I Saved a Koi at the Beginning, but She Turned into a Dragon and Came to My Door.

I've finished reading it. It's been a long time since I've seen such a simple and normal book. There's also a book that's not so pretentious and slaps in the face. This book is about sour and sweet love. It's so good. If it doesn't work, I'll go to Douyin and watch a few episodes of Lover Killing videos to warm my little heart. Don't you believe this? A vigorous love story [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

The narrative is very strong, and unlike other similar chapters in the past, it has a strong sense of immersion and can arouse people's emotions. There is something about the writing style, but the only drawback is that there are so few of them now that I don't like them. After the spiritual energy was revived, it was used by the authorities. Without telling the protagonist, he directly cooperated with Long Ting in the name of the protagonist. There are signs of nanny writing.

The writing is pretty good and you can read it, but I still hope that the protagonist can control his emotions after completing the mission this time. This is a dream where all missions are the priority and reality is real. I hope that the future will not be locked by emotions. The protagonist who cannot control his emotions will be very uncomfortable to watch. Just so-so, keep stepping on the bright spots,

It's really good to read. It's one of the best in many mock-up novels I've read. I skipped reading Cang Yao Zhang at first, but the plot writing is very good, and the emotions in the article are particularly delicate. The more I read, the more I get hooked [shy]. I can feel the friendship between each character towards the male protagonist. The plot of the male protagonist every time he separates from everyone is particularly touching. The author's skills in this aspect are somewhat advanced. It's just that Blue Star, as the ancestral land of all worlds, is a bit low-level. Cats and dogs from other worlds can come and cause trouble, not to mention a fairy-level world like the spiritual world. I hope that the world view will not expand in value in the future [face covering]

It looks good. I have read several simulations. This one ranks among the best. I would like to make a suggestion. It is best for the heroine's combat power to remain at the same level. Duan Shui is sometimes very important. At present, Xiao Longnu's combat power level is too high. Even the Shura field cannot be repaired. I suggest strengthening it for other heroines [Thoughts]

The story and characters are well created. Even though it took nearly 70 chapters to tell the story of the first heroine, the whole reading process did not make people feel impatient. There was only anticipation for the subsequent plot and regret that the author could not update 50 chapters every day. I hope this level can be maintained in the future.

After reading it, it's very interesting. The author's writing is really good and the story is quite touching. I hope the author of the next few worlds can also write as well as the first world. Then the male protagonist has very upright views. I still like male protagonists with upright views. The female protagonists are also very good. Each one has a distinct personality and is very lovable. The most important thing is that there are no girls left out! I thought there was one heroine in each world, but those plots did not have as many heroines, and they were all female supporting characters or regrettable. Keep up the good work, the author, the writing is very good [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

Well, I didn't expect to see such a book on Tomato. The author is not a newcomer, but he has a good level. This is the fourth book that I have read so far that made my heart feel uncomfortable. The first Jianlai, the second Dragon 3, and the third Lost City. The author has his own writing style, which is very similar to Jianlai. It is very plain, but very real. Jianlai has a youthful spirit. This book has a pyrotechnic atmosphere. There is no fancy description, but you can see it, you know, it can be completely seen. In Jian Lai, I saw a young man traveling thousands of miles, punching millions of punches, to chase his girl. In Long San, I saw a most realistic young man, a coward in the middle school, who dared not fall in love with the girl he liked. This was originally waiting for the girl he liked, to be famous all over the world for her, and to let go for her. Everything (I won't talk about The Lost City, it's just too miserable), I've only read more than 1,000 pages, but I didn't dare to read it, for fear of finishing it all at once. This is my favorite kind of book, the pace is slow, but the emotions are real, it's about growing love over time, not rushing to give away a daughter. Come on, author [send heart] [send heart] This is the first time I write a long review, maybe some words are not expressive. I hope the author will not stop updating and encourage me [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] By the way, the writing style is different from the title of the novel. It is not a refreshing article, but more pure love. Even if you don't like the title, you can still read it and give it a try (don't be fooled by the ratings, it must be someone maliciously suppressing the score)

