{No system + multiple heroines}
I summoned a super clingy beautiful girl.
Every day she pesters me for hugs, lap pillows, and kisses.
She is very sensible, very obedient, very cute, and in my eyes she is perfect.
Of course, there are some minor flaws.
Except for me, everyone else will always make strange screams when they see her...
Wait, it seems like more than one was summoned? ?
Reader comments
This subject matter is really good. . . However, you are too much of a riddle. You have repeatedly made bad luck in previous lives. What happened to you in your previous life? Why are you pretending to be the Riddler, and why is the protagonist inexplicably resistant to it? . . . What everyone is looking for is - it is obviously a genie but it is a girl. This contrast + invincible combat power can make readers feel happy. Interacting with a girl but others cannot see or even fear it will make readers feel exciting and interesting. . . It's not for you to confuse the readers with the Riddler and the depressing process. . .
It's quite interesting. The protagonist is afraid of some things after his rebirth. He has a mother, but the contracted beast is an evil god and has mental pollution. Those who don't know Cthulhu may not know that the old masters and old gods are things that humans cannot understand. When humans observe or notice it, it is like a cockroach suddenly discovering that he is a human. But It's like eating garbage for a lifetime, you know, and it's like an ant discovering that he is the smallest bug and seeing the three-dimensional world. Going crazy is good, and distortion may occur, just like a cockroach discovering that he is a human being. His soul denies himself and his body does not recognize himself. He releases the contracted beast. What should his mother do if she sees it? ? ? He loves his mother and has feelings for his contracted beast, so he is afraid, and he is even more afraid that his mother will be used as a hostage before he grows up. There is nothing wrong with the author's mental journey.
Oops, don't say it, don't say it, you really can't hide the flaws. I originally clicked on this book, thinking it was just a cool article, but it turned out that it gave me history at the beginning, and it can't be considered history. The main purpose is to raise the status of summoner to the national level. It was a bit frustrating in the early stage, Zhang I just want to kill you. What you introduce is the invincibility of the protagonist's summons. Especially since this kind of crisis comes from the national level, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. But later on, it returns to the normal route. The more you write, the better. I have a few questions for the author. @, Summoning and exchanging things doesn't seem to be the strongest? I read the latest chapter, running with the protagonist, is it a pure mechanism? What does the sequence in front of the summon mean? Will there be new summons added? Is Ling in the five-person team the female protagonist?
Overall, it's pretty good, and there's a lot of room for expansion in the follow-up plot, which is worth looking forward to.
Isn't it about controlling beasts? Why is it written that it's all about people fighting against each other? As for the beasts, it's as if they've disappeared.
The invincible novel focuses more on combat in terms of the balance between combat and love. Although the author is aware of the foreshadowing, the hole dug is a bit uneven, causing some plots where readers need to use their wits.
It is recommended here to provide some guidance on the protagonist's superpower background [face covering]
It's very good-looking, it's a bit of a brute force, and it has conceptual-level abilities. It's fun to watch, and the plot is generally enjoyable to watch. The girl with this ability is good-looking, and she likes to bang. The protagonist doesn't dare to accept it at the beginning because of the brute force, and then she doesn't dare to caress her too much. I don't understand it, but if I know about the past life, I might understand it, and the description of the protagonist's psychological journey is also okay.
Very good book, too short now.
The writing is wonderful, the psychological changes of the protagonist are clearly explained, and the relationship with the girl is very harmonious, but the narrative is a bit slow.
Seeing that so far, the protagonist has two bonds, a black girl and a white girl. The black one comes out and is well written. It depends on how the white one is integrated later.
All in all, it's a very good book. I'll give it a 7 or 8 rating for the follow-up.
In terms of subject matter, it can reach 9.0 Or above, but the author's writing style has lowered the upper limit. If you want more people to read it later, it is recommended to have dual heroines or multiple heroines (with more than three heroines), and practice your writing skills.
There is something really good about this author's writing style, it's really worth reading. It's just a little depressing. There were a few authors writing this kind of book in the past two years, and the black version was very good-looking, and I quite like reading this kind of genre. To be honest, when I first started watching it, I almost wanted to make the protagonist black [face covering]. That Mr. Zhou, the author can portray him well.
It's very good. It's relatively short and has minor shortcomings that can be ignored. If you can keep writing at this level, it will be a book close to the top. It would be nice if there were more female leads😋Although there is a sentence that mentions "us", at present, only two of them have appeared.
At present, it seems to be a hand-me-down, and the subject matter is more to your liking [eating melon]. It is okay to write about the protagonist's change of mentality in a few chapters (actually it is still a little rushed, but it is already very good for a new writer), but the author of the riddle buried in the front should not forget to give it a five-star encouragement [thinking]
Don't treat the setting as suspense, the Riddler will only be off-putting.
It's beautiful and delicious. Come on, brother who writes novels.
Oh Nei Gai, I will do anything just to keep watching [laughing evilly]
[Adoration] It looks so tight, faster and faster [Adoration]
It's amazing. I don't care about the pace. I just give it five stars for this point.
The author is really good at writing.
It's invincible, I thought I was just pretending, but the last chapter really pleased me. It's undoubtedly a qualified novel.
This book is very good
Not bad, just a little short
Give me an update, damn it😡
So far so good
Very nice, good luck to the author.
Very nice, please update soon
So far, I think it's fine
It looks good. This kind of subject has great potential. I hope the author can keep writing and don't end it!
Pure love is pure love. As for whether the protagonist is human or not, it's hard to tell.
