(The rating has been released on July 27, 6.5, It doesn't matter if it goes up or not)
The former civilization leader who lived two lifetimes traveled back to the golden age of the war-shuang Pamish.
I originally wanted to lie down, but my brothers teamed up to plot against me.
The brother is gone, and the family belongs to him.
It's less than two years before Pamish breaks out.
He opened a dusty blueprint on the manufacturing process of nano-sharp weapons.
The entire world's technology tree will be uprooted by him.
"The structure requires tantalum-193 copolymer, an inverse element device, and a sea of consciousness system."
"The nano-soldiers only need one thing."
"What?"
"Me."
Reader comments
Zhanshuang's traffic locks are everywhere, so I don't have high hopes.
As for some complaints about software, please see the author's second and third chapters for details.
Regarding typos, because I am using iFlytek's voice input, I read it with my mouth. I read whatever comes to my mind.
Therefore, sometimes there will be misunderstandings in identifying Yun Che as motion sickness.
In addition, I don't check very much. If you see it, it may be a typo. Just point it out. Thank you very much. Thank you very much [Love]
As far as a fanfic that dares to fuse Nano Core and Zhan Shuang is concerned, I give full marks for the rhythm and ideas. The combat power can be upgraded in a relatively peaceful way, and the plot is not too out of the ordinary, which is already very good in fan fiction.
Ps: Sometimes typos affect the perception. You can try to use AI to find typos. Also, your metaphor is very interesting. You can change the plain direct statement into a metaphor (I know this is time-consuming, but this is an order🤫)
Nanotechnology is indeed a way to circumvent the Pamish virus, and the Lord of Asa and the Vanguard feel so like the new agents and ascendants.
There are very few books written by Zhan Shuang. I hope this book will not be unfinished. Come on [sending my heart]
There is no big problem at the moment. The two worldviews are well integrated. To be precise, except for the organization, it basically has nothing to do with the worldview of Nanocore. I just don't know how the author will bring things around with Nanocore later. After all, there is no Nanocore in this world.
I watched it again later, and I don't know why it felt like I was watching it from a third-person perspective. The sense of immersion was not very good.
Not bad ((*^∀^))👍🏻, not bad. The protagonist is still accumulating strength now, and will start to exert his strength later. When will the nano core be built, I want to see👀[Sneaky smile][Like]
At present, there seems to be no thunderstorms. The early development of Power Point Technology is indeed very stable.
It's cool to show me a newbie
This book is so well integrated and feels comfortable to read.
Um? New Zhanshuang fan? You're right! However, this battle is best to arouse my interest💙💙💙(Use all your strength🔈)→🙆👎⚡️🌂(Collapse of restraints turned into sharp blades🔈)→🙆👍⚡️🗡→💛💛💛❤️❤️❤️(Haha, this It's your resistance🔈)→👩🚴🏻💨⚡️(Life and death are only in a moment🔈)→👩⬆️🤾⬇️⚡️🗡 (Hmph, the dead soul under the sword🔈)→💪🦵😡⚡️🗡💫✖️💥 (I will cut off the cage of fate🔈) Move on
Beautiful desuwa! As one of the few books written by Tomato about Zhan Shuang, it also has a plot that makes me want to continue reading. I will give it five stars desuwa.
One of the few new books by Zhan Shuang, hold on, Lao Xian
It's good to read, but... Lao Xian updates it quickly. Three chapters a day is not enough. I suggest you follow the example of others and update it 13 times a day.
I give you the most direct, the most truthful, the most thorough, the most naked, the most chilling, the most pointed, the most profound, the most realistic, the least modified, the least roundabout, the least circuitous, the least tortuous, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most The most straightforward, the neatest, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least ink-stained, the least procrastinating, the least muddled, the most painful, the most ruthless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about dignity, the most straightforward, the most straightforward, the most Go straight to the point, the most direct to the core, the least superficial, the least disguised, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least polite, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least It is the least repetitive, the least redundant, the least empty, the least roundabout, the least detour, the least irritating, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious. Let me tell you: this book is very good.
Great, cheers for the author
Well, the idea is great, and there are very few people writing about war doubles, so I encourage the author.
As for the writing and plot, some of them are good, so don't go into too much detail. After all, the plot of Zhanshuang itself is not very coherent and there is a lot of nonsense and text. Many old settings are contradictory or even entangled, such as the golden vortex, and even the divine power of the dark energy (the sun never sets) that was only filled in recently.
In fact, according to the real evaluation, (there are no exciting points, no twists and turns and storytelling, the protagonist lacks performance, the dialogue is too rigid, the OOC exceeds the standard, and other common pitfalls for novices.) I probably can't get more than three stars, but the author has done it with love. In addition, the double battle is really difficult to write, so I encourage you to give it five stars. In addition, many battle double settings are completely scrapped, or super long foreshadowing (meaningless). In short, I just encourage it.