First of all, I must confirm that the author's emotional context is very good, not complicated or procrastinating. Every heroine is impressive, including Cang Yao, Cang Xiaoxiao, Ao Tianxin, Zhou Caiwei, Jiang Ruoshui, Jian Li, and the younger sister Ji Ning, whose identity is currently unknown (I feel like she has a knife🔪, but I feel that the author does not know how to knife readers [laughing], if allowed) Readers can give me some spoilers [laughing]), in short, the current relationship between the heroines and the protagonists is very good, five stars, five stars, but the promotion is a bit slow, the plot is not too bad, not novel, but also interesting, the writing is also good, but I feel there is room for improvement, in summary, five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I hope that the author will make more updates in the future [punch out], carry forward the spirit of coding to death as long as he can't die, and kill his colleagues [currently working on the manuscript] [please update], and look forward to the follow-up plot

I have read Chapter 138 so far. To be honest, the story of the carp leaping over the dragon's gate is good, but the story of the fox is a bit weak, and the content of the current timeline is also a bit lacking. However, it is okay to give five stars. I am willing to encourage such a new book. I am very satisfied. What's interesting is that there is no such thing as a small villain appearing out of nowhere to harass the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist comes out to "save the beauty". The awareness of lightning protection is at least average at the moment. Of course, this is what I have seen so far. I recommended this book in the early stage, but I cannot guarantee the content behind it.

I think the author wrote it very well. At first, I came here for the harem, but the first life was so touching. I thought it would be better to have a single female protagonist. On the contrary, the harem diluted the touching feeling and forced me into the irritable rhythm of fighting for a husband.

It's a good article that will become popular sooner or later. When I first read the first copy, it was a bit overwhelming. I couldn't hold back my tears after reading it for a long time. As long as the quality of the plot does not deteriorate later, I will keep reading. I will definitely not keep reading. The second trial raised questions. The second copy was not as good as the first. Let's read on. The third trial ran away with a bucket and couldn't stand it anymore [awkward laugh]

100% Objective review: Tomato Books, 9/10 [laughs] It is a system simulation novel. At present, the male protagonist is likely to have a permanent license. The emotional scenes are well written and the rhythm is very good. The word count is not bad, and the content that should be written is not omitted. It does not have the shortcomings of similar simulation novels that are smelly and long. The writing is good. I think it will be fine if the details are polished and the score is 9. Three small questions: 1. The realm of martial arts and the realm of cultivating immortals should be distinguished as soon as possible. In Simulation 2, the monks' fighting is a bit abstract and it is all about physical cultivation. 2. Pay attention to the control of the world view and combat power. After Simulation 2, the Mahayana fusion is everywhere. In Simulation 1, there is basically no fighting. The author of Simulation 3 It is said that the dragon girl brings the sword glass. I hope it can focus on the growth of people instead of cultivating immortals and fighting. There should be a timeline issue in Ascension World Map 3 later to polish the connection with reality, because Simulation 1 and Simulation 2 are on the same continent, and the characters are too closely related. Simulation 1 gives to ram Simulation 2 should be between the top and the best. The problem of realm division leads to the drama of the battle. At the same time, the characterization of the fox is not as rich as the dragon girl, and the limelight is actually stolen by the dragon girl.

The simulation is good, mainly because it does not whet the appetite. We meet when we should meet, and we recognize each other when we need to recognize each other. The emotional line of Cang Yao was well written, and I was very touching at the end. The other female protagonists were also okay. At least I continued to follow it for more than half a month. I still remember each female protagonist very clearly. It is not like other books that are stereotyped and forgotten after a while. The military career in the Ten Thousand Demon Realm in the second life and the establishment of Chang'an City are also well written. If the first life is the story of the male protagonist, Cang Yao and the little family, the second life is a step up. It is the story of the male protagonist, the female protagonist and other human beings in the Ten Thousand Demon Realm.

The biggest problem with simulation writing is that the proportion of simulation plots is too high, which really tests your patience. Let me tell you straight, I clicked in to see the multi-female protagonist, and I didn't really want to read the stinky and long single-female story in the simulation.

It's so well written, it's even more valuable if you include them all. There are too few books like this nowadays, and seeing that the author is Brother Y, there's nothing wrong with that. I recommend updating ten times a day [Adoration]

This is a good article with great potential. It is not a clichéd pretentious article, but a good story and character created with care. I look forward to the author's updates.

Maybe it's because this kind of subject matter has been written a lot, and other ones are more or less poisonous, so many readers don't have the desire to read simulation novels, so the author's book is not particularly popular, but the plot writing style is very good among the same type of novels. I finished reading it in one day. At present, Shen Nong has personally tasted it and it is completely non-toxic (that is, I haven't eaten big fish and meat at the moment). I must stick to it, and add more [angry] too little.

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I've read thirty chapters, and there's nothing wrong with it. Although the subject matter is old, the writing is pretty good. Classics will never go out of style [Chigua] After seeing 120, there are still many shortcomings. The first simulation was okay, but the main reason is that the writing of the second simulation was much worse. First, his combat power collapsed. That guy named Yaotianxin who shouldn't have ended up in this situation was actually able to be stopped by three Mahayana with similar strength as a Territory Lord? And every dynasty has at least one Mahayana, so are the Territory Lords too rubbish? When you simulated it again, those old guys from the Immortal Cultivation Sect, Ao Tianxin, slapped each other in the face. How could they be like this in this world? Second, the defense of the city was written in a hurry. Your ability to defend it was all thanks to Aotian Xin who stopped the Mahayana for you. Building the city was too trivial. Then if you finished the simulation, what motive would Aotian Xin have to help you? Chang'an City depends entirely on Aotianxin? (Although it is still the case now), but at least you have to rely on your own strength to conquer the city. It's too anticlimactic, maybe it's because Simulation 1 made my expectations for this novel too high.

Sweet love😍😍😍, painful knife😭😭😭, perfect ending🥰🥰🥰, yohohohohoho, I have found the perfect love book😋😋😋

This plot is very familiar. I have seen it before. I am also a scholar. I have been busy all my life and died in the end.

There was a similar book at seven o'clock, but I suddenly remembered that I hadn't finished it, so I went on to read that one. That one also traveled through all the worlds, but it was about fighting for hegemony and becoming a god and reviving spiritual energy. It's not like this one about traveling through all the worlds and falling in love.

Well written, really well written. This is my first time writing a book review. At first glance, it seemed like an ordinary casual time travel novel, but after reading the first story, I found that it was different from my first impression. The author writes very delicately and has the ability to touch people's mood. I have read no less than a thousand books, including Tomato novels, Starting Point, various physical books, classics, and biographies. The emotional descriptions in this book are really good. Looking forward to the next plot.

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I came here from the book recommendation forum. It's very good. It's very interesting. I hope I don't miss any girls. They all have their own emotional lines.

A good book that is held back by its name. Whether it was written and revised by the author himself or by AI writing, it can be considered outstanding among Tomato novels. The score of 6 points is indeed too low. This book should at least be above 8 points.

It's pretty cool, I hope I can stick with it. The material selection is not in line with the public's taste, so not many people watch it. The main plot could be faster.

The Dragon Lady is very good, very ideal, but too ideal. It feels like the character is a bit empty, but I really like this kind of character. Looking at the reality that I am still single🐶, my heart is also empty [I'm about to cry] It would be better if Dragon Girl had more real-life scenes At the end of the first world, the combat power collapsed, and at the end of the first world, the logic could not stand up to scrutiny, but the emotions were very delicate, the writing was okay, and the emotional lines could stand up to scrutiny. Most of the time, it was still logical. In the Tomato Book, it deserves five stars.

It's a pity that the pace is too slow. The writing style feels quite good and the writing is very interesting. But one copy takes too much space. If it is a novel with only one or two chapters updated a day, it is difficult to follow the slow pace. I can only choose to keep books.