Moon Journal: The Actor Chosen by the Stars

It is a rare book in Yueji fanfics that does not contain AI elements. The writing is good and the author updates it 3-4 times a day. From the beginning to the end, I can feel that the boss's writing has been improving rapidly. The boss is very cute, patient and gentle. He will thank the readers for every correction they make. I used to Regarding this issue, I was concerned about whether it would be too tiring to update the boss 3-4 times a day + correcting errors. Unexpectedly, the boss replied to my super long comment. I was particularly moved and said that Xiao Li Zhi has a cute human-machine feeling. I hope this book will get better and better. Boss, don't run away and pay attention to your health. We will support your mouth and teeth🥹

This article makes a very reasonable and exquisite expansion of the original plot of Spider Nest, restores and enriches the detailed events, and slowly reveals the subtle differences between Rean and Lean. It not only understands the formation of Lean's character, but also sees new possibilities, making the river flow towards the happy ending I dream of. Rating∞

The narrative rhythm is very good. The first simulation has the same nature as Lean, but the difference is that the protagonist is more courageous and uses his own regret and tenderness to write a different story. "Mom, why don't you always finish reading the picture books?" "Daughter, when the ending of the story is different from the expected, it will bring a heavy sense of loss. Mom's heart is too fragile, so mom has to seal the ending of the story." "Grandma, since the ending is different from what you expected, why not try to change it? Even if it looks like I'm just scribbling, that's what I want." "..." "The flame was blown to another branch by the wind, and continued to obey the will of the wind." "Until one day, the wind told the flame to burn the branches below." "The flame refused. She jumped off the branch, burned herself, and protected the branch." "The wind was very angry, but could do nothing about the flame that had disappeared." "... Daughter, do you still remember?" Her voice was very soft, her eyes lowered to the ground, then raised again. "The flames were blown by the wind and burned the entire forest." "The flame is grateful to the wind for making her life so colorful." "But... One day, the wind blew the flames, and she lit up a raging fire." "Let the flames burn away the branches that have been with her for many years." Li Zhi smiled, with sadness in his laughter. "But the flames did not complain about the wind, nor did they leave the wind." "Instead, we follow the wind and continue to burn down one forest after another." "So when I read this that day, I closed the book."

A different Lean. At least I think this is a great fanfic. It only adds a small amount of original content without adding too much superfluous information. It presents a different timeline and the changes are natural. In fact, this book has really changed some of my views. For example, I don't like many car-following articles because their plots are simply the original text copied into the book. But looking back now, what I hate is that the lack of original content is all inexplicably added self-pleasure elements and dialogue. It may be an exaggeration to say that the original plot has been tampered with, but perhaps what I hate is never telling a story I have heard before, but changing a story I have heard before so that it is completely changed. A story I like will only be engraved in my heart after reading it many times, not the food spoiling.

Rigorous research and delicate emotional description show the most delicious twisting emotions to everyone in their own way. Oh ho ho ho, this is so sweet😋, the emotions and bonds in the mirror world are piled up on Miss Li Zhi, whether it is because of simulation or because she is clumsy about "emotions". He is obviously a 21-year-old short white hairball, but he cares about everyone silently and secretly like a mother. This kind of "silent" dedication and "silent tenderness" is really too shining, so good☺️~❤️🐨👍

It's a super good-looking Bianba novel. It mainly focuses on simulation and supplements with reality. It's so abominable. The original plot stabbed me once, but it wants to stab me again here. It's really delicious. The author's grasp of emotions is very delicate, and he can express Yue Ji's twisting emotions. Author, you must write well. Let's see how long I've been watching

Express your shallow understanding The author's emotional descriptions and interactions between the characters are very special, just like the clouds in the sky and the water on the ground. When you read it, you will not feel how good it is or how sincere the emotions are, but it will feel natural, as if the characters should interact like this and have this feeling. Every turn and every description fits the character and is logical. After I have only read the Lean chapter, I can clearly feel that the author is writing about Lean, not the protagonist. To put it simply, the protagonist, Li Zhi, is just a tool used by the author to participate in the plot many times to write a long novel. It is the kind of fanfic that I want to write about Lean and I also want to write about other characters, but what should I do if there can only be one protagonist? Wouldn't it be enough to let them wear the skin of the protagonist? I personally feel that the personal arc of the protagonist is extremely rare. The changes and differences in Lean in the original work are not due to the protagonist's own character and characteristics, but the author's expectations for Lean, so I say that in the Lean chapter, he wrote about Lean and not the protagonist. It is impossible for the protagonist to be Lean just because he has the same experience as Lean, just as Lean is not Roland after cosplaying with him all his life. The author's portrayal of Lean is more like the invasion of God's hand. The protagonist has no personality of his own and is simply the more humane Lean. The plot fits the main plot, but it fits a little too closely, and it feels a little too powerless. I still support Dada very much. It's not a criticism, it's just my own understanding. I hope Dada writes better and better, and he will never die and will always be happy.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is very readable and durable. Generally speaking, it is very strong. The advantages of this book are mainly concentrated in: 1. Readers who are not familiar with the plot of the Three-piece Monthly Set can also understand the plot. It will be better if they have a certain basic knowledge of the original plot. 2. The updates are stable. As a monthly fanfic, it can maintain stable updates, and the number of words in a single day is stable at more than 4,000 words, which is not too few. 3. Imitating the original character and adapting it to a certain extent is a relatively new writing method. It is a rare routine in Yueji fanfics and even Tomato's second-game fanfics. 4. The writing is good, and there are not many traces of AI. It is indeed rare to be able to do this in this era of technological literature. Overall, this book is a monthly fanfic with stable updates, good creativity, and rich content.

A+! No, A++! The entire narrative is painted with the suffering of the characters, and the plot conflicts are like claw marks tearing open the dull shell, and every decision retains a vivid emotional reverberation. There is no blank space for the character's inner tearing feeling. The suppressed and explosive rhythm accurately hits the instinctive pain. The mental folds are completely exposed, completing the wild aesthetics! ! I am deeply honored to explain your work! You already have the style of a master!

This is a 084 very interesting book. It first included the recently popular Spider Nest plot and successfully rewrote the plot. Although it is a mirror world, it is still very touching. According to the author, the protagonist currently has Rean's fighting skills. I want to see the scene in Chapter 9 when the protagonist supports the spider nest and meets Yoshihide. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It seems that the main plot of Chapter 9 will be at the end of the second simulation, so please give it a try [licking the screen] Teacher, teacher, where is my Lao Tang simulation😭😭😭