In addition, I complained about Zhan Shuang's second episode, which was about really pulling the crotch, and it was almost like a training camp for newbies. The truth is not necessarily better than what the author wrote. [Cover face]
(I am a level 136 Xiaodeng. Also, I complain that training dual characters in combat is very expensive. I want to play comfortably and start with 3S.)
I love watching it. Although I don't know about Zhan Shuang, I was attracted by Nano Core. I enjoyed watching it. And because I didn't know the plot, characters and settings of Zhan Shuang, I watched Nano Core when I was a kid. I have almost forgotten the content. Now I watch it with gusto. The author has been updating three times a day very quickly, but it's still not enough to read. I still want to read after reading the update, and my heart feels itchy, like an ant crawling [please update]
So far, there are no bad points. The plot is very suitable to my taste. It is very good among the Zhanshuang fanfics I have read. Of course, this is just a personal opinion and may not be suitable for everyone.
A rare book about Zhanshuang and Nanocore, very interesting
Beautiful, absolutely exquisite.
You are right, but I am playing Lamia, 😞Do you really want to fight? Anyway, don't expect too much from me 🔵🔵🔵 disappear from my eyes🌧 (What kind of harmony do you like? /Get out of the way! Don't get in the way!)! 💛 🔵🔵🔵Hmph~! ⛈ 🌊🔱🌊Like a bubble - dissipate! 🔵🔵🔵Be quiet! 🔱➡Get out of here! Hum~ ⬇⬆🔱💧Destroy it! Sunk in——🌀🔱🌪this seabed! 😌😌Ah, it's finally over😊😊😊
I have to keep reading. I read a book about Zhanshuang and Delta before. Because there were too few people and it was unpopular, I had to end it early.
This is really nice.
Core, good book
[Facepalm] Alas, the only feeling is that the author is not a robot and is too slow.
Rare war doubles and nano-soldiers, the protagonist is not well portrayed, the plot has not enough ups and downs, there are almost no emotional scenes, and it is not exciting enough. The logic is smooth and the writing is okay
No, I think the author needs to go to Channel 4 in the middle of the night to study [take a closer look]
You guys are surprisingly pretty good [cool]
Oh 💙💙💙 (Use all your strength 🔈) → 🙆👎⚡️🌂 (Collapsing bonds turn into sharp blades 🔈) → 🙆👍⚡️🗡 → 💛💛💛❤️❤️❤️ (Haha, this is yours Resistance🔈)→👩🚴🏻💨⚡️(Life and death are only in a moment🔈)→👩⬆️🤾⬇️⚡️🗡( Hum, the dead soul under the sword🔈)→💪🦵😡⚡️🗡💫✖️💥 (I will cut off the cage of fate🔈)
A very cool fanfic, with clear logic and clear dialogue.
Urgent, urgent, this is my only chance to understand Zhanshuang Pamish!
Zhanshuang's traffic locks are everywhere, so I don't have high hopes. As for some complaints about software, please see the author's second and third chapters for details. Regarding typos, because I am using iFlytek's voice input, I read it with my mouth. I read whatever comes to my mind. Therefore, sometimes there will be misunderstandings in identifying Yun Che as motion sickness. In addition, I don't check very much. If you see it, it may be a typo. Just point it out. Thank you very much. Thank you very much [Love]
As far as a fanfic that dares to fuse Nano Core and Zhan Shuang is concerned, I give full marks for the rhythm and ideas. The combat power can be upgraded in a relatively peaceful way, and the plot is not too out of the ordinary, which is already very good in fan fiction. Ps: Sometimes typos affect the perception. You can try to use AI to find typos. Also, your metaphor is very interesting. You can change the plain direct statement into a metaphor (I know this is time-consuming, but this is an order🤫)
Nanotechnology is indeed a way to circumvent the Pamish virus, and the Lord of Asa and the Vanguard feel so like the new agents and ascendants.
There are very few books written by Zhan Shuang. I hope this book will not be unfinished. Come on [sending my heart]
There is no big problem at the moment. The two worldviews are well integrated. To be precise, except for the organization, it basically has nothing to do with the worldview of Nanocore. I just don't know how the author will bring things around with Nanocore later. After all, there is no Nanocore in this world. I watched it again later, and I don't know why it felt like I was watching it from a third-person perspective. The sense of immersion was not very good.
Not bad ((*^∀^))👍🏻, not bad. The protagonist is still accumulating strength now, and will start to exert his strength later. When will the nano core be built, I want to see👀[Sneaky smile][Like]
At present, there seems to be no thunderstorms. The early development of Power Point Technology is indeed very stable.
It's cool to show me a newbie
This book is so well integrated and feels comfortable to read.
