[No CP, different world fantasy light novel, charming design of group favorite]
First of all, let me state that the magical world view is self-designed.
An inexplicable magic circle pulled Jiang Lin into it, and what he saw when he opened his eyes was a strange environment and parents.
He came to the magical Western fantasy world, and originally planned to enjoy a beautiful life peacefully in a different world.
The new brother his parents brought to him that day broke his long-cherished memory.
Um? ? ! The different world he traveled through turned out to be a game he had played before! ! Are you still a supporting villain? ! Or the hero's brother? ! !
I just want to be the warm-hearted brother of the male protagonist with peace of mind, and not compete with the male protagonist for resources or interfere with the male protagonist's emotional line.
But what's the matter with the male protagonist clinging to him? ! And please don't pray to him with such pitiful eyes, okay? !
The original plot is getting worse and worse, and there are many more characters and story lines that have never appeared in the game.
Is the protagonist's harem simply disbanded on the spot? ! All at him? !
Reader comments
What I feel after listening to it now is that it's a bit not good. Really, I can't stand the first three chapters. How can I put it? It's a bit awkward. The writing style is relatively immature, a bit like a typical otherworld with a dual male protagonist element. I just can't stand it. The first three golden chapters are not very good and it is difficult for people to watch. ૮₍ ˊᯅˋ₎ა But since this is a book that doesn't have many ratings, I would like to give it four stars to encourage you, but I will most likely not read it. It's really uncomfortable (｡í _ ì｡)
How to say it? The writing style is relatively immature, and there is room for improvement in emotional processing and plot. The expression of emotions is too direct, and you can choose to express it tactfully in some places. For the plot, you can mention some keywords at the beginning, otherwise the processing between plots will be blurry.
I can feel that the author is working very hard to express the multi-faceted character! This is already great! But the key to expressing the multi-faceted character lies in emotional processing, which is also a problem that is too direct here. It is difficult to convince others that the emotions generated here are reasonable by directly describing the emotions without any foreshadowing.
Come on! ! ! I will continue to pursue it!
I feel that it does not reflect the strength of the protagonist. Logically speaking, such a strong talent should have a certain strength, but judging from the performance of the article, it seems a bit weak?
What I feel after listening to it now is that it's a bit not good. Really, I can't stand the first three chapters. How can I put it? It's a bit awkward. The writing style is relatively immature, a bit like a typical otherworld with a dual male protagonist element. I just can't stand it. The first three golden chapters are not very good and it is difficult for people to watch. ૮₍ ˊᯅˋ₎ა But since this is a book that doesn't have many ratings, I would like to give it four stars to encourage you, but I will most likely not read it. It's really uncomfortable (｡í _ ì｡)
How to say it? The writing style is relatively immature, and there is room for improvement in emotional processing and plot. The expression of emotions is too direct, and you can choose to express it tactfully in some places. For the plot, you can mention some keywords at the beginning, otherwise the processing between plots will be blurry. I can feel that the author is working very hard to express the multi-faceted character! This is already great! But the key to expressing the multi-faceted character lies in emotional processing, which is also a problem that is too direct here. It is difficult to convince others that the emotions generated here are reasonable by directly describing the emotions without any foreshadowing. Come on! ! ! I will continue to pursue it!
I feel that it does not reflect the strength of the protagonist. Logically speaking, such a strong talent should have a certain strength, but judging from the performance of the article, it seems a bit weak?