Not Balanced and Pure? Then What Should I Call Order?

The subject matter of this book is not too new. There is no pure beauty beautification package in Collapse of Iron. However, compared with other books of the same type on Tomato, I personally think it is of the highest quality. There is no excessive and deliberate description, no pure and beautiful environment, etc. On the contrary, the author has added other elements, such as the disappearance of joy, the balanced crotch pull, and the addition of order. These points can actually create a better if-line world. Without the pure and beautiful beautification package, the Iron-Bang Iron World is only more bloody and disgusting, but the balanced weakness makes life-changing people more difficult, and the joy has been silenced ten Amber Ages ago. The combination of these three points is what makes the Iron-Beng Iron Universe the most difficult. At the same time, I think the author's understanding of fate is also very good, surpassing that of most people. In terms of plot, the protagonist is well arranged, not deliberately following the main plot, having his own original plot, and even patching Elio's script. In the end, there isn't much of a poisonous point. The biggest problem is probably that some people think what the protagonist says is very philosophical, but they don't know what it means. Then, the author has a fan group, and we want to join the group to play

At present, it seems that the protagonist is being tortured quite severely. It is very suitable for porn lovers and people who like torture stories... In short, I feel that every step of the protagonist is very difficult now. I hope there will be a time to relax. After all, if the whole story is tortured to the end or the torture is completed until the end, it will be difficult to be tense. In short, don't deliberately suppress the protagonist, the author is great! ! !

Ok, next I will use the most upright, straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most down-to-earth, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most honest and frank, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not packed with flowery words. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, and does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. Hua's expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that there is no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and so popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful, refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being too profound. It goes straight to the point without foreshadowing. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being flashy. It is clear and clear without being blurry. If it is frank and candid without going around in circles, I will tell you: it looks good👍

The character setting is quite good, but the plot performance is a little lacking. The main reason is that there is a lack of foreshadowing in some places. If it advances too fast, it will be too sudden. The social performance of the characters is a bit lacking. There should be more foreshadowing and corresponding chapter descriptions of the character's emotions. The protagonist can be portrayed well, but the other characters are not very rich. In addition, the plot rhythm is a bit too fast, but overall, it is a good work [Thoughts]

How can I put it, the plot is good, the description is also good, but it does feel a bit miserable when the protagonist is abused. He is either seriously injured or slightly injured. Huang Quan even reminds the protagonist that he vomits blood. I don't know if the protagonist is an empty son or something [Petrochemical]

It looks good and tastes good. As of Chapter 39, no heroine can eat it with confidence.

Everyone, there is a slight abuse of the main character in this book. If you feel a lot angry during the day, it is recommended to leave or watch it later [Thoughts]

Jin, I want to clear away the sins of that fateful man, I want to return this justice to the universe

The content is very good. The idea is unique. The only shortcoming is that the portrayal of the protagonist is not good enough. I personally think that the protagonist should go further on the road of order than Sunday. Even at first.

The writing is okay now. The male protagonist should probably be sacrificed in the end, becoming a new order or pure beauty, bringing the world back to balance, or the author can just use his imagination to create a new star god, such as salvation or something like that.

At the first watch, the flaws are revealed and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger is slightly brighter, and the spectators will listen attentively; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an oath is secretly made; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Establishing at Thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website will praise you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, do what you want without going over the rules: if you can update 70 chapters in a day, you can do whatever you want! Update quickly! ! !

Well written. While Billy does have a sense of inadequacy in certain situations, he is generally a very good choice. But, I always use different processes to get the same answer, so I deduct one star for this. What is the most severe father in the paradise-like narrative? It is the boredom of having no possibility of moving forward after his own behavior has reached its end. Why is it boredom? It is not destruction and nothingness. Without the initial boredom, it is impossible for you to withdraw from satisfaction. Without boredom, it is impossible to feel confused. The past satisfaction will engrave the meaning of all the things you have done in your memory, but only the initial boredom will make you start to step into the abyss of nothingness.

I personally think it's a good star iron fan, come on

It's delicious, the writing is excellent, the framework is clear, and the main line gradually becomes clear. But starting from Pinoconi, there is a little less flavor and a few more problems. I think an excellent fan work should be able to allow readers to fully understand the plot even if they have not read the original work. What I want to express, although I didn't read it very carefully (game), but when I read it with this book, it seemed a bit confusing. I will polish it later when I have time.

The setting is enough to attract me, and the first few chapters are also powerful. Give four stars Why four stars? The future of the author's writing style is promising. Except for the part where Taiyi stares at the front, the following content is like PPT <(－－)>. I'm just playing with Bengtie. Do you still want me to decipher it? [Hold face] I'm already tired from playing Bengtie and I still have to read PPT. [Hold face] In short, I hope I can write better in the future, come on

Yes, yes. Although it has been shown that it is a sadistic text, after seeing the characters and the strong visuals in the first few chapters, I really just want to give it three stars. However, after reading more than 20 chapters, I can see that the plot of this book is very good, and the protagonist is getting stronger step by step. Overall, it is very good-looking.

The front is indeed attractive, but the back part says that you can't get on the bus, which makes the if line a bit confusing. It is pure and balanced. Logically speaking, this line has already entered the if. People outside the plot have appeared in the space station, which means that there may be changes later. However, the appearance of the protagonist and killing the Destruction Walker can be said to have corrected the plot. The determination shown after that is to correct the mistakes and return the universe to the right track, or even move forward in a better direction. The star core hunter has no reason to refuse [exploration] [exploration]

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good. Does the author have a female protagonist? It has great potential. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too small. The author should work harder. I am optimistic that you will not die, so I will update it to death. It only has more than 30 chapters, which is too few and not enough. Don't stop updating. Good looking five stars

No beautification will collapse, I lead the revival of pure beauty order

"Your existence is just like the starry poem left by the goddess Idlila to the world: your pupils are amber formed from collapsed nebulae, and your hair is flowing with the glow of the birth of the universe. There is no need for any embellishment. The wind stirred by your skirt when you walk has made the Milky Way tremble and bloom with bright buds."

I am looking forward to the plot of Ompharos.

The plot is good, the protagonist has a good character, and his views are correct

The writing is very good, among the Beng Tie novels I have read, it is already very good.

The setting is very novel and the plot is pretty good. It's a pretty good book in Tomato.

Take a look first, then comment later What should I say, although there are a few chapters that are a bit overwhelming (you can skip them if you don't want to read them), the others are acceptable. Overall it's okay, as long as the follow-up combat power doesn't collapse. It all depends on Tomato. It feels like it's enough for a newcomer to write like this.

Damn it, why is the rating so low?

It feels pretty good, but if I write about knives again, I'll have to send knives to you, idiot miscellaneous fish author [smile]'

I still think it's fine.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Mouth melon, beautiful mouth and teeth [laughs]