It's a bit foggy, but overall it's good
It's okay, it's not bad, but come and see for yourself.
Not bad, has shortcomings but keep working hard
Alas, although it's a bit Riddler, it's still okay. The author will update it soon.
This subject matter is really good. . . However, you are too much of a riddle. You have repeatedly made bad luck in previous lives. What happened to you in your previous life? Why are you pretending to be the Riddler, and why is the protagonist inexplicably resistant to it? . . . What everyone is looking for is - it is obviously a genie but it is a girl. This contrast + invincible combat power can make readers feel happy. Interacting with a girl but others cannot see or even fear it will make readers feel exciting and interesting. . . It's not for you to confuse the readers with the Riddler and the depressing process. . .
It's quite interesting. The protagonist is afraid of some things after his rebirth. He has a mother, but the contracted beast is an evil god and has mental pollution. Those who don't know Cthulhu may not know that the old masters and old gods are things that humans cannot understand. When humans observe or notice it, it is like a cockroach suddenly discovering that he is a human. But It's like eating garbage for a lifetime, you know, and it's like an ant discovering that he is the smallest bug and seeing the three-dimensional world. Going crazy is good, and distortion may occur, just like a cockroach discovering that he is a human being. His soul denies himself and his body does not recognize himself. He releases the contracted beast. What should his mother do if she sees it? ? ? He loves his mother and has feelings for his contracted beast, so he is afraid, and he is even more afraid that his mother will be used as a hostage before he grows up. There is nothing wrong with the author's mental journey.
Oops, don't say it, don't say it, you really can't hide the flaws. I originally clicked on this book, thinking it was just a cool article, but it turned out that it gave me history at the beginning, and it can't be considered history. The main purpose is to raise the status of summoner to the national level. It was a bit frustrating in the early stage, Zhang I just want to kill you. What you introduce is the invincibility of the protagonist's summons. Especially since this kind of crisis comes from the national level, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. But later on, it returns to the normal route. The more you write, the better. I have a few questions for the author. @, Summoning and exchanging things doesn't seem to be the strongest? I read the latest chapter, running with the protagonist, is it a pure mechanism? What does the sequence in front of the summon mean? Will there be new summons added? Is Ling in the five-person team the female protagonist? Overall, it's pretty good, and there's a lot of room for expansion in the follow-up plot, which is worth looking forward to.
Isn't it about controlling beasts? Why is it written that it's all about people fighting against each other? As for the beasts, it's as if they've disappeared.
The invincible novel focuses more on combat in terms of the balance between combat and love. Although the author is aware of the foreshadowing, the hole dug is a bit uneven, causing some plots where readers need to use their wits. It is recommended here to provide some guidance on the protagonist's superpower background [face covering]
It's very good-looking, it's a bit of a brute force, and it has conceptual-level abilities. It's fun to watch, and the plot is generally enjoyable to watch. The girl with this ability is good-looking, and she likes to bang. The protagonist doesn't dare to accept it at the beginning because of the brute force, and then she doesn't dare to caress her too much. I don't understand it, but if I know about the past life, I might understand it, and the description of the protagonist's psychological journey is also okay.
Very good book, too short now. The writing is wonderful, the psychological changes of the protagonist are clearly explained, and the relationship with the girl is very harmonious, but the narrative is a bit slow. Seeing that so far, the protagonist has two bonds, a black girl and a white girl. The black one comes out and is well written. It depends on how the white one is integrated later. All in all, it's a very good book. I'll give it a 7 or 8 rating for the follow-up.
In terms of subject matter, it can reach 9.0 Or above, but the author's writing style has lowered the upper limit. If you want more people to read it later, it is recommended to have dual heroines or multiple heroines (with more than three heroines), and practice your writing skills.
There is something really good about this author's writing style, it's really worth reading. It's just a little depressing. There were a few authors writing this kind of book in the past two years, and the black version was very good-looking, and I quite like reading this kind of genre. To be honest, when I first started watching it, I almost wanted to make the protagonist black [face covering]. That Mr. Zhou, the author can portray him well.
It's very good. It's relatively short and has minor shortcomings that can be ignored. If you can keep writing at this level, it will be a book close to the top. It would be nice if there were more female leads😋Although there is a sentence that mentions "us", at present, only two of them have appeared.
At present, it seems to be a hand-me-down, and the subject matter is more to your liking [eating melon]. It is okay to write about the protagonist's change of mentality in a few chapters (actually it is still a little rushed, but it is already very good for a new writer), but the author of the riddle buried in the front should not forget to give it a five-star encouragement [thinking]
Don't treat the setting as suspense, the Riddler will only be off-putting.
It's beautiful and delicious. Come on, brother who writes novels. Oh Nei Gai, I will do anything just to keep watching [laughing evilly]
[Adoration] It looks so tight, faster and faster [Adoration]
It's amazing. I don't care about the pace. I just give it five stars for this point.
The author is really good at writing.
It's invincible, I thought I was just pretending, but the last chapter really pleased me. It's undoubtedly a qualified novel.
This book is very good
Not bad, just a little short
Give me an update, damn it😡
So far so good
Very nice, good luck to the author.
Very nice, please update soon
So far, I think it's fine
It looks good. This kind of subject has great potential. I hope the author can keep writing and don't end it!
Pure love is pure love. As for whether the protagonist is human or not, it's hard to tell.
It's a bit foggy, but overall it's good
It's okay, it's not bad, but come and see for yourself.
Not bad, has shortcomings but keep working hard
Alas, although it's a bit Riddler, it's still okay. The author will update it soon.