[A New Author’s Debut, No Heroine]
Jiang Che wakes up to find himself the heir to a bankrupt ranch on the Qinglan Archipelago.
There are debts, a sick mother, a missing father, a berry orchard trampled by Wild Pokemon, and a Mareep shunned by the townspeople because it can’t control its electricity.
Other people transmigrate into the Pokemon world and start by setting off on a journey, challenging Gyms, and aiming to become Champion.
Jiang Che looks down at the drafty sheep pen and his empty wallet. First, he can only fix the ranch gate.
Drawing on his past-life knowledge of veterinary medicine and ecological farming, he starts with mixing berry feed, treating injured Pokemon, and restoring migration routes, gradually bringing the abandoned ranch back to life.
Mareep’s electric glow lights up the path at night, Oddish’s fragrance brings the orchard back to life, and Poochyena tracks down lost younglings on rainy nights.
The story is quite attractive 🤭, but the AI polished description is a bit heavy, and it seems a bit tiring to repeat too many words and sentences. The more you read later, the less patient you become. The author can adjust the rhythm appropriately and don't always use a lot of space to repeat the details that have been said before. Sometimes it will be more comfortable to read in one sentence and then write in detail after a few chapters. Now I'm a little confused. I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot, but the pace of the article feels very tiring while reading and I want to give up. My brain is fighting 🤔 I hope the author will write better and better.
I have read more than 20 chapters one after another, which is not much, but I feel it is very fulfilling. The author's writing is very documentary, and everyone the protagonist meets is very reliable! It's really a sense of accomplishment to build up the ranch bit by bit! The descriptions of many details are great, making people really believe that if the Pokémon world really exists, it will be like what is described in the books. There isn't much interaction between Pokémon and people, but the writing is very warm. Pokémon don't understand human language and writing, but they understand the meaning of home just like humans. Super cool, I hope the author sticks to it!
There is another reason why it's too boring. It's a definitely dangerous place. The protagonist is always there. When the patrol comes, he doesn't call the person away. If you are very strong, forget it. The elves are still in their initial form plus an injured dog.
I have a question and I wonder if the author can answer it. This bankrupt agricultural property owes almost 4 million, leaving the protagonist with a piece of land (the land even needs to be reclaimed...) And a problematic Meili sheep? Nothing else? At least you'll have some more plants left to grow and other Pokémon you can raise. And it feels closer to a breeding house than a ranch.
When I was watching it, I always felt something was strange. Talking to my family was too stiff, not like talking to my family, like talking to the boss. The focus in the early stage should be the ranch. Why do I frequently go to sea to do missions? It's a bit putting the cart before the horse.
The logic of individual character actions is okay, but reading it as a whole chapter is awkward. It feels like a complete story even if the Pokémon part is removed. The handling of the current incident is very strange. As a second-level god and causing a serious natural disaster, it should normally be handled by the gym leader or above, rather than sending two little shrimps to follow up.
Like AI, it seems very laborious
Good-looking, good-looking
Strong recommendation, great love for detail control, it is not a simple matter of conquering, upgrading and evolving. I hope the author can maintain the standard.
A lot of them are not, but I feel like I can't write the same sentence without these two sentence patterns.