Um? New Zhanshuang fan? You're right! However, this battle is best to arouse my interest💙💙💙(Use all your strength🔈)→🙆👎⚡️🌂(Collapse of restraints turned into sharp blades🔈)→🙆👍⚡️🗡→💛💛💛❤️❤️❤️(Haha, this It's your resistance🔈)→👩🚴🏻💨⚡️(Life and death are only in a moment🔈)→👩⬆️🤾⬇️⚡️🗡 (Hmph, the dead soul under the sword🔈)→💪🦵😡⚡️🗡💫✖️💥 (I will cut off the cage of fate🔈) Move on
Beautiful desuwa! As one of the few books written by Tomato about Zhan Shuang, it also has a plot that makes me want to continue reading. I will give it five stars desuwa.
One of the few new books by Zhan Shuang, hold on, Lao Xian It's good to read, but... Lao Xian updates it quickly. Three chapters a day is not enough. I suggest you follow the example of others and update it 13 times a day.
I give you the most direct, the most truthful, the most thorough, the most naked, the most chilling, the most pointed, the most profound, the most realistic, the least modified, the least roundabout, the least circuitous, the least tortuous, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most The most straightforward, the neatest, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least ink-stained, the least procrastinating, the least muddled, the most painful, the most ruthless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about dignity, the most straightforward, the most straightforward, the most Go straight to the point, the most direct to the core, the least superficial, the least disguised, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least polite, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least It is the least repetitive, the least redundant, the least empty, the least roundabout, the least detour, the least irritating, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious. Let me tell you: this book is very good.
Great, cheers for the author
Well, the idea is great, and there are very few people writing about war doubles, so I encourage the author. As for the writing and plot, some of them are good, so don't go into too much detail. After all, the plot of Zhanshuang itself is not very coherent and there is a lot of nonsense and text. Many old settings are contradictory or even entangled, such as the golden vortex, and even the divine power of the dark energy (the sun never sets) that was only filled in recently. In fact, according to the real evaluation, (there are no exciting points, no twists and turns and storytelling, the protagonist lacks performance, the dialogue is too rigid, the OOC exceeds the standard, and other common pitfalls for novices.) I probably can't get more than three stars, but the author has done it with love. In addition, the double battle is really difficult to write, so I encourage you to give it five stars. In addition, many battle double settings are completely scrapped, or super long foreshadowing (meaningless). In short, I just encourage it. In addition, I complained about Zhan Shuang's second episode, which was about really pulling the crotch, and it was almost like a training camp for newbies. The truth is not necessarily better than what the author wrote. [Cover face] (I am a level 136 Xiaodeng. Also, I complain that training dual characters in combat is very expensive. I want to play comfortably and start with 3S.)
I love watching it. Although I don't know about Zhan Shuang, I was attracted by Nano Core. I enjoyed watching it. And because I didn't know the plot, characters and settings of Zhan Shuang, I watched Nano Core when I was a kid. I have almost forgotten the content. Now I watch it with gusto. The author has been updating three times a day very quickly, but it's still not enough to read. I still want to read after reading the update, and my heart feels itchy, like an ant crawling [please update]
So far, there are no bad points. The plot is very suitable to my taste. It is very good among the Zhanshuang fanfics I have read. Of course, this is just a personal opinion and may not be suitable for everyone.
A rare book about Zhanshuang and Nanocore, very interesting
Beautiful, absolutely exquisite.
You are right, but I am playing Lamia, 😞Do you really want to fight? Anyway, don't expect too much from me 🔵🔵🔵 disappear from my eyes🌧 (What kind of harmony do you like? /Get out of the way! Don't get in the way!)! 💛 🔵🔵🔵Hmph~! ⛈ 🌊🔱🌊Like a bubble - dissipate! 🔵🔵🔵Be quiet! 🔱➡Get out of here! Hum~ ⬇⬆🔱💧Destroy it! Sunk in——🌀🔱🌪this seabed! 😌😌Ah, it's finally over😊😊😊
I have to keep reading. I read a book about Zhanshuang and Delta before. Because there were too few people and it was unpopular, I had to end it early.
This is really nice.
Core, good book
[Facepalm] Alas, the only feeling is that the author is not a robot and is too slow.
Rare war doubles and nano-soldiers, the protagonist is not well portrayed, the plot has not enough ups and downs, there are almost no emotional scenes, and it is not exciting enough. The logic is smooth and the writing is okay No, I think the author needs to go to Channel 4 in the middle of the night to study [take a closer look]
You guys are surprisingly pretty good [cool]
Oh 💙💙💙 (Use all your strength 🔈) → 🙆👎⚡️🌂 (Collapsing bonds turn into sharp blades 🔈) → 🙆👍⚡️🗡 → 💛💛💛❤️❤️❤️ (Haha, this is yours Resistance🔈)→👩🚴🏻💨⚡️(Life and death are only in a moment🔈)→👩⬆️🤾⬇️⚡️🗡( Hum, the dead soul under the sword🔈)→💪🦵😡⚡️🗡💫✖️💥 (I will cut off the cage of fate🔈)
A very cool fanfic, with clear logic and clear dialogue.
Urgent, urgent, this is my only chance to understand Zhanshuang Pamish!
Be sure to hold on! ! !