Entry: Cultivation of Immortality, Starting with a Beautiful Woman Coming to the Door to Get a Talisman on Credit

The subject matter of this book is very suitable to my taste. The score of 54 chapters and 94 reminders in the new book stage is already quite outstanding among similar new books. Advantages: Although the protagonist has five series of miscellaneous spiritual roots, he breaks the conventional setting of useless spiritual roots, and the cultivation progress is very fast. The Golden Finger reached the peak of the third level of Qi training before it was officially activated. After updating to Chapter 54, it has been promoted to the eighth level of Qi training. It will be able to break through the foundation building immediately, and the growth rhythm is very comfortable. He has to eat and take in girls very quickly. Disadvantages: There are loopholes in the plot logic of some parts of the book. I hope the author will read the comment area more and optimize the plot with reference to readers' reasonable suggestions. The most puzzling thing is the plot setting of the protagonist's treatment of the preparatory heroine. There are currently no restrictions or restrictions. In a normal setting, either the protagonist's cultivation level overwhelms everyone's so that the other party does not dare to have dissatisfaction; or the other party makes an oath of heaven, or unlocks the binding fetters of restricted terms. But in the current plot, the protagonist is a top-notch Talisman Maker. He can easily produce top-quality healing and Qi-refining elixirs that are scarce and extremely difficult to buy in the market. He also rescued the daughter of the patriarch of a rival family of his employer. Without any binding constraints, the logic of this plot is difficult to be self-consistent. I am very curious how the author will round out the setting in the future. Personal suggestion: I hope the author will add restrictive entries or bond settings in the future. As long as there is a corresponding restraint mechanism, readers can understand the protagonist no matter how kind he is to the people around him and win over the heroine, and the plot will not be awkward. The foundation of this work is very good and the results are outstanding. I hope that the author will be more rigorous and careful in subsequent writing, insist on stable updates, and the results of the work will become more and more outstanding!

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This is the most comfortable multi-female novel I have ever read. Most multi-female novels get lost after a while. Either the emotions are not well written, or the plot is unbearable, or even both. Although I prefer single girls, I will still read well-written stories with multiple girls, but the protagonist's cultivation level is a bit low. The emotional transition of this book is the best among all the multi-female protagonists I have read (in fact, I have read very few multi-female protagonists, and strictly speaking, none of them have been completed). I even feel that this is a multi-female novel that combines multiple single female protagonists. This sentence is weird. I don't know if the label has multiple female protagonists. When I watched it, it didn't seem like there was one. When I first started watching it, Liu was a little bit dissatisfied. After Bai appeared, I felt that the routine was a bit old, but it was quite comfortable to watch. Then Liu was taken to the sect by some elder in order to cultivate himself and not drag down the protagonist. Bai and the protagonist were taken away by his brother who was suspected of being possessed by a demon cultivator while exploring the secret realm. Now I see that Ling has become the first female character to entrust her life or all her life to the protagonist. I will see how the author writes in the future. The protagonist's cultivation is too poor. In addition to cultivation, all the talismans, elixirs, and formations are too scientific. Speaking of which, does the protagonist have any signature skills? When I watched Dou Po, Xiao Yan's ghost upper body and the fire lotus explosion were really hard to forget. I am still looking forward to the follow-up. After all, I have come across interesting articles written by many women. Of course, since I rarely read them, my comments may not be reasonable. If one day I slip away, it's normal. After all, I said I rarely watch it. I haven't read it for a few days. Why do all the entries in the introduction seem to have been changed? Speaking of who invented the old man's cultivation of immortality, is Lao Deng [staring]? I have read a lot of cool articles recently, and I have entered the reading stage. I hope I can read it to my heart's content when I come back.

It looks good, the structure is novel and interesting.

It is very innovative, meticulous in its writing, natural in description, and rich in writing. It has a golden house and a beautiful face, which tugs at the reader's heartstrings. The words are tactfully matched and complement each other. In short, the author put his heart into it.

The author is great and writes well. It would be better if he wrote thousands of chapters.

The progression of the plot is not abrupt and the characters are interestingly drawn. There is a fly in the ointment, the quantity is too small.

It's good to watch, the plot is attractive, it's not pretentious, and the subject matter is good. It's the first time I've seen this kind of movie.

The wind that ruined the old man finally blew to the world of immortality

It's so well written, but the pace is a bit fast.

Although the author is very short, but the writing is okay, I will give it an 8. But I am an old pervert, so I will give it a ten. [Shy]

The writing is good, the writing is good, the writing is okay, it's pretty good.

Not bad, not bad, just mindless and cool.

The writing style and creativity are average, but it's not bad at all.

Not bad, not bad! Chapter 115 Foundation Building. Geniuses should look like geniuses. If you can't go to college at the age of 14, you are called a knitting genius?

There's nothing special about this book. It's just good enough.

It's beautiful and the concept is wonderful. I feel like Tomato has a lot of good books recently.

It looks good and worth a look

This text looks very comfortable, no nonsense, simple, precise and lively. I hope to take my time and make it a truly high-quality product, without having to rush for success, which will affect the quality.

It feels pretty good. At least it's not a mindless piece of writing. There's hope.

In Goudian, there are a few more women.

It would be even better if there was an inner world. Plant some seeds that are rare and require high vintages [laughing]

It's a very good book about cultivating immortals. There are a lot of harems. The author's descriptions are more delicate, which is very interesting, but there are a few.

Looks good, the car drives smoothly

The description is vivid and natural. Nice!

Clear and clear, no childish plot.

The subject matter is good and so is the plot.

Add more updates, add more updates, I just want to add more updates

Very nice, no pressure

It's actually pretty good-looking