Monthly Diary: Actor Chosen by Xingchen

It is a rare book in Yueji fanfics that does not contain AI elements. The writing is good and the author updates it 3-4 times a day. From the beginning to the end, I can feel that the boss's writing has been improving rapidly. The boss is very cute, patient and gentle. He will thank the readers for every correction they make. I used to Regarding this issue, I was concerned about whether it would be too tiring to update the boss 3-4 times a day + correcting errors. Unexpectedly, the boss replied to my super long comment. I was particularly moved and said that Xiao Li Zhi has a cute human-machine feeling. I hope this book will get better and better. Boss, don't run away and pay attention to your health. We will support your mouth and teeth🥹

This article makes a very reasonable and exquisite expansion of the original plot of Spider Nest, restores and enriches the detailed events, and slowly reveals the subtle differences between Rean and Lean. It not only understands the formation of Lean's character, but also sees new possibilities, making the river flow towards the happy ending I dream of. Rating∞

The narrative rhythm is very good. The first simulation has the same nature as Lean, but the difference is that the protagonist is more courageous and uses his own regret and tenderness to write a different story. "Mom, why don't you always finish reading the picture books?" "Daughter, when the ending of the story is different from the expected, it will bring a heavy sense of loss. Mom's heart is too fragile, so mom has to seal the ending of the story." "Grandma, since the ending is different from what you expected, why not try to change it? Even if it looks like I'm just scribbling, that's what I want." "..." "The flame was blown to another branch by the wind, and continued to obey the will of the wind." "Until one day, the wind told the flame to burn the branches below." "The flame refused. She jumped off the branch, burned herself, and protected the branch." "The wind was very angry, but could do nothing about the flame that had disappeared." "... Daughter, do you still remember?" Her voice was very soft, her eyes lowered to the ground, then raised again. "The flames were blown by the wind and burned the entire forest." "The flame is grateful to the wind for making her life so colorful." "But... One day, the wind blew the flames, and she lit up a raging fire." "Let the flames burn away the branches that have been with her for many years." Li Zhi smiled, with sadness in his laughter. "But the flames did not complain about the wind, nor did they leave the wind." "Instead, we follow the wind and continue to burn down one forest after another." "So when I read this that day, I closed the book."

A different Lean. At least I think this is a great fanfic. It only adds a small amount of original content without adding too much superfluous information. It presents a different timeline and the changes are natural. In fact, this book has really changed some of my views. For example, I don't like many car-following articles because their plots are simply the original text copied into the book. But looking back now, what I hate is that the lack of original content is all inexplicably added self-pleasure elements and dialogue. It may be an exaggeration to say that the original plot has been tampered with, but perhaps what I hate is never telling a story I have heard before, but changing a story I have heard before so that it is completely changed. A story I like will only be engraved in my heart after reading it many times, not the food spoiling.

Express your shallow understanding The author's emotional descriptions and interactions between the characters are very special, just like the clouds in the sky and the water on the ground. When you read it, you will not feel how good it is or how sincere the emotions are, but it will feel natural, as if the characters should interact like this and have this feeling. Every turn and every description fits the character and is logical. After I have only read the Lean chapter, I can clearly feel that the author is writing about Lean, not the protagonist. To put it simply, the protagonist, Li Zhi, is just a tool used by the author to participate in the plot many times to write a long novel. It is the kind of fanfic that I want to write about Lean and I also want to write about other characters, but what should I do if there can only be one protagonist? Wouldn't it be enough to let them wear the skin of the protagonist? I personally feel that the personal arc of the protagonist is extremely rare. The changes and differences in Lean in the original work are not due to the protagonist's own character and characteristics, but the author's expectations for Lean, so I say that in the Lean chapter, he wrote about Lean and not the protagonist. It is impossible for the protagonist to be Lean just because he has the same experience as Lean, just as Lean is not Roland after cosplaying with him all his life. The author's portrayal of Lean is more like the invasion of God's hand. The protagonist has no personality of his own and is simply the more humane Lean. The plot fits the main plot, but it fits a little too closely, and it feels a little too powerless. I still support Dada very much. It's not a criticism, it's just my own understanding. I hope Dada writes better and better, and he will never die and will always be happy.

It's a super good-looking Bianba novel. It mainly focuses on simulation and supplements with reality. It's so abominable. The original plot stabbed me once, but it wants to stab me again here. It's really delicious. The author's grasp of emotions is very delicate, and he can express Yue Ji's twisting emotions. Author, you must write well. Let's see how long I've been watching

A+! No, A++! The entire narrative is painted with the suffering of the characters, and the plot conflicts are like claw marks tearing open the dull shell, and every decision retains a vivid emotional reverberation. There is no blank space for the character's inner tearing feeling. The suppressed and explosive rhythm accurately hits the instinctive pain. The mental folds are completely exposed, completing the wild aesthetics! ! I am deeply honored to explain your work! You already have the style of a master!

