
When I Saw the Comments, My First Love Returned to the Country
看见弹幕时白月光回国了
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- Completed
- Length
- 230k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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- The 38,064th Second Beyond the Order秩序外第38064秒Former title · until Oct 2026
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So pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘 It's God, it's my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist, I was so cute that I cried From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that it will flood into the Qiantang River. 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. Goddess, please update soon!!
In just 230,000 words, he actually wrote such a wonderful novel, and it is full of ideas. Everyone in this book is full of life. Children who read the book, please don't scold anyone. There are no bad people in the whole book. I only see the difficulties. Please be patient and read on. The twists will surprise you. 😘
This novel is sure to be a hit!!! There are so many reversals! At first, I kind of hated the original couple because I felt like they were completely Mary Sues. Later, I saw that the original male and female protagonists and the male protagonist were friends before, and I realized that they both knew that they were controlled by the system. They have been acting, and the male protagonist has never been controlled. The original male protagonist later awakened and has been protecting the original heroine. He did not let the original heroine make friends because he was afraid that her system would hurt others. Later, after the original heroine awakened, she would rather get hurt than hurt others. They are all good babies! The heroine and the hero are also very close to each other. The hero has always liked the heroine, even if the system keeps restarting and modifying the memory, he still loves the heroine. The two systems are also very good, especially Xiaojiu. Xiaojiu has been helping the male protagonist and later developed human emotions with Ahuahua to help the protagonists fight against Jasmine. They eventually died and hope to come back later. And Jasmine, I thought he was a bad guy at first, and he kept hindering the relationship between the male and female protagonists, but then I saw Jasmine was hurt by her ex-boyfriend. This book is their love diary. She didn't want such a beautiful person like Wen Yining to be trapped by the male protagonist's feelings. I think she is still a good person because she has always loved the female protagonist. There are really no complete bad guys in this book. Everyone has their own position and is good for the other person.
(This book review is purely subjective, involves spoilers, and is too exciting to be verbose, sorry💕) I've never been very interested in romance articles, but I found this novel's tweets very interesting. In the mood to watch the excitement, I turned off Tomato and looked for this book. Unexpectedly, I became more and more interested in reading it. The author has so many details, and it was super enjoyable to read. Some of the details in the previous chapters are corresponding in the later articles, and the emotional line is also very clear and not cliché ( I didn't expect this book to be so long! I looked up and saw that it was already three in the morning!) The author created a very three-dimensional character for everyone, no one is simply bad or inexplicable like the pure Virgin (Long live pure love!) There is no such thing as suffocating: I can't remember anything when I lose my memory, and my relationship starts from scratch; instead, I fall in love with you first when I lose my memory. Ahhh, I was really touched when I watched it, and I was also very happy when I watched the reverse. Everyone is working hard for their freedom, striving for a glimmer of light... For Lu Sinian: Oh, how can someone be so pure and single-minded in love! And he is a good gentleman and respectful! She is also very powerful. For Wen Yining: She is a super sober and independent heroine. When I saw the male protagonist begging her to stay in the article, I was really worried that the plot would become cliche, but it was not. Yes, she should also have her own ideas, her own life, and make her own decisions without being influenced by others. I was really touched. For Shen Tangtang: Wuwu was a very good baby before being controlled by the plot, and she wanted to be a doctor without borders! Great love, in fact, it is a good treasure in itself, and even more so after awakening (before I felt wronged by Gu Beichen, so I went to Lu Sinian, the character is so classic, but later I found out that he was controlled by the plot, I have mixed feelings) Regarding Gu Beichen: (What a classic name for the boss) I was really a little bit toe-to-toe with his previous rigid speech, but at the time I thought it was strange, a bit inconsistent and hard to explain. Later on, I gradually realized that it was to control Shen Tangtang... You guys are also a beautiful love, my God. For Wen Chi: I guarantee that he is a girl control 👍 super living person, he is unique in the dark times, he also has a beautiful love, oh, oh, it proves that the oath made by the heroine is not accurate hahaha. For Liu Qianqian: Very good treasure, I am very curious about how she awakened, the spiritual core is too strong? For Xiaojiu: Woohoo, I guarantee you are an angel! Oh my god, you are such a good person. You and Lu Sinian are brothers! Oh, yes! You are great! For Ahuahua: Lovely Tongzi, although he encouraged Shen Tangtang to absorb the charm of others... But in the end, he used his own core energy to help Shen Tangtang. To Lu Chen and Jia Jia: You really sacrificed a lot for the characters in the book! To Jasmine: I feel sorry for you in the end, right? ❤️❤️❤️
The 38064th second of "Out of Order" is dedicated to all the souls who refuse to give in. There are truly no villains in the group. The male protagonist is good and the female protagonist is good. The original male protagonist is good and the original female protagonist is good. The brother is good and sister-in-law is good. Jiajia is good and Lu Chen is good. Xiaojiu is good. Huahua is good. Jasmine's original intention is completely understandable. Everyone is kind and righteous. People who bravely declare war on fate. Fortunately, these lovely people all got a happy ending in the end. Pure love yyds!!! The setting is very novel, and the description of the transition is also very interesting. Little clues are buried one after another, and finally the closed loop is slowly completed. The author's true expression at the end also touched me very much. I sincerely wish everyone all the best! The feeling given to me by all the people in the book is: ▪We are all the protagonists of our own stories, and no one can forcefully write my life except myself. ▪Even if the system restarts ten thousand times, I will always remember to love you and only you. ▪Between us, there will be ten thousand and one reunions