Reborn as the Male Lead's Vegetative Younger Sister in a Game Novel

The writing is very good, the writing is smooth, the storyline is interesting, and it is tied immediately, but I still prefer that the heroine has no cp. When I read it, the introduction still has no cp. Now it turns into buying stocks. I also hope that the heroine can concentrate on her career and build a guild to increase her level. The invasion of the game is coming three months away. In reality, the body is still weak and the level is not enough. Moreover, after knowing that the brother of the original male protagonist is not all-powerful, it feels real. In a bit... (The plot is still very good at the moment, but I may not read it again after more love-related plots appear) (The group image nb is okay, I feel that it would be very boring for everyone to fall in love with this pure spirit of working together. After all, I remember that this book was non-CP at the beginning, and I generally don't read it for love) (I don't necessarily mean to interfere with the author's writing, I just sincerely offer some suggestions and my own feelings) No way, the more I think about it, the more uncomfortable I feel. I still can't accept that the group portrait turned into a stock purchase halfway through. I still suggest that the author should not drastically change this kind of introduction in the future, and determine the writing direction in advance. This makes the original audience really uncomfortable, and it feels like they are tricking people into killing them.

I think the author's writing is very good. I personally like to read articles about strong women with CP. I think as long as the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist (of course the male protagonist cannot be a loser), it will be fine. The female protagonist is not a nun and has some love. Even if the heroine has a harem, it doesn't matter. If the heroine is so strong, isn't it normal to have admirers? There is no need for all heroines in strong female novels to have only family and friendship. In male videos, it is common for the male protagonist to have three wives, four concubines, and confidants when he becomes powerful. Why is it that in a female channel, the heroine can't even have admirers? Isn't it normal for a heroine who is so good to be attracted and impressed by many people around her? As long as the logic is consistent, the emotional line is well written, and the heroine enjoys being loved openly and even takes the initiative to love, I think there is no problem.

It's pretty good-looking, nothing too bad about it, but some of the descriptions could be changed to make it a bit uncomfortable. I read earlier that someone said that the heroine revealed the news about the game invasion. After reading it, I feel that the revelation is quite reasonable and many people above have guessed it. However, the official inside feels that the credibility is too weak, and there is no trace of the official in the game at all, but it is a bit outrageous that the villain can be sentenced in a car. All in all, the writing in the game is pretty good. The reality part is a bit irrational, but it doesn't affect the enjoyment. It's a good novel. Add one more, I hope the heroine is the original one

So far, the plot is super interesting, very interesting, and more! Author! Actually! Every day! Even! Three chapters! I must give it five stars, okay? Uh-huh, it's actually 1v2, then I'll quit 😅😅

At present, the plot progression is similar to that of traditional online games. The writing is smooth, natural and interesting. The common enemies of the protagonist group and the branch plots are clear. It is worth watching. There are some possible poisonous points in the following, if you mind spoilers, you can skip it. There is a description in the article that causes discomfort. It uses the cry of an abused kitten to compare the sound of the heroine's injury, which causes discomfort. The image of the heroine is excessively described and too weak. (However, some people may think that it is to highlight the heroine because of the release of the game cabin game. (Comparison of the card body returning to health), but for me personally, it over-portrays the weak and weak. You can add the process of the heroine's gradual growth in the middle and late stages of the previous article when the heroine regains health. I hope the author can try to reflect on the paragraphs and enrich the details. This will make the article better and better. Finally, support the author's creation, please come on! I was really devastated. At first, I was looking for a profile with no cp and a group portrait. The result was that the profile was changed to a stock buying article (stock buying means that the female protagonist has several male protagonists, but in the end only one man was selected as the official boyfriend). Since June, because there is no cp, I have been thinking about the group portrait, and there are three men. The normal result is that I changed the introduction later. It is also the fifth time I have read No CP and I was defrauded. I am really sad... I probably shouldn't have given you advice at the beginning. I think everyone knows the sadness of being defrauded when I want to raise a book. I will not give a good review to the author. It is too sad to be defrauded...

The world view of the game is well created, and the game has a strong sense of déjà vu. It's a cool article, the main character's group has a lot of luck, the official is easy to talk to, and the enemies are too fragile to mess around. Occasionally there are some front and back bugs that have little impact, and the character creation is relatively flat and not very differentiated, but it mainly depends on the plot and the game, and the character has little impact on the perception. But I don't know if the author loves to play games and is used to it. There are many books written by authors who pay too much attention to their wording. This book will be very uncomfortable. There is a general term like "brothers, let's go together". The heroine's priesthood is also the goddess of xx. The problem is that everyone else is the god of xx. There are also female mages, female magic gods, and female teachers. There is no need to emphasize them if the gender of the role is known. It's not that it's demanding, but it's just that the neutral words are used, and there are many more comfortable alternatives. I feel that it should be a female novel, especially one that does not abuse women, which is the minimum requirement for female strong characters. I always see some incomprehensible comments in the comments section, about whether it will affect having children, why a female character who is envious of high-end equipment will have blabla when the heroine's sister-in-law, and some who get excited when she sees stockings. The subject matter may be a bit too attractive for weird men. . . But there are also many excellent female characters in the main cast, which can make people feel comfortable or uncomfortable.

