Dragon Ball, How Did He Become the Second in Command of Frieza's Army?

It's very good. It's well-founded and the improvement is gradual. Compared with those novels where the gravity chamber lasts for a few days and then angrily transforms into a Super Sailor and then kicks the King, Super Two, Super Three, etc., It's so comfortable to use S cells to explain it. I can't chase you anymore, it's too wet [smile]

After reading Chapter 62, the writing is actually very good, especially Aji. Unlike other protagonists, the protagonist masters the acting method perfectly, and then shouts that he wants to surpass Kakarot and go to Earth to grab fairy beans and women. This is an advantage to me. As for looking like he's a bit licking Freon, no, Frieza. It's not a big problem, after all, it's just for these vinegar-wrapped dumplings.

The protagonist's position is good and novel. After reading it, I have some thoughts on the subsequent plot. Under the protagonist's method of operation, Frieza's Legion is gradually transformed into Frieza's Group. The acquired territory is very suitable for control by Star Iron's Interstellar Peace Corporation or the Tau Higher Good in 40k. Frieza himself has tasted the profits and prestige of this operation. The slightly imperial structure is no longer as evil as before, and the protagonist's status is getting higher and higher, becoming Frieza's right-hand man. When expanding to the earth, the protagonist thinks that the earth is in trouble and the Cell android puppets appear from time to time. He also says that the various races in the legion will help the construction and development of the earth and become the backing of the earth. There will also be many experts who can discuss and persuade the Z warriors and Sun Wukong. He also persuades Vegeta with his identity as a Saiyan and the clues about the shadow of the God of Destruction behind the destruction of Planet Vegeta, and finally establishes a galactic alliance free from the influence of the god (Kaiogami, the god of destruction, all kings). Hahaha, these are all made up in my head. I wonder if I can provide the author with some follow-up plot ideas [Sending my heart] It's so beautiful that I can't stop watching it [crying][crying][crying] I have to watch it while I'm at work

A very good Dragon Ball novel, highly recommended, but if there is a female protagonist, I hope Bulma will not be taken advantage of by others [laughing and crying]

This is the only Dragon Ball fanfic with brains, and it's also the best. The only drawback is that there are no units for money in the universe, and the division of forces in the universe is a bit blurry. In addition to those in the original book, there are also consortiums and the like, as well as forces such as the Galaxy Patrol and the Galaxy King. I hope the author can write down the combat power in more detail.

Feeling pretty good I'm not bragging. People who read this line are all magnificent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stone, miraculous workmanship, vibrating. Deaf and enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, sees thousands of miles clearly, rains and dews on the common people, and is surrounded by thousands of miles, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, the majestic figure, the high-rise building, benevolent and moral, charming and suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs the sea Tang, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have a high sentiment, you have a lot of virtue, you have immeasurable merit, you have good gold and jade, you have bright virtues, you have a beautiful heart, you have a good heart, you have a pure heart, you have a lot of virtues. Orchid, a person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person, a white crane in the clouds, in his prime, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, a leader among others, a branch in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

For Dragon Ball fans, this is a novel idea and looks good.

At present, I feel that the rhythm is very good, and it is still very good to read. Although there are some typos, it is not harmful. I just hope that the author will not break down the writing later, and don't stop. Also, the update is not enough for reading [Learned]

I remember that the spirit book fruit increased a lot. At first, Sun Wukong's combat power was about the same as that of Sun Wukong, who had a fighting power of 30,000. Sun Wukong had ten times Kaioken's 300,000 fighting power. He took one bite of the fruit and even surpassed Sun Wukong.

I finally saw a new track being opened again, and I am no longer following Dragon Ball Warriors to play through the plot to increase my combat power.

It's quite interesting. It doesn't have the passion of being a second grader. It's not just about fighting and leveling up. When he sees Frieza, he will kneel down on one knee to salute. This is simply the opposite of Tiangang in the previous novels. No matter how powerful the protagonist is when he meets him, he will never kneel down. He is always neither humble nor arrogant (that is, he is awesome). Big people always have flaws and should be appreciated.

Haha, Dragon Ball fandom is a niche, and it's difficult to write well. This one is among the best I've come across. If you like this track, you can read more. Don't get too hung up on combat power comparisons and other aspects. After all, it's a hole dug by a bird. Respect the author's point of view. The plot is good.