after ten thousand separations. No matter how many times those invisible hands will separate us, I will definitely find you again. Heroine: The reason why Bai Yueguang is Bai Yueguang is essentially because she is a very good person, so it is not surprising that she will be everyone's Bai Yueguang. She carefully saved a kitten when she was young, and many years later she was willing to try to save a person she thought she had never met because of the barrage. Then she took the initiative to use her own charm to irrigate the helpless girl. Her high charm not only came from the author's preference, but also from her own accumulation and excellent qualities. She was originally a top-notch person. Male protagonist: Poor life experience, standard beauty and strong but miserable. ▪In an unknown corner, I have already fallen in love with you. ▪Destiny seems to have heard my prayer and allowed you to save me. ▪After being corrected countless times in time, my muscle reaction will always recognize you before me. That you can never be replaced or covered. Original male protagonist: Even if he is cold-faced and cold-hearted, he will still uphold justice and protect his classmates. ▪I will wait forever for my lover to wake up, and before that I will use my own methods to prevent her from hurting others, because I know that is definitely not what she wants to happen. Original heroine: A quiet little girl with a righteous heart. I'm glad that through the perspective of others, I had the opportunity to see the real you who is not trapped by worldly material desires. Congratulations on finally finding yourself and realizing your dream. Jiajia: I have always worked hard for the happiness of the characters in the book. Even if I concealed it under pressure, I have never betrayed the person who helped me. Your companionship allowed a pair of star-crossed lovers to resolve their misunderstandings and even get back together again, and also allowed the novel that had been forcibly revised countless times to usher in a happy and happy ending. A kind and righteous girl deserves the best. Lu Chen: I'm sorry, Lord System Master, we scolded you by mistake for getting up early. In the end, the upright and ruthless main system chose to let the story develop freely because of the obsession of the sweetheart and its own goodwill, and silently helped clear all obstacles. I admit that in order for this book to have such a perfect ending, you, the young couple, have really contributed no less than us readers. Jasmine: I am deeply saddened to hear your story. I have heard too many stories about betrayed people, and I can't help but feel extremely sorry for the story of lovers who cannot stay together. But fortunately, when you gave the novel a perfect ending, you also gave your lover a chance to exist again. Xiaojiu: Even at the risk of destruction, I hope to retain the short-term hard-won happiness for you as much as possible. What a righteous system! ▪I have seen where you came from, so I hope you can be happy more than anyone else. You are no longer my host, but my forever buddy. Thank you for teaching me human emotions and giving me the opportunity to take a step closer to your world. Let's walk together in the future. A Huahua: You are a loved baby. I am glad that you realize this and have the opportunity to be with the person you love. Welcome to awaken human emotions and come to the new world~
It is really rare to see such a grand world view, and the setting is also very novel. What impressed me most after reading the entire book is that the ending of the paper people in the book is predetermined, but they still earnestly pursue every encounter in the plot that has been restarted more than 38,000 times. Tearing away the established characters, breaking away from the script, and running towards the one you love without hesitation again and again (this sentence is written in the book, I really like this sentence 💕). There are also Xiaojiu and Huahua. They are no longer a string of cold codes. Although the program defines their bodies, their sincerity continues to breed feelings. Code cannot frame sincerity, and script cannot lock soul. The freedom of the paper people was never given by the author, but was fostered by love and obsession. May every paper person we have loved break free from their personality and destiny and be happy forever. Have the rest of your life that is unique to you, passionate and free, that the author has not written. 😳 It's really beautiful, highly recommended!!!
I stayed up late to finish reading it. The first time I saw it was an AI short drama that I uploaded on Douyin. I had never seen this kind of subject before and I was attracted to it. When I came here to search, I looked at this chapter and I was still wondering why the first chapter was more than 30,000 chapters and then the first chapter. I thought the author had messed up the code. After reading it, I realized that it was their love for the 30,000th time, no matter how many times it was revised. The plot shows that both Lu Sinian and Wen Yining will fall in love with each other, which makes me feel that the paper person is his true self. In the middle, I still hate Jasmine. Why do I want to see that the characters in my writing do not have a good ending? It turns out that Jasmine just does not want Wen Yining to live his own ending, and the regrets of Jasmine and her boyfriend also meet again in Wen Yining's writing, and they are all redeeming each other. Recommended!
It's super good-looking. I hope that the male protagonist will no longer be controlled by the plot. I hope that the male protagonist will find out that Bai Yueguang has been replaced. I hope that the male and female protagonists will not abuse each other when the memory is recalled. I hope that the original female protagonist will not make mistakes in the future. I hope that the rest will be sweeter. I hope that both the male and female protagonists will get what they want.
The setting is really good. The original male and female protagonists are not vicious characters in the same old ways. The male protagonist has always loved the female protagonist soberly. I personally think the most shocking scene is that the original male protagonist and the male protagonist can recognize each other at a glance and have awakened. It has been restarted more than 30,000 times, just to resist. The plot, restarting again and again, falling in love again and again, is very well written. The original heroine knew that her system's absorption of charm value was harmful, and she refused to touch others in order not to hurt others. The two systems are also very good, and the machine has produced human emotions 👍 👍
Good-looking, but why does the male protagonist have an attractive face? I think it's better for men to be more handsome. Then there is the fact that the heroine clearly knew that the hero and Shen were together, so she should avoid it even if she was not sure whether it was a real relationship. Later, she became more and more exaggerated. What is the difference between this and a mistress?