[No CP + fantasy otherworld + light novel + beloved by all, irresistible protagonist]
First, a note: the magical world setting is entirely my own.
A mysterious magic circle pulls Jiang Lin into it. When he opens his eyes, he sees an unfamiliar place and a pair of parents.
He's arrived in a Western fantasy world filled with magic. At first, he plans to enjoy a peaceful, comfortable life in this otherworld.
Then one day, the new little brother his parents bring home awakens memories he'd buried long ago.
Wait, what?! The otherworld he transmigrated to is actually the game he used to play?! And he's a villainous side character?! The male lead's older brother, no less?!
He figures all he has to do is be a loving older brother and stay out of the male lead's way, without stealing his resources or interfering with his romances.
But why is the male lead clinging to him and refusing to let go?! And can he stop giving him such pitiful, pleading looks?!
The original plot keeps veering further off course, and all sorts of characters and storylines that never appeared in the game have shown up.
The protagonist's harem has disbanded on the spot?! And now they're all after him?!
What I feel after listening to it now is that it's a bit not good. Really, I can't stand the first three chapters. How can I put it? It's a bit awkward. The writing style is relatively immature, a bit like a typical otherworld with a dual male protagonist element. I just can't stand it. The first three golden chapters are not very good and it is difficult for people to watch. ૮₍ ˊᯅˋ₎ა But since this is a book that doesn't have many ratings, I would like to give it four stars to encourage you, but I will most likely not read it. It's really uncomfortable (｡í _ ì｡)
How to say it? The writing style is relatively immature, and there is room for improvement in emotional processing and plot. The expression of emotions is too direct, and you can choose to express it tactfully in some places. For the plot, you can mention some keywords at the beginning, otherwise the processing between plots will be blurry. I can feel that the author is working very hard to express the multi-faceted character! This is already great! But the key to expressing the multi-faceted character lies in emotional processing, which is also a problem that is too direct here. It is difficult to convince others that the emotions generated here are reasonable by directly describing the emotions without any foreshadowing. Come on!!! I will continue to pursue it!
I feel that it does not reflect the strength of the protagonist. Logically speaking, such a strong talent should have a certain strength, but judging from the performance of the article, it seems a bit weak?