Rigorous research and delicate emotional description show the most delicious twisting emotions to everyone in their own way. Oh ho ho ho, this is so sweet😋, the emotions and bonds in the mirror world are piled up on Miss Li Zhi, whether it is because of simulation or because she is clumsy about "emotions". He is obviously a 21-year-old short white hairball, but he cares about everyone silently and secretly like a mother. This kind of "silent" dedication and "silent tenderness" is really too shining, so good☺️~❤️🐨👍

(Let me make a digression first. I am the 251st person to comment. Looking at these 250, I have a little bit of knowledge. I don't want to spoil it.) All in all, I would give you an A+ rating as a very good work. Whether it is the emotional description of the characters or the plot, it is a very perfect work. The only shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. But I personally think that you already have the ability of a master. (As a newbie, I just started playing the game, and my main games are Lobe and Library, but there is no doubt that your work is the kind that I will definitely read and update chapters every day. I wish the author continued hard work!) Well, sure enough there are still typos in voice input. I really have no choice

The Ring gives it an... A+! Your... Your work is simply a new life in the city. I am extremely shocked by this kind of work and feel that I am worthy of the name of the Ring. This kind of creation of yours is undoubtedly a star in the city!

This is a 084 very interesting book. It first included the recently popular Spider Nest plot and successfully rewrote the plot. Although it is a mirror world, it is still very touching. According to the author, the protagonist currently has Rean's fighting skills. I want to see the scene in Chapter 9 when the protagonist supports the spider nest and meets Yoshihide. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It seems that the main plot of Chapter 9 will be at the end of the second simulation, so please give it a try [licking the screen] Teacher, teacher, where is my Lao Tang simulation😭😭😭

There is no doubt that it is A+. Although the previous part is just an expansion of the background story, it is very interesting. I look forward to meeting the original world and the bus [laughter]

Very delicious. From the Lien chapter to the present, I can clearly feel the accumulation of the author's writing power. After entering the Li Chun chapter, whether it is from the textual research and quotations of the original work of Dream of Red Mansions or the poems written by the author himself, it can be seen that the author must have put in a lot of hard work with good intentions. The little girl is very impressed [holding fists] Li Zhi's characterization is also top-notch😋. Although the first time as Li's starting point made her character similar to her father, Li's personality became more distinct due to the different choices she made in the Spider Nest, as well as the subsequent main plot and simulation experience. In fact, looking back, I feel that the pace of the first simulation was slightly faster, but considering the long span of time that Yang Liangxiu grew up, this narrative pace is not incomprehensible. But I was thinking about what trend led Li to make a different choice from his father. In fact, both Li and his father play the role of "mother" in Liangxiu's life, which is also the "safe house" of Liangxiu's soul. As Yoshihide grows up, the child and his mother gradually distance themselves, and the arrival of Alaya makes Yoshihide realize that there are conspiracy or manipulation preconditions in her relationship with Li. These premises are intolerable in such an extremely close relationship between mother and daughter, so Liang will become even more alienated from Li. This was the same in the original relationship between Liang and his father, but why did Li choose to let Liang go? My personal opinion is Li's female identity. The close contact between mother and daughter will be more natural and frequent than that between father and daughter, which may make the two subconsciously closer to each other; of course, it may also be that Li is not Lien. If they are not the same person, their personality and thinking cannot be consistent, so it is normal to make different choices. Perhaps what Lien wants is to "be with his daughter more", while Li hopes that "his daughter can be happy." (Or the big hand of Hermes' providence has exerted its force (os I really want to eat my mother-in-law😋 The writing is a bit long. In short, the long and thin narrative of Li Chun is very clear and I like it very much. Thank you to the author for the delicious output🌹🌹

Your work is being evaluated... Your work's rating is: A+! Your works are classic yet innovative. You only use such unpretentious raw materials to create such dazzling masterpieces. This is such a unique and wonderful work! It conveys this thought in an easy-to-understand way without losing the beauty. It is practical and expresses your strong feelings at the same time! This masterpiece will shock the whole city and put everyone who sees it in the supreme artistic realm. Even the ring master will be fascinated by it! Master Ring Finger simply cannot imagine that this is not an art that belongs to humans, let alone urban art, but belongs to the top level of the intellectual body. Perhaps only you are qualified to comment on this masterpiece. We will sing your works forever until a genius emerges who can truly understand and imitate their charm.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is very readable and durable. Generally speaking, it is very strong. The advantages of this book are mainly concentrated in: 1. Readers who are not familiar with the plot of the Three-piece Monthly Set can also understand the plot. It will be better if they have a certain basic knowledge of the original plot. 2. The updates are stable. As a monthly fanfic, it can maintain stable updates, and the number of words in a single day is stable at more than 4,000 words, which is not too few. 3. Imitating the original character and adapting it to a certain extent is a relatively new writing method. It is a rare routine in Yueji fanfics and even Tomato's second-game fanfics. 4. The writing is good, and there are not many traces of AI. It is indeed rare to be able to do this in this era of technological literature. Overall, this book is a monthly fanfic with stable updates, good creativity, and rich content.