After watching it for a few hours, I summarized it. As a Dragon Ball fan novel, the quality is quite good. There are a lot of minor problems, but the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. Because some of the content is about space management, it may be a bit boring for people who are not interested in these contents. After all, it is Dragon Ball, an anime that focuses on fighting. Writing this will indeed make people a little bit unreadable, but as a Dragon Ball fan fiction, it will really feel like it without adding other things. It's very empty, which is a matter of opinion; there are also some plots that I feel are not in line with the original Dragon Ball characters. It can be seen that those plots are actually laid out for the purpose of universe management. There is nothing wrong with the plot logic, but it feels a bit weird when watching it. Other than that, I think there are actually no problems. The plot is reasonable, it makes sense, and Dales' growth path can be clearly seen. In terms of space management, there is still no problem. It's not a masterpiece, but it can be considered a good one. I would give it an 8.1 To 8.3 Personally. The previous rating is my standard rating. I wish the author a high score for the novel as soon as possible. I will change it to 5⭐️ for you.

What is it like to chase your own book [Thinking] Give General Dales a five-star rating! Otherwise, when Frieza's galactic peacekeeping force arrives, you will suffer the same consequences [rolls eyes]

I don't want to say those empty and big words that make me look like a troll [facepalm], I can only say that from my personal point of view, this book is a very good book among Tomato Dragon Ball fans. It's not like other Dragon Balls where Vegeta is licked when he catches him, nor is it like other Dragon Balls where he starts with a team in the Senbei Gravity Time Room. When he comes out to fight Frieza, he has already surpassed several people [facepalm] There are too few chapters [face covering], only three chapters in one day. I have read it several times. Is the author sure that it will be a single heroine? It's better to have multiple female protagonists. I don't mind one or more, but if there are multiple female protagonists, I suggest Bulma and No. 18 [Laughing]. By the way, I hope that the single female protagonist will be a king (dog head) [laughing]

By the way, the author has retained the tail of Dares, is he planning to take the super-four evolution route and add the energy of God to push boundaries? [What] If this is the case, my idea is that Super Four is stronger than Red and weaker than Super Blue, and has the strength of Deep Blue to break through the boundary. What is the main character's strength now, author? I feel like there is no specific reference. Is it the peak of Super 2 or stronger? [What]

A very novel perspective, quite good. The main characters in the original novel still need more interactions. This is basically what you read in Dragon Ball novels, right?

The petite Lord Frieza, the one who refutes his father for Darius, and the one who treats Darius specially, is so delicious, 😋

It's a very good book. It allowed me to see one of the few Dragon Ball fanfics. I feel that the characters are thinking, for their own benefit, to climb to a high position, to become stronger. The combination of these desires makes them look like a living person. This is already a high praise, and the protagonist's three views are correct.

Although there are shortcomings, it is generally quite good. Even though Dragon Ball is not very popular, it can still achieve a score of 7.4 After the new book is rated. It can prove its strength. I feel that the overall score should be around 8 points.

This is probably the best Dragon Ball novel I've ever read on Tomato. It's so enjoyable. I'll probably never forget you in this life [smile] [smile] [smile] There are too few updates every day. At least 1,000 chapters have to be updated every day to be enough [grievance] [smile]

The author's writing is quite good. There is very little writing about Darius here, but it is a pity that Dr. Willow and Android 13 are difficult to appear in the theatrical version of this timeline [facepalm] and according to this plot, who should the undead warriors such as Slug and others look for in the OVA [laughing and crying] The protagonist Darius is not dead, and Frieza cannot die for a short time.

The beginning was quite novel to me, the plot was pretty good, and there wasn't anything that was difficult to watch.

I hope the protagonist can become Super Four! Black hair is really cool!

It is a very novel Dragon Ball novel, but it is a bit too slow to start, with too few battle scenes, and there is currently no clear villain or opponent.

The most important thing is that all the people in the book look like they are in the original work. Those words are what the original character would say under the corresponding conditions, and the actions taken by the original character would also be done under the corresponding conditions.

First of all, let me just express my own opinion. For me, this book is worth reading among the few Dragon Ball fans. It is very refreshing, and the combat power is not as exaggerated as some other fans. The other Dragon Ball characters are also well portrayed, but I also skipped some chapters and it felt a bit draggy. Also, I have no idea about the image of Dales in the theatrical version. The image of Black Goku is completely incompatible.

The scene descriptions are vivid and vivid, and the plot rhythm is rich. It is a truly new story, rather than following the protagonist's plot, it really takes place in the same world and the lives of different people.

Very creative Dragon Ball novel, the writing is good The plot after beating Gula is awesome

The heroine wants number 18! Don't be cheap, that bald guy