Douluo Dalu: My Spear Strikes Like a Dragon

The beginning was okay, not earth-shattering, nor bitter or bitter. The rhythm is really good, at least I feel comfortable watching it. But there is still a little problem. It would be better to change the dialogue symbol at the front, which will affect the look and feel. The follow-up depends on how the author wants to write. It is best to have an outline so that the writing is steady but the rhythm is just right. Another important point is that Tomato does not have the right to adapt Douluo (more than half of the Douluo fans have been removed from the shelves after writing), and I don't know what the author will do next.

It's okay, but there is a problem. When the character speaks, he doesn't use "" to separate it from the narration. It's not right. Sometimes we are separated, and sometimes we are not separated.

My overall reading experience is that there are some flaws but the flaws are not hidden. The author can improve

Yes, it can be very good to watch. A single female protagonist would be great, but the character of the protagonist is weird if there are multiple female protagonists. (And the original text of Douluo seems to have a single female protagonist)

The counterattack of the low-end version of the ordinary soul master🤦

The rhythm is slow and very everyday. Except for the punctuation of speech and pronouns, it is easy to make mistakes.

It's pretty good. I like it very much. It's not a bunch of things and I don't think about anyone to rely on. It's pretty good.

You must stick to it

It's still very good. It's not bad for civilians' counterattack flow. It's not like other plug-ins that exaggerate martial arts and explode the sky. It's still relatively smooth.

It's okay, you can read it, but the AI ​​polishing and some AI ghostwriting are too obvious.