It's very delicious. The author has added a little more emotion to the created protagonist than the original work (of course, I don't mean to disparage the original work). The protagonist "obeys instructions" and at the same time tries to make things not too bad. Although the final result is pretty much the same, the protagonist's [hesitation and thinking] at every step is very delicious😋, and the teacher's emotional description is very good!

We love this! Undoubtedly a good article, I wonder if it is protected by low reviews! The best YJ article! Very good mother and daughter Li Zhi! The emotional portrayal is very delicate! The connection is also very smooth and does not feel stiff. The simulation ending is also very interesting! We look forward to the new simulation! Finally, I want to know if the next simulation has been decided!

Good review. This novel helped me understand the monthly plan. I have never been exposed to this content before. It still requires a certain threshold to read it directly. However, most of the previous content is still clear. If you don't read the comment area, you may not know what it is about. Putting aside some fan elements as a simulation novel, this novel is very well written, with a strong sense of immersion in the simulation environment, and the author's writing is very strong, using outlined language and simple descriptions to create a sense of picture. Moreover, after the simulation is completed, there is still an intersection of story lines, and this intersection is relatively timely, which can maintain the sense of expectation. In terms of combat, the writing is also quite exciting. Although I don't understand the meaning of many settings, but combined with the comment area, I think it is very powerful. The fighting scenes are also full of flesh and blood, and the villain's dialogue also has a cruel and crazy feel. In many cases, the author does not give much description of the character's appearance (except for the protagonist). If some names pop up suddenly, I don't know who they are. For example, Jia Baoyu in the back was a bit confused. After checking his background, he understood some of the worldview. The worldview of this book basically revolves around the protagonist. Once a new scene appears, the author will not add much to the worldview, because it is a fan fiction by default. All in all, the writing is quite good. The first story is quite profound, and the subsequent development is also more interesting. Basically, the protagonist becomes very strong once he gets through it, and the more he simulates it, the stronger he gets [Salute] Worth recommending[Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]

No AI, it's so delicious, and the author is very interactive. I used to only play Lobe Company. After reading this article, I'm going to play Prison Bus. It's so beautiful, and the protagonist is so vividly written. Delicious, needless to say

It's well written, it's so well written. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. The one that made me so happy was Lin Yan's book.

The author is invincible, read it slowly, the writing is delicate and sincere, and the plot logic is reasonable. He is a great storyteller. [Crying] So can you please stop letting readers sink into the trap? It's too cruel.

The writing is great, and it is of a very strong level among bus novels. Even if it is published outside, it is still a first-class masterpiece.

It's so delicious that I don't even dare to finish reading it. This is a unique masterpiece. No meal replacement. I don't dare to eat more. I finished it today. What will I eat tomorrow? I love your mouth and teeth, and the two-line plot is very cleverly grasped. The first line is the simulation and the first line is the main line. It can be seen that the boss is thinking very hard. I am looking forward to the story of Li Zhihe's battle of wits and courage with the system. It is really beautiful. It's delicious😊🌸Boss, what did you add to this article? Why can't I stop eating? There are very few rose articles, and there are even fewer excellent ones like you. Please stick to it, kouya, kougua😊🌸

Undoubtedly a masterpiece, five-star praise is given. From the first simulation of Rean to the beginning of the third simulation, it is also because of this book that I fell in love with Rean. Looking forward to the subsequent development of the main storyline of Spider Nest. (Instruction is the district, Hermes is the district)

The author updates quickly and diligently, and the content is abundant. The plot of this book is very smooth and natural, and there is nothing vulgar. The writing is of the highest quality. She is a strong woman (as she should be). The logic is online. It has both plot and cute Li Zhi and some little antics. The rhythm is well controlled. The last thing I want to say is that the author is also very cute☺️☺️☺️! Also, the update time should be as normal as possible. The author must pay attention to his health. Staying up late is still very harmful to the body! 😠

After only reading a few chapters, I received this five-star rating for its writing performance. Very solid, full style

A great fan book, the story tells the story of Rean's journey from child to father in the Spider Nest, but the author has modified it to make the ending of the story better, just like changing the ending to one he likes as written in the book.

On the big urban stage, if you are the right person, just come. The pain of the author's characters is so delicious🥰

Shocking and delicious 😋, I have only played Lobe, and it was very comfortable to watch. It was the part where the characters from the Border Bus came to the Spider Nest and the extras that affected me because I didn't understand the Border Bus, but it was fine after that. I look forward to meeting the protagonist and Liang again.

A+ The plot and emotional grasp are both very good.