It's very beautiful, my dears, and the writing is to my liking [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] A typical high-quality female pornographic article that completely avoids the clichés and makes people feel comfortable watching it! The heroine never relies on men and leads her teammates 😳 (teammates are also awesome and don't cheat!!!) She has real skills and pursues a career. She is a cute plant girl who never swallows when she is suppressed or slandered. She has won the three major guilds in one fell swoop. She has a logical online IQ and can make a comeback against the wind by relying on her own strength. She can slap the villain in the face neatly and without any sloppy and frustrating plot [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] It is a rare article that cooperates with the official. I hope to finally clarify the essence of time travel (I guess the heroine was originally a person from this world and was knocked into a vegetative state and went to a different world. She probably learned about it through a mysterious copy reward 🤔) Looking forward to Fufu's new clothes (*^o^*)[Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates] The emotional line explodes 🤦

It's very good-looking, very enjoyable writing, and the author is quick to update. I originally came here because of the cp. Why should there be no cp in the novel about strong women, and a harem? The more I read, the more enjoyable and smooth I read. I read more than 100 chapters in a day. You can't come here just for the cp. The author of this book has a hard time writing about love. It's really forced love. The plot is pretty good, but the forced love story will pop up from time to time. It's a bit poisonous.

First of all, I think the heroine's climb up step by step is very realistic. She upgrades step by step and gets the first pass in the dungeon. There are people better than her, but she refuses to accept it. She also has support, so Chu Feng deals with stronger bad guys for her. It's very loving that the brother cares about his sister. Furthermore, I really like that she is strong, but she also understands that two fists are difficult to defeat with four hands, so she chooses to help other players, enter the Thorn Guild, establish a town, and agrees to the official maintenance of order. All victories are inseparable from the tacit understanding of their team and the wisdom of the heroine. She helps others regardless of past grudges to enhance her own strength, which is enough to prove the intelligence of the heroine. Secondly, I don't think there is a cp now. I think they are more like friends, brothers, and comrades. He may have feelings for the heroine, but more definitely he respects and admires her. They think the heroine is strong so they admire her. They are a team. If some readers really take it seriously Because this is a cp, the best solution for them is to find an article with all girls or old people and children. This article is obviously a group portrait article. Everyone loves their teammates. They understand and help each other, worship the strong and care for the weak. I don't think there's anything wrong with what the author wrote. What he wrote is both realistic and refreshing. He doesn't need to change, it's just fine now. If you can, please promise me more updates. I want to read more. Teacher, you can't do this. She is still a fifteen-year-old child who was traumatized at the age of fifteen (although she is a time travel), but in the eyes of some people (brother), she is not an adult. Even if we are together again in a few years, there will definitely be people who can't stand it. Teacher, please really don't destroy your future. I'm really anxious, I'm really broken, teacher First of all, I can only say that some people like harems, some people hate harems, and some people will be eliminated at this moment. I am not saying that the heroine cannot have a harem, but I am saying that the heroine is relatively young at the beginning. She had a car accident at 15 or 16 years old, and when she was 18 years old, her body was about the same as that of 15 or 16 years old. I I don't know about other people, but in my eyes she may be my daughter. I think it's good for her to eat, drink and have fun with her brother and friends, and play dungeons to fight enemies together. There is absolutely no need to have a male protagonist. What is the meaning of a male protagonist? Is the female protagonist going to save him or prefer him when she is about to die? Or to highlight the charm of the heroine and let them have something good for the heroine. I don't understand. They are comrades-in-arms and they will help each other. I don't see any ambiguity or anything that would make the other party like the heroine. I think they all admire it. Even so, Jiaojiao and they both think the heroine is great. Why is Jiaojiao not a cp? Why do all the comrades admire the heroine and they behave the same way? Why only two of them like it? This is really my understanding after watching it for fourteen hours. I really hope the author can help me explain.

The content is good, I quite like it. I mean, don't you read the comment section? There are a lot of typos, and even if you catch bugs, you won't correct them. When I first read it, there was no CP. How come I got CP when I looked at it? It was still a stock buying article [what]