I Livestream in an Uncanny Ancient World

It's hard to stretch, it's poisoning me to death.

Shouldn't we create an organization ourselves? He is so smart in another world and knows how to run away, but he won't run away in reality. If someone asks you to do it, just do it. Then the people above don't know as much as you do.

To polish and polish. What kind of character is the protagonist? Whether he is handsome, ugly or mature is not reflected, the story begins. It was a bit sudden. Just like at the beginning of the story, before the car started, I was desperately trying to catch up with him in the back, and he was running desperately in front. So it needs to be polished.

It's great, why are there so few people watching it? It's just that some of the dialogues are a bit obscure, but generally speaking, you can analyze and understand them later. I think this book is several levels higher than the current recommended editions, and I hope the author will stick to it. Moreover, this book has some ideas, that is, the creativity is very good, the world view is also quite good, and the protagonist's style is clean and neat, without the heart of a saint, and he is cautious in doing things. What I mean by "obscure" is that some of the prefaces do not match the subtitles, and the dialogues are not clear, making it difficult for people to understand the specific outline of the plot. For example, in the first scene in the village, the boundaries between bugs and humans are blurred, and the fighting scenes are also a bit confusing, which is very unfriendly to those who are quick to read. For the time being, these actions can be regarded as foreshadowing, but the dialogue and settings still need to be carefully polished, otherwise readers will be confused and lose interest.

It's so outrageous. I can only say that according to the logic in the novel world, the anchor's live broadcast of the phonetic symbols has been broadcast live before and also has personal information. Even if the personal information is not your own, how many days will it take for the official to check you after such a big event? You can find out where you are within a few hours. So the poison is over in three chapters.

The protagonist knows that he is live streaming and knows that the reward money is useful, but the protagonist does not speak. Even if you can't see the barrage, don't you know that you want money?

The pace is too slow. I read Chapter 7. The protagonist is unemployed. He enters the dungeon for the first time to start the live broadcast. After leaving the dungeon, a former colleague introduces a new job to the protagonist. The protagonist enters the dungeon for the second time and encounters a crisis. It's a little suspenseful, but more of a question-marked one.

Everyone can absorb the protagonist's energy and blood, and you can't feel the pleasure of steadily improving your strength at all. You are completely invisible behind the system mall, and it is said to be of little use. If you don't take out the things in it, sell them for coins, and then convert them into energy and blood, you can take off directly. To put it bluntly, the author suppresses the combat power.

No wonder no one is reading it. I even fell asleep while listening to the book. I can't write the main plot in Chapter 20. The plot is incomprehensible. The protagonist doesn't even know what he is going to do. There is no point in setting up a live broadcast.

There's nothing wrong with it except that the plot is a little slow.