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I wonder why such a beautiful book is a baby book [laughing and crying] The teacher has a guy named Crocodile who randomly changes your plot. Please write it carefully [I understand] The plot is quite smooth, especially the transformation of Zhou Yue. Even though I don't like Zhou Yue very much, I felt relieved after reading it... That kind of change that flows in a steady stream [crying] Ichiro really has a kind of magic power, and all the vague regrets in the original plot (not the earth-shattering ones, such as Anjurou's father's decadence, Master Nintaki's guilt, etc.) Have been resolved [shy] The original characters are also very vivid. The training of Master Seizo is really impressive, as well as the characterization of Tanjuro. This is the meaning of second creation! [Laughing]

This story is shocking and delicious! !! The natural humor and smooth plot make it a joy to watch. The teacher is great at shaping stories! In order to protect his younger brother, Reborn builds bridges with each other's stories, leading everyone to him! It's so reasonable and funny! How did you come up with such a genius story! God! The teacher is particularly good at shaping characters, making Yu Yu flesh and blood. You give him a rich and interesting soul, so Yu is no longer Demon Slayer's tool NPC. Teacher, you are simply a god! Teacher, I don't know how to praise you. Your great story has conquered my language. Thank you teacher for bringing this story, you are so awesome and amazing! Thank you for the great story and great love for the characters. Teacher, you are a god.

As a fan of Ichiro, there are really very few fanfics featuring Ichiro. The author has great writing style and is very careful in studying the small details. I really like [Shy][Already Planted][Bookshelf Plus One]

I finally saw Ichiro who didn't travel through time. It's super delicious, and the ideas in it are really just like what Xiaoyou himself would think of. It's so delicious 😋😋😋

The writing is very good, the plot is very smooth, not abrupt at all, and the characters are well drawn. It's very good-looking, very good-looking! Highly recommended! Come on, author!

At first glance, the appraisal is written by a real person, and what you want is that serious feeling! I like!

It's very interesting. This article just didn't blindly make the main character so great. Even the main character would reflect on himself.

It's nice to read [I understand], the author will definitely continue to update [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good and very attractive.

This book is so beautiful. Author, please update. The plot is very well written.

Super pretty! 😍The author must update more soon!

Love this one very much! If Xiaoyou really survives, he will definitely love Xiaowu like in the article. My heart warms when the two brothers see him ¯꒳¯

I think it's pretty good. It's one of Tomato's few novels with Ichiro as the protagonist. Don't look at it. He doesn't have a rating yet, but it's really good to read.

Very nice, pretty good

This book is so beautiful. I love you, the author.

It's pretty good (I can't praise it enough, but it's very good anyway, recommended)

Great writing and very lifelike

It's good-looking, and when you talk about infinite nothingness, I feel a little bit dead, a little bit knife-like, but it's more abstract and everyday 😋 I just eat it happily