The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: After They Discover My Powers, I Become Wuxian's Disciple

Okay, okay, I like it very much. The characters are very close to reality, which allowed me to see that the characters in this book have emotions: the separation between the heroine and her parents, and the separation from the little fox are very realistic. Luo Xiaohei is the best fan I have seen recently. The little fox may have a knife after separation. . . (Bushi) No. . The current problem is that there are too few and not enough. The whole book is bland, just like eating a reincarnated apple (? What an abstract metaphor). I like this style. I hope you can stick with it, it has great potential! Come on qwq!

It's really good-looking. 🥰🥰🥰. It's tied immediately. The description is very consistent. Personally, the characters don't feel OOC. It has the flavor of the original Luo Xiaohei. The author also has his own understanding (ง ˙o˙)ว, the rhythm is also very good, but there are some typos. The author didn't pay attention, maybe =￣ω￣= This is the first fanfic of Luo Xiaohei that I have read. By the way, this should be non-CP, right? ʘᴗʘ, The author is very optimistic about you 😘😘😘

Very reasonable plot. It is very consistent with the growth process of an ordinary person, and the plot is also very smooth. It is a good book worth reading. Write about the most sincere emotions between people. I think it is really consistent with Luo Xiaohei. Reading Xiaohei leaves it to us, uh, the friendship between Infinite and his master, the friendship between people, and the friendship between people and fairies.

Nice! Very nice! Don't stop watching just because the ratings haven't been released yet! The author's writing is quite good, with occasional typos. The description of family love really makes people feel warm... It feels like purification, and daily life is not boring, it is very interesting. It is very close to reality. The heroine is not said to be a very self-disciplined and studious group. She will also be lazy without the supervision of the master. It is very resonant. It gives me the feeling that it will be difficult to finish the homework on the last day even if I know that there are a lot of vacation homework left unfinished. I still can't help but feel lazy in the early stage of the vacation.

It's very interesting. There are too few books by Luo Xiaohei. This one is really interesting. The plot is very smooth and interesting. I'm really looking forward to what will happen next. I hope the author will be more popular! I am looking forward to the follow-up [please ask for explosive updates][please seek explosive updates][ask for explosive updates][ask for explosive updates]

It's very interesting and satisfies my desire to be a human being in Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles and to participate in the main storyline. Moreover, it feels like the protagonist grows up neither slowly nor too quickly. I can also feel the warmth of Kinmen, and the rhythm is also very good. At first, I thought it was a bit AI, but it got better later.

It's very good. The story feels very delicate and emotional. It's a fanfic worth reading. But I still hope to speed up the progress of the heroine. Although she is a junior high school student, she feels very mature, and the progress is still a bit strange. The suggestion is to skip a period of time like Qing Ning in Lanxi Town, and then directly go to college.

Teacher, it should be noted that Luo Xiaohei has his own world view and map. Although it is based on the real world, it cannot be copied completely. The rest should be regarded as your personal settings, teacher. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] There are many metaphorical words like, like, and so on in the article. If you don't look carefully at the personal changes between paragraphs, you will mistake them for logical errors. This is almost a common problem for new authors. I hope they will grow up as soon as possible.

Personally, I feel that the narrator is a bit sad

I think this book, except for the first few chapters, is very warm. Of course, this is how I felt when I read less than half of it 😘😘