Anko Bus: Faust Is My Best Friend

A very interesting Anco article. Although the word count is quite small, it has great potential. And because the dice girl in this book is a blood-sucking dice girl. This creates the first famous scene in the book. Gregor kills the insect soldiers and directly ptsds, releases a quarter of the Emperor Fei, and directly kills Yuri and Hopkins, making Yuri directly start reading the resurrection bar on the red team as an enemy. Then Dante calls for help to attract the unprepared Vergil, and the famous scene in Chapter 9 is staged in the first chapter in advance. The author still needs to pay attention to giving each chapter a chapter name. Having a chapter name can help you read the book better. Now it's just the numbers that make people look bad. You must know that there are few chapters now, so there is a great chance of revision. There are too many chapters later on, and it's hard to tell which chapter tells what story, and I can't easily find famous scenes when looking back. Chapter names can be taken from the main story in the chapter. For example, Chapter 5 can be named "The Great Failure, Emperor Fei was born". If you really can't think of a chapter name, you can use the fixed price and AI to summarize the name, which is better than just a number now.

So far, it seems that the viewing experience is very good, and both Dice Girl and the author are quite effective in the program. But I feel like the title of the book doesn't quite match. How about using dice and flow as key words instead? In addition, if you really can't think of a chapter name, you can actually just use the plot chapter name of the bus and add the numbers. The look and feel will probably be better?

Give me a five-star encouragement (I do this because it's fun, I'm usually very strict) Some suggestions for writing a book: 1. The process of throwing dice takes up ink, wastes time, and seriously interrupts the narrative. Don't write those cumbersome formulas in the article anymore, streamline the process and write it directly as; Example: Did Dante dodge when faced with an attack? [Dodged 1—Been elbowed hard 100] (Sudden attack +10) 73: Got elbowed hard 2. Just by rolling dice, the protagonist's image will not be full after all, only appearance without soul. After each chapter, one or several chapters will be opened based on the options that can represent the protagonist's image when the dice are rolled. These options will be processed and woven to tell some character stories before the start of the main film to complete the character image. These characters can in turn add variables when rolling dice, and can also make the article more interesting to write.

Wow, this book is so beautiful. I have to read the latest chapter several times every day with the attitude of eager to find mistakes in the text (forced truth)

First of all, as an Anke article, the quality of this book is undoubtedly very good on the site. Even if it is placed in the Yueji Anke area elsewhere, it is still quite excellent. After a period of development of the monthly articles on the site, the focus of the plot has changed from running through the trilogy to focusing on bus-related plots. It has moved from fans of the original work to the public to being simplified and regularized. This is undoubtedly a good thing for fans of the monthly articles. Yueji's huge worldview provides a substantial material library and enough free writing space for novel writing. On the contrary, it tests the author's hard skills such as writing and imagination. However, Ankewen does not need to worry about these problems. With Dice Niang as the plot direction, Ankewen's plot development is full of unknowns, and sometimes it is unexpected but very reasonable ("Dice Niang has her own outline"); because of the randomness of Dice Niang, Anke's tour guide often needs strong plot control and arrangement capabilities, as well as a very good brain to justify Dice Niang's choices. This also makes the writing ability of a tour guide much higher than that of ordinary writers. What you really need to worry about when reading An Kewen is the plot going crazy caused by the bloodthirsty sic girl going crazy, but this situation is still rare (is it, is it?) Summary: Anke is a very excellent and rare monthly book on the site. Those who have never read Anke can feel free to jump in. This book will definitely not disappoint you.

It's a very good book. Although I haven't read this style of writing before, I can still understand it, and it's great for people who are not familiar with the book. Although I have only read the first few chapters, I can still clearly feel a problem, that is, the dice throwing part feels a bit too cumbersome and can be streamlined a little. (Alas☝🏻🤓, I would like to recommend a book I wrote myself, although there are only three chapters now, and I want to see how the author behaves differently on the sinners in my book, especially Don Quixote in my book [smile]) (By the way, five stars doesn't seem to count as a rating, right? Let's give four stars here first)

Although I have not read Ankewen before and I don't know whether the quality of this book in Ankewen is good or not, but from the perspective of a bus, this is undoubtedly a good work. And when even the author doesn't know how the plot will develop, there is no problem with the logic of the plot, and the characters are not OOC. The content is currently small, but the quality is very high. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

Very good An Kewen, follows the general plot flow but has a bloodthirsty dice girl. At least so far, there are not a lot of self-created settings. The whole serious part is basically supported by the original work, and the rest is a very good creative part.

I saw too much of the kind-hearted lady (?) Before (at most, she was given four consecutive fatal judgments (where is the kindness?)) And was immediately shaken to her core, but that one used a big hand to change the timeline. The bloodthirsty here now seems really terrifying.

When I saw that Newton's habits caused me not to pay attention to the fight, my intuition told me that this book is better. Because Newton was indeed the kind of person who would forget whether he had eaten or not because of his research. Keep writing wow! ! ! Daily updates! I can hear you!

Quite interesting. However, it seems that the judgment only uses 50 as the dividing line to judge the two results. It is recommended to divide it into a few more limits, such as 1-10 and 11-20, to get a few more results.

Perception: An Kewen's unique bloodthirsty dice girl. (But Lord Niu feels so weak)

Very good An Kewen, but I personally think that An Kewen still can't adapt to the death of the protagonist, because it is really disconnected. I hope the protagonist will not be as GG as the introduction says.

Very pretty. I enjoyed watching Luo Jia's part. Stopped updating. [Smile]

It's really good, but the noise makes my eyes hurt. Is there any way to write it more concisely?

This book is so beautiful! Basically, I rarely see Anke Wen of Yueji, thank you to the author who wrote it!

Very good, and one of the rare monthly planners, An Kewen, come on! [Blowing kiss]

Awesome, except for the beginning, which is mediocre but it is Anke after all, the subsequent plot arrangement will be better. After that, let's see how the dice girl tortures the author.

It's quite delicious (lick the corner of your mouth)

A rare subject matter, come on!

God, the author will update soon

The fun Anke book is so beautiful (hi

What a good book. It's been a long time since I saw An Kewen. It's Yueji. It's so delicious.

The author is very energetic and writes well. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

The current impression is very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I was driving my car normally on the road but was hit by an older brother/sister who was passing by. He died on the spot and was forced to modify the world line. The bloodthirsty sic girl is really scary.

Personal impression is good

A rare monthly calculator book, well written

Very good, although the pace is a bit fast, but acceptable

It's so good👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻It feels so refreshing and comfortable to finish the existing chapters in one go. I like it so much