Hong Kong Crossover: Brother Crow's Girlfriend, the Heiress

I found that many fanfics of Brother Xiaosa and Brother Crow really like to save Ah Fang. Even though the protagonist has warned of the consequences, she will still identify him, and then Pig's Feet will still wipe Ah Fang's ass. Who is this person? Heartthrob?

Dear author, the audience of your book is all Chinese people. Our common language is Mandarin, so the first few chapters can be in Cantonese. Can you use Mandarin directly in the rest? Although there is a Mandarin translation, it is really hard to read and feels like it is being repeated, especially when listening to the book. Some of the highly rated crow fanfics are not written in Mandarin.

I didn't watch it the first time, but I caught up with it the second time. The writing at the beginning is a bit messy, but it starts to get better later on, the heroine setting is also established, and the male protagonist setting is not considered OOC! Very satisfied! I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but it's not easy to find good fan fiction, so I'll give it 5 stars. There will be more updates later, I hope it won't be unfinished and don't stop updating!

I couldn't stand it at first, I jumped a little bit, but I made a lot of progress later, and I think it's pretty good, so I'm catching up.

Delicious, really delicious, I like it hehe

It's really good-looking, the characters are very delicate, engaging and tender.

The writing is very smooth and the characters are vividly drawn, which is good