Edge: the Slave the Mouse Picked up Was an Imperial Noble

Very good Shushu, love comes from Fried Rice Smart

According to the description of Rimworld as a background, there is a cute rat that does exist in Rimworld. It is a very interesting subject to innovate the story of her experience and describe it in detail. Most of the stories and plots that appear in the book are well-founded in rimworld. Although the game does not tell the trivial matters of daily life from a personal perspective, after playing rimworld, reading this novel makes people's eyes shine and makes people curious about what Shushu will experience in the future. It's very interesting and interesting, and I highly recommend everyone to try playing Rimworld and experience the dual fun brought by the novel and the game.

Shushu is cute, straight out of 50~ To be honest, the story structure is well-proportioned and relaxed at the moment. Although the rhythm is not tight, it definitely does not feel sluggish. The emotional line is slightly backwards, but it is within a reasonable range. The most important thing is that there is no AI flavor, which is rare in Tomato. See, the author can consider the DLC story lines and anthropomorphic story techniques of Ring World, turn the simple accidental generators of Ring World into hidden threads, and finally form various major events such as facing mechanical disasters - establishing the Rat Empire - colonial wars, etc. This will also make it easier for the author to think about long-term stories.

It's pretty good. It suits your appetite. I give it four stars to prevent it from being regarded as a troll.

(The following review contains spoilers) The story lacks a beginning. From the perspective of readers who have not played Ring World, the initial hunting process of Iron Heart is very abrupt. The first chapter is not attractive enough to retain readers who have not played Ring World, nor does it introduce the story and character background. The first thought when reading is "Why is Iron Heart hunting here? Does chewing the birch bark by the camp mean that Iron Heart is not alone?". It feels like a lollipop with its head cut off. You can only rely on the stick in the middle to tell that it was originally a lollipop. It is also difficult to tell what flavor the lollipop is with just this stick. Subsequently, Iron Heart expresses the town being destroyed by the machine race and the ability to hear the voice of extraordinary intelligence, both overtly and covertly. It is suitable to be placed at the beginning. The town is destroyed by the terrifying power and Iron Heart hears the extraordinary voice to retain the audience. The follow-up can also be written as Iron Heart escapes the town with extraordinary guidance and survives alone. Then comes the original plot of the first chapter Saw a novel with a ring-world theme +10 Saw the cute Rat Rat +5 Sitting on the floor reading a novel -3

Compared with other Ring World fanfics, this one focuses more on daily life/joy. The writing is not bad, and it has cute/cute/light elements. The player of the game (extraordinary intelligence) exists like a supporting role, but there is no feeling of overpowering the protagonist. The balance is very good, and it can be regarded as an unsystematic novel in a broad sense.

Very good rat, love comes from the ocean ice cap where there is little food and clothing.

I would like to support it with five stars if I add a post about the world. I like to see girls post [like]

I have never played games (I have never even heard of games [face covering]), and I was mainly attracted to Shushu, because it is indeed rare for Tomato Lily to write about mouse girls. It seems to be a pretty good novel so far. In my mind, it can be rated as a home-cooked meal. It's not very amazing