Lin Duo, an Earth-born engineer, transmigrates into the Warhammer universe. There is no System, no beginner's village, only a Forge World that treats people as expendable materials and a pile of antique machines liable to explode at any moment.
He claws his way up from the lowest ranks of technical serfdom to become a Great Magos, and refits an aging Gothic-class cruiser into a mobile industrial ship: the Ark of All Machines.
Then the warp storm hits.
When Lin Duo opens his eyes again, the Astronomican is gone, the Imperium is gone, and every familiar star chart is worthless. He and his battered ship, with only forty percent of its structure intact, have been dumped above a lost colony on the edge of the Perseus Arm.
The colony is short on water, power, ships, and defenses.
The Ark of All Machines is short on materials, fuel, people, and everything else it needs to stop springing leaks.
The two sides stare at each other for three seconds.
Lin Duo says, “Hold your fire. Do you have a water treatment plant?”
And so, a very strange new power arises in the Perseus Arm.
While others raid ruins, he repairs pumping stations first.
While others discuss hegemony, he calculates how many seals they need.
When people ask where his fleet is coming from, he points to the orbital workshop that has just lit up. “No rush, we're getting it into production.”
Then one day, pirates and procurement agents realize that the outsider Great Magos who claimed he was only here to repair a ship has begun giving the Perseus Arm a taste of firepower.
It feels like an AI novel. The opening chapter is very interesting and does not drag on. The pedantic and inappropriate nature of the Mechanicus and the weirdness of the subspace are all reflected. After traveling through time, the encounters with backward colonies were not overwhelming. The ruins and struggles of the colonies, and the interactions between the characters in the colonies were quite interesting. The stacking and advancement of the story follow the rules, and it can be read as an AI novel. I hope the standard can be maintained. In addition, being too rigid and not rushing into the field is probably a common problem of AI writers. The development of the plot is a bit inconsistent. Is such a big industrial ship invisible to others? You, the great sage, are struggling with doors, cabins, and magazines all day long, but what about your industrial development?
The AI article can only be said to be readable. Compared with other well-written articles, it does lack a lot of human touch. It is a very standard parallel sentence, "Although, although, although, although we can live", it is too AI, but it feels a bit like an idea that Hammer Guy came up with, and then let AI start writing according to this idea. It is ok to have fun, and you can read it if you are interested in Warhammer Book of Worlds.
It feels like it was written by AI, but the writing is inexplicably compatible with the mechanical priest. It's so strange to look at it again. 🤔
Not bad. There are few themes about Warhammer and distant planets. Come on.
It's quite funny to write, haha.
A rare fan of Far Planet, it seems to be well written so far, and the integration with Warhammer is also very smooth.
Not bad, the author hopes not to interrupt updates
It looks good, like watching a science fiction version of The Minister 😏. It's fun to watch cross talk [note]
The writing is very innovative and very good
The language is witty and humorous, I'll keep an eye on you!