Nascent Soul Starts, I Prove the Way with Thunder Method

It's so beautiful. Blessed are those who love hats. Chapter 67 is a gift for a daughter.

To be honest, I thought it was very interesting. I am also an old bookworm. I have read books for more than ten years, including Zhu Xian, Mortal, Covering the Sky, Immortal Rebellion, Perfection, etc. I think everyone has their own preferences. I quite like the style of this book. There is no struggle to start from scratch. It has a high level of cultivation. It looks very comfortable because it avoids the pretentiousness of many novices. The article also feels better written. Delicate, I think the writing is quite good in terms of emotions, but the update speed is a bit slow. Then don't say that I am a brush in the comment area, and ask me how much a piece costs. I am not an author. This book is indeed a rare good article in Tomato. I don't know how to write something like Xianwu Emperor to be read by so many people, and the protagonist's character is as indifferent as the boss of Cultivation of Immortality.

At the moment, I feel like I quite like the protagonist's character. He doesn't have the strength. It feels like I don't eat beef. It feels more like a scholar. And emotionally, I like him a lot, but I don't have the strength to start a harem.

It feels pretty good. It's not the kind of mindless novel. The plot is reasonable, and the protagonist is not indecisive. Overall, it's in line with my personal preferences. But you don't need to write in such detail about some aspects of emotions. You just wrote several chapters about the close relationship between the protagonist and Song Yuyao. You can totally be more brief about these. You can write more about the protagonist's exploration and development of the sect, etc., And less about the emotional aspects. Why is it that every time he encounters danger, the protagonist lets Low Realm go first? Why is it that Calvary always says, "I want to accompany you" like a crazy person? Isn't this an inappropriate delay?

It is said that he was reborn into the ancestor of the Immortal World in the Nascent Soul stage. In fact, the ancestor of the Immortal World ate the protagonist's soul and kept his memory. As soon as the protagonist traveled through the past, he immediately changed. He has exactly the same personality as his predecessor. I don't know if the protagonist is still himself.

The content of this book is generally good. I just hope that the author will not write a harem novel in the future, which is too common. He can provide some experiences for them to improve Song Yuyao's abilities.

Write quickly, author, please, I don't even have to play the peak game to pursue your novel [crying]

If I don't give this book a 9, I'd be sorry to the author [laughs]

I like this type of person. It's not the kind that has no status and no cultivation, nor is it the old-fashioned old grandfather style.

Come on, author, your writing is great! ! ! !

The writing is very good. I stayed up late to catch up and it was good.

The plot is pretty good, but a little slow. You just need to speed it up a bit. Take Wen Ruyu away

It seems pretty good now, and the combat power has not collapsed without any brainless provocation. It will be a good book if it continues.

It can be pretty good

It's okay. Give it five stars.

Good-looking and good-looking. Nice

The author has something special, and what he writes is what I like to read [star]

I haven't encountered such a beautiful book in a long time.

At least it's cool enough hahahahaha

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

To be honest, the writing is indeed good, far beyond my expectations. The writing style is okay, but the description of the fighting is not exciting enough. I hope the author can improve this.

Okay, it's very good, and the plot and writing are okay.