Duzhen Abyss: You Said He Is Just a College Student

There are no obvious bad points, (the only thing I care about is that I personally hate it. Among the characters in the article, there are many women of various colors, and there are some facial expressions [thinking]). The plot is okay, and it is not frustrating to watch. It is currently among the top batch, but it is not very bad. I tied it in the afternoon, and the score is only 6.6, Which is a bit surprising.

Yes, the protagonist's initial level is high. Don't keep failing to improve. This is also a state of oppression. It's getting more and more classic [laughs awkwardly]. When I got to college, I kept pretending to be a pig and eating feed. I was really speechless, and my level didn't improve. At the age of 18, I was in the 5th level, and the top management didn't pay attention to it. I was also playing house with the guys from 3rd Realm.

Dian is so classic, it smells like the ancient god of war [face covering]. The classic hides the truth from the daughter (the protagonist's sister) and doesn't tell the real world (the plot, wait until she is caught or encounters something bad to let her find out on her own), the classic hero saves the beauty and then falls in love with the protagonist, the classic is that only the protagonist has the highest combat power in the whole team. Fighting monsters in the main plot is hidden from ordinary people, and their memories will be erased when they see it (if you are talented, you can keep it for personal preference). If you like to watch this kind of movies, you can check it out [smile][smile]

It's very smooth. It's the kind of supernatural game that we like hidden in the city. It has a worldly atmosphere.

Overall, it is quite good, and I can give it 5 stars. The author has laid some foreshadowing, which is quite common. I am very curious about the plot behind it. It is quite interesting, so I can give it 5 stars. There are some minor flaws, but overall there are no major flaws, which does not affect the five-star rating.

Looking at the comment section, I thought it was a poisonous point, but it turned out that the protagonist was tricked. The key to the follow-up was that the protagonist was tricked and got a new inheritance, which strengthened his combat power and paved the way for the depth of the subsequent plot. This is not a poisonous point at all, but it is too harsh and rigid, based on plot logic alone. In terms of helping the seniors, they are fully qualified to be passed down. As for the aristocratic families with too much power, there are no examples in reality. The chaebols are similar. Wouldn't it be more satisfying to challenge these aristocratic families later? By the way, there is also the issue of supporting actresses. Currently, none of them have a single character, so they are not considered poisonous.

Yes, there is no obvious poison. Someone in the comment area said that even if you kill thousands of monsters at the age of 18, you still need to be tested. To be honest, it is precisely because of this that you need to be tested. Otherwise, who knows what your character is like? The pace is neither too fast nor too slow, just right, and the portrayal of the secondary characters is also very good. Many cool articles have no heroines and then mention the women in them. It feels like you are playing a Minecraft world where everyone else looks the same. It is too self-centered and not interesting. The description of other characters is also very good. I feel good. You can come and take a look. You can check the reading time on my homepage.

There are constant minor irritations, but they are all acceptable. Except for the fact that the main character is an 18-year-old genius in Level 5 and is not taken seriously by the authorities. Fortunately, there is no major irritant to persuade him to quit. It's actually not that satisfying. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope he doesn't start a harem. The more you look at it, the better it looks. You shouldn't have a harem, right?

Okay, okay, this is the real cool article, no procrastination at all It's getting more and more delayed. Why do you have to pretend?

The writing is very good, it avoids many homogeneity problems, and it is refreshing and exciting.

It looks good. The male protagonist starts with medium to high combat power, not the little Karami. Overall, it gave me the impression of a Japanese manga. The male protagonist appears to be a high school student and is a demon-slayer guard behind his back. He has a pair of adoptive parents, a childhood sweetheart whom he can't deal with, and a good temptress in the team, as well as several big brothers. At the beginning, it is still a relaxed and happy daily life + managing demons and slaying demons. Later, it begins to suffer from deep hatred and deep hatred between a wealthy family and a monopoly vendetta + suspense of life experience. I originally thought that the hero had Naruto's script, but after looking at it, it turned out to be Sasuke's script.

It's not bad, it's just that I wrote about Zhen Yesi so well at the beginning, but when I went to the city, I felt that Zhen Yesi, a national machine, was not as good as those aristocratic families!

It looks very smooth, there is no unnecessary pretense and slap in the face, I love it.

Nice! The dozens of chapters so far are very good to read, there are no glitches, everything is good, the protagonist is very likable, the plot progress is not too fast or too slow, it is just right, the writing style is relatively smooth, the author's writing style does not have any strange language problems and a lot of punctuation marks, it is very good, very good, very good

Generally speaking, it's good. Genius's refreshing writing is correct. It doesn't have any poisonous points. It's still a grainy writing. You can read it. It's in line with Tomato's authentic refreshing writing. It's not so thrilling. I'll give it a try. I'm a little bored after seeing the update. Let's see what happens next.

The main character has strong sanity and no ink. It's really cool. Brother, I've read so many books and this one is definitely the best among the cool books.

The writing is okay. In fact, the training system is very complete at present. Each medium has a qualitative change and is not just a pile of numerical values. The plot is so-so, and I have the desire to read on at an above-average level. As for the characters, the protagonist's character is well described at present. Many people tend to write such a decisive and murderous character like a robot murderer. At present, the character of Lao Shen is still very three-dimensional and distinct. I feel that the other supporting characters are a lot worse. Mainly because the protagonist has improved too quickly, and several supporting characters have become dragging characters. In fact, we can give them a few adventures, otherwise they will soon become a sideline. Keep up the good work, I think next, after clarifying the life experience, and being able to develop more towards the abyss, the main thing is to write out the opposition between man and the abyss. The realm is too fast. Either the map will be reskinned or it will end in a hurry. I hope you plan well. I still like this work very much.

The plot connection is quite smooth, and there are not too many poisonous points. I support it with five stars [blowing kiss]

The characterization of the characters is quite good, and the plot is also very attractive, especially the part in the abyss. It also has its own uniqueness in the realm of spiritual practice.

There is a single female protagonist, but there are too many female characters. Generally speaking, there is no problem. There are some logical loopholes in the plot. At least now I can see that his main plot is slowly revealed. The overall rhythm is relatively slow, and the combat is relatively smooth. About 5 minutes old

Seven updates a day, these five stars are given to you

It's too short, brother. I just saw him coming out of the abyss and beating the Zhao family and it's gone. Hurry, faster! ! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

It's okay. I originally thought it would be boring to do the tasks all the time, but then I started to feel fun when I got to the cracks and cheated.

There are still some poisonous points, but it is still readable. They are some classic poisonous points in this kind of article. I have read more and I can accept it. Generally speaking, it is quite enjoyable. The protagonist's breakthrough speed is very fast compared to others. But it took almost a year to break through the fifth realm and the sixth realm. Fortunately, the author skipped a lot of time, so it doesn't seem very boring. Generally speaking, I can accept it. Give me a five-star support.

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Damn it, five or six chapters are published in a day, and the quality is high. I have never seen such an awesome author. I must praise it. I really like this kind of subject matter.

The writing is mature, the plot is smooth, and the characters are normal.

The latest plot is worthy of five stars in the literary world. See you later

It's a cool article. It's very cool. There's nothing weird about it.

The plot is very typical to be honest, but it is quite smooth. Nothing poisonous Still worth seeing