Beat the Death-Defying Game

The plot is quite novel, and it can be seen that the author really likes the characters he created (each chapter has a small theater), but there are still those small problems. There are too many characters, resulting in too little content distribution and no memory points (the author has already said that he will correct it!) Each dungeon is quite unique (at least most of them have not been seen in other articles), but the grasp of the plot is a little vague (maybe it is my problem). Large dungeons usually have about 8 chapters. When I read Chapter 7, I felt that the plot had just developed, but... It ended? (Okay, I didn't see enough [cool] in the abbreviation), and the ending was a bit sloppy (personal feeling!) Some dungeons are too special, like the King's dungeon, if there are no props or teammates, or the one in the Human Garden, if there are no bombs... I don't know how to win (I'm stupid, I can't figure it out [smiles]) In short, that's what it means. Remain! It's all pretty well done (I'm looking forward to a large copy!) But I don't know why no one is watching it. . . I'd better change the introduction... The first time I read the introduction, I wasn't interested at all. I just came here for the author of the cultivation department [face covering]. If you can, you can change the first chapter (it's a bit common), and you won't be interested until you read a few chapters. Anyway, come on [blow a kiss] (It's so passionate! It makes me want to write an article too)

It feels okay, but for me, the pace of the plot is a little too fast. Maybe it's because I was used to writing twenty or thirty pictures in a copy before. I feel like I am watching a copy with only 567 pictures now. It feels like I am out of my mind. Now I can't remember what it is about. Well, the only impression that comes to my mind is that the heroine seems to be quite smart.

Very good looking, hope it becomes popular 😋