I Picked Up a Little Sister Who Cultivates Immortality, and Rose to the Top

I'm picky. To be honest, the author's writing style, characters, and plot development are all very immature. As long as the writing is clear in plain language, this is not a shortcoming, but the characters and plot made me feel embarrassed. It doesn't mean that you have to write well, and you have to clearly explain the characters of the two heroines. If you don't let readers see it at a glance, no one will even have the desire to read on. The development of the plot is also very sudden, which makes people completely unable to connect to the previous part after watching it.

The book is a good book but not decisive enough. Things that can be solved completely from the beginning are still running in front of the protagonist after three or four chapters, which feels like a watery chapter. The protagonist is a cultivator. Even in Gaowu, it is still a place where the jungle is strong and the strong prey on the weak. It is not impossible to defeat him. Every time he encounters something, he must endure it patiently. [Please update]

It's okay. There are too many things I don't know what to say.