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Teacher [sends heart], look here, here! Oi, oi, oi (slap on the belly)oi, oi, oi (slap on the belly)oi, oi, oi (slap on the belly)oi, oi, oi (slap on the belly)oi, oi, oi (slap on the belly) oi, oi, o i (slap the belly hard) oi, oi, oi (slap the belly hard) [KISS] I went to see what Teacher Acri wrote and it was also super invincible and huge and beautiful [sending my heart], I couldn't stop reading it [licking the screen] [love] I'll just give it a thunderous praise! [Licking the screen] Let me take a look at teacher's draft box [admiration] [admiration]

Good-looking √ The characters are full and three-dimensional. So far, I don't see any problems. It's just that some details need to be processed again, but it's the same without changing it. In addition, there are too many words in the first few paragraphs. The author can divide it into more paragraphs, and the look and feel will be much better : D Yu and Yan are very good at knocking each other out! Yu is an elf, cheerful, lively and a bit irritable (especially when faced with inflammation), but beating means kissing and scolding means love! It means your wife loves you, Yan! Yan is the character mentioned in the profile, and he also has a special island version of the pain room√ and then he was successfully beaten after being discovered (o^^o)♪ He is a cute girl; Shu is very lively and active; Cang's family seems to be very rich, and I feel that this person is a bit of a contrast; Lang is my favorite character, at first I thought he was looking for trouble, haha, but later on it looks quite funny; Mao's character It's a fool's errand; Huai's name is very memorable, Zhen Huai = really bad, and with his iconic bitter gourd face, he is also a well-described character; Xiao Wang doesn't know whether to call him reliable or unreliable, serious or not, in short, he is somewhere in between! The author's choice of names is very interesting. Tang Lang, Dai Shu, Zhen Huai... Are all very memorable. It can be seen that he has put a lot of thought into both the plot and the character creation. Looking forward to the subsequent plot development√ Recommended☆☆☆☆☆

Darlings, you can look here. Take them to move to Mengmeng's big eyes. There's no way to send a kiss here. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Both sides agree.

I took a look at it. The subject matter is very novel. It seems that there will be many stories later [Thinking] However, the author's description of Gong's shaping is a little different from the primary school student's writing style and the introduction... Let's see if Gong's image can be shaped more specifically later. According to the previous Gong's character, it should be quite double standards. Does it have to be sliced and fused to make his character darker and damper? (? There is also a logic after Gong awakens his power. I feel very strange. Why does he become enlightened with emotions after awakening? I don't think I can explain this point, but it is still very good-looking. Looking forward to the author's story [shy]

The title of the novel attracted me at first glance, and the introduction made me look forward to it. When I opened it, it was still a baby novel, and I couldn't get enough of it. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates. Hehehe (forgive my poor language orz) I really like this subject matter.

I'm going! 😍The author's writing is also very awesome! 😍After reading this, I directly called all the eighteen generations of my ancestors to read this novel! 😡 Resurrection should be resurrected, resign should be resigned, and drop out should be dropped out of school 😡 The author doesn't even know how good his writing is 😡👊 I just sighed after reading it 😳? Clouds☁️? Da↘da↗da↘da↗da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact😨Cloud☁️Genshin Impact😄. No, I will spend my whole life praising this novel😍What the author wrote is just like my Feng Feng😭This work should only exist in the sky😭👍Doubao Doubao please tell me whether the author will directly update it to the end tomorrow? 😭👊The author's writing is super awesome😭👊os and it makes me eat well😏👊, if it doesn't work, the author will finish it directly for me tomorrow😡You must give good reviews and support the author😘👊Doubao Doubao, please call everyone to support the author with me😡

Good looking🤩 This kind of novel with a theme is really novel, and the characters are also very fleshed out. The relationship development between our Squidward and the elf seems to be very sweet so far. I am looking forward to the development of the plot later [Blowing Kiss] Author, please do more updates! ! !

Good-looking [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] is particularly beautiful [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [loving] [loving] [loving] [loving] [loving] [loving] sweet [shy] [shy] [shy] The author is so good [top post] [please update] [bird food masterpiece] [bookshelf plus one]

It's good to watch, the plot is very interesting, the author will give you a lot of support, waiting for you [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's so nice [lick the screen][lick the screen]I found such a ss book[lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][ Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] I just ate it up, eating it so much [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen] [Licking the screen]

It's good to read. I've been reading the novel for a long time and I feel that the subject matter is very novel. It seems that there are basically no similarities. The teacher's writing is also very good and I look forward to the follow-up development.

I really enjoyed reading this novel, the plot has constant twists and turns, and the characters are so cute and interesting. [Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like][Please update][Add one to bookshelf][Already planted]

Super invincible and beautiful, tied with Wuwuwu ~ [crying] Keep up the good work, author, and I will follow you! [Love] I was immediately shocked by the deliciousness of the meat in this book. There are quite a lot of delicious moments at the moment. I wonder if they will be deleted in the future.

Both Xiao Qingtuan and Squidward are very cute. The two young lovers are so sweet and at ease.

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty! ! ! The little octopus and the elf are super cute, and the big octopus is so exciting every time he appears. There is no meal replacement on the Internet.

Nice! But I feel like there are a lot of conflicts, and I feel a little tired. [Thinking] Maybe I prefer something more stable. Overall, it's very good, keep up the good work! [Blowing kiss]

Beautiful, super cute elf and octopus

Super nice book

I'll go, this is so touching

Really a seasoned foodie

So pretty, so pretty!

Little octopus…nothing…no…what…

That's awesome. How can you write such awesome words?

It's simply so beautiful [please ask for more updates][please seek more updates][please seek more updates][already planted][add one to the bookshelf] I love this setting so much [lick screen]

Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super good looking

Fish: If you raise it by yourself, you can "eat" it with confidence Both are very cute, 🐙x🧚🏻‍♀️

I'm very satisfied with it so far, but I don't know if there will be a deputy cp in the future. . I don't really like sub-CP, I hope the author can reply after seeing it😘

Delicious😋😋😋 It would be a pity not to watch it, don't miss it, there will be more food than you can eat [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Oh my god😋You are so good at writing and it's so beautiful

Very, very, very, very beautiful! ! ! Show them all to me [angry] [angry]