Zenless Zone Zero: From the Start, I Was Forced to Haul Bricks for White Star to Make a Living

I hope you can like the books I write, and it doesn't matter if you don't like them. If you can, I hope you can tell me why you don't like it. Is it because the writing is not good, or where the plot is not smooth? You can point it out. Welcome to discuss. Years are fleeting, and time has flown by for thousands of years since the Spring and Autumn Period. Ancient people valued etiquette and righteousness. Gentlemen held their own opinions when debating, but never relied on their own opinions. While sticking to your original intention, you can also think about the other person's words; you are not upset when your own opinions are wrong, and you do not ridicule what others say is reasonable. This is the style of a true gentleman. It's really gratifying to see this honest and honest atmosphere again. If everyone can keep it for a long time, the revival of the Zhou ritual style will be just around the corner. Dear colleagues, when discussing Taoism, we should base our discussion on humility. We should not make sarcastic remarks or speak harshly to each other just because we have different opinions. We hope that we can maintain a respectful manner and have friendly discussions.

Let's talk about the summary first: As of Chapter 176, the protagonist's part of the reputation is based on his strength (low-level reputation) and the emotional line Zhu Yuan and Ling. The overall narrative revolves around the main plot of the official server. After the beginning of the original plot, there is less main plot, and the overall rhythm is relatively slow. The plot has been updated to the end of the outer ring. I personally think it is a very easy entry among JueZuZero fandoms. The protagonist is not Long Aotian, who starts with the system at full level, but an ordinary time traveler who "the system is given to him for nothing, he is in a hole, and he relies on his brains and luck to survive." The original daily routine in the first part is a bit slow, but the interactions between characters such as Zhu Yuan, Qing Yi, and Cui Ji are interesting, and the market spirit and empty sense of crisis in New Elido are all there. This novel does not write New Aili as a harem wholesale market like most zzz fanfics. Instead, the protagonist starts from "having no system, no background, and has to run by himself with a resident certificate", doing commissions, entering the White House, encountering the Cunning Rabbit House/Phaethon system, and then slowly being entangled by various female characters.

1. Facing the smiling tiger 2. Black dogfish 3. The army obeyed the order and committed suicide. 4. It is a cool summer night, allowing people to sleep without worries 5. It's worth all the death of a hundred brothers 6. If you don't recognize your relatives, you will be invincible by water and fire. 7. Even if an army of 100,000 people stretched out their necks and let Cao Jun cut them, they would still be able to cut them down for days and nights. 8. Liu Bei would have to eat ten thousand steamed buns for half a month. 9. He is an old hero. The more he drinks, the more courageous he becomes. 10. Ah, what are you eating? [Think]

It's well written, the characters don't break away from the personality, and it's considered a fine piece of fan fiction. But there is one point that I am more concerned about, and that is that the inner activities of the characters are too many and too specific, especially the protagonist. It seems that everyone else has to think about everything they do, which is a bit out of character. Other than that, it's Schrödinger's money. Sometimes I feel like I don't make that much money. Then it was gone [full] So good looking, so spicy, so good looking, so spicy, so good looking, so good looking, spicy, so good looking, spicy, so good looking, spicy, so good looking, spicy, so good looking, spicy, so good looking, spicy, so good looking, spicy, so good looking (Extreme tail kill)

Let me give you a four-star rating first to show that I didn't mean to downvote it, and to prevent this comment from being swallowed. To put it bluntly, book lovers who like to read reviews first before reading novels, if they are in a book shortage period, can start reading directly from the second chapter. The content of the first chapter is simply that the character goes crazy - the protagonist wants to time travel - is fucked by Hanabi (currently the protagonist thinks it is) - brings a system to time travel. (To put it more simply, the protagonist's time travel may be related to Hanabi, and the system has self-awareness) The first chapter is a bit too procrastinating. Putting aside the previous insanity, to put it bluntly, it is like a Mi family player's self-pleasure. There is no need to be so troublesome in explaining time travel. If you want to have a relationship with Hanabi for the subsequent story, and you don't feel the need to pile it up in a single chapter, you can try to add some small details in the subsequent text.

Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and substantial content can help more book lovers. ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⢋⣁⣀⣀⣀⡈⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡏⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡏⠄⠄⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡽⢟⡯⠍⢻⡟⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣿⣶⡶⣿⠷⠰⣶⠞⠁⠄⣽⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⣒⠒⠄⢛⠁⠄⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣟⢿⣿⠿⠿⠂⠄⠄⠄⢾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⠿⣻⡿⢿⣿⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⣠⢾⠄⠙⠻⢿⣿⣿ ⠉⠁⠄⠄⠁⠄⠄⣿⣷⣶⣦⣶⣮⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠉ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⠇⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⢿⣿⣿⡏⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄ This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. , But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

Come on, author, I have started to read books. Although I know that reading books is very harmful to the author, I am only 20 chapters away from catching up with the latest chapter. I am a book listener, and I lost it after reading half of it. It is very painful. So I still keep books. But the book is very good, at least it suits my taste. Come on [like][like]

I'll give it a four-star review first. The writing is quite good. The author has his own rhythm. Personally, I feel that the protagonist has too few highlights. This may be due to the short time it took to open the book. However, the author's output can still be assured. There is no obvious poison, so it is safe to eat.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Nuo Shou hadn't mounted a Noxian guillotine on an outer ring, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

The starting point is very interesting, much better than the ordinary rough time travel, and there is a very reasonable process of integrating into society. In my opinion, the protagonist is a relatively temperamental persona, with independent thinking rather than obeying the plot. In terms of emotions, it seems that the description is delicate and very touching. It is not love at first sight, but multiple different angles corresponding to each agent. I look forward to the author's follow-up plot. I recommend everyone to read it (only represents my personal opinion).