a day off to watch! Author quick update!

Very beautiful! But I'm also curious, what is the protagonist's world like? He should be a god, and his friends should also be gods, the kind of humans who become gods. (It feels so CP, it gives me the feeling of an old married couple)

I still haven't figured out what the protagonist's identity is? Why so awesome?

It's not that Hammer-y, but the originals are well written and have a family-friendly feel. The existence of the protagonist is deus ex machina to a certain extent, which makes Warhammer's feces and despair less obvious. If you want to see the family interactions between the originals, it's highly recommended.

It's super good-looking and very friendly to Yun Chui. This is the first time I've read a Warhammer fanfic (I just wish the author could explain the background in more detail). It's a very heartwarming and healing story with a little bit of comedy about raising a cub. The sense of security brought by the protagonist is really strong.

The writing is very easy, but it's a bit difficult to listen to the dialogue between multiple characters, Horus always sounds like a lolita [face covering]

I have read so many books about time-traveling Warhammer primarchs, and this one is the most comfortable to read, and it has to be rubbed by the hands of an older person.

Cute and cute [shy] not bad at all, very good-looking [send heart] ps: Tang Song is a man who can become a mother (bushi)

The book is very nice. It would be better if the book could be updated from two times a day to five times a day.

A very novel Warhammer theme and well written. Using the Butcher's Nail as an introduction to attract the reader's interest and advance the plot is good, but not good enough, because the reader can accept a wrong route once to raise expectations and sense of urgency to enhance the reading experience, but cannot accept it twice, let alone being nailed. Such a sense of loss and the previous sense of urgency will constantly divert the reader's attention, thereby affecting the reading experience, and nitpicking the details of all plots, and I am in this state.

Everyone the author writes is so cute! ! ! And, coming to us now is the biggest victim of the original body's Little Pig scam—Tang and Song Dynasty! ! !

So far, it's still very good, but it's just too little. I read the latest chapter in one go, and when I saw the update button, I was a little overwhelmed. In Chapter 100, Angron killed his brother with his own hands. Originally Angron was planted with the Butcher's Nail, which made me very unhappy, and then there was such a tragic drama. Earlier I seemed to have seen the author saying that he wanted to write a happy ending. That's why I read it, but it ended up being tragic, so that's it.

It looks so good😋😋😋 I'm a little curious about what the main character looks like and want to draw the same mouth teeth!