[Campus] [Secret Love] [Loyal Dog] [Rich Family] [HE]
[Broken low self-esteem and forbearing academic master × Broken loyal dog wealthy sports student]
I am Li Wenkai, a top student, and I have a good buddy.
One day, I caught him kissing me secretly while I pretended to be asleep.
The next day, he secretly kissed me again. This time I stopped pretending. I opened my eyes and looked at him directly...
Reader comments
It seems like about ten chapters so far
It can be seen that the author's writing style is still relatively immature, and he needs to write more and practice more [Salute][Salute]
The fluency and completeness of the plot still need to be improved. Some places feel a little bit incomplete, and the emotional transition is not very natural. It always feels a bit strange when reading [Thinking][Thinking]
One thing that puzzles me is that the grade setting of the two people in the article should actually be high school students, right? Although the school life is not described much, it seems more suitable for high school, but the age setting is 21 or even 22 years old [what] [what]
Author, please continue to work hard😊😊
Chapter 17. I found an interesting point. The author likes to use chapter titles like "... You" ("You" refers to Li Deqi). Reading the title always makes me think that the article should be from a first-person perspective, but it is actually a third-person perspective, which always makes me feel a little disconnected. It is recommended that you adjust the chapter name or change the perspective of the article so that the two can correspond [Thinking][Thinking]
I haven't read such a "childish" novel in a long time. The author's young and unfamiliar writing style not only causes the plot to be stiff and unsmooth, but also causes a series of problems such as the lack of three-dimensional characters. I can confirm that the two of them are indeed in college (I saw the specific major names), but I still think these two high schools are more suitable, because this university is really written as a high school. I can confirm that they are indeed in their early twenties, but I still think it is more appropriate for them to be sixteen or seventeen years old, because the characters are too innocent and childish. Such innocent and childish beauty is just right in high school, not college [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
When I looked through the table of contents and looked at the chapter names, I found that there should be knives, and there were more than one. In order to avoid eating knives, I ran away first🌚
Come on, the author [salute][salute]
It seems like about ten chapters so far It can be seen that the author's writing style is still relatively immature, and he needs to write more and practice more [Salute][Salute] The fluency and completeness of the plot still need to be improved. Some places feel a little bit incomplete, and the emotional transition is not very natural. It always feels a bit strange when reading [Thinking][Thinking] One thing that puzzles me is that the grade setting of the two people in the article should actually be high school students, right? Although the school life is not described much, it seems more suitable for high school, but the age setting is 21 or even 22 years old [what] [what] Author, please continue to work hard😊😊 Chapter 17. I found an interesting point. The author likes to use chapter titles like "... You" ("You" refers to Li Deqi). Reading the title always makes me think that the article should be from a first-person perspective, but it is actually a third-person perspective, which always makes me feel a little disconnected. It is recommended that you adjust the chapter name or change the perspective of the article so that the two can correspond [Thinking][Thinking] I haven't read such a "childish" novel in a long time. The author's young and unfamiliar writing style not only causes the plot to be stiff and unsmooth, but also causes a series of problems such as the lack of three-dimensional characters. I can confirm that the two of them are indeed in college (I saw the specific major names), but I still think these two high schools are more suitable, because this university is really written as a high school. I can confirm that they are indeed in their early twenties, but I still think it is more appropriate for them to be sixteen or seventeen years old, because the characters are too innocent and childish. Such innocent and childish beauty is just right in high school, not college [sending my heart] [sending my heart] When I looked through the table of contents and looked at the chapter names, I found that there should be knives, and there were more than one. In order to avoid eating knives, I ran away first🌚 Come on, the author [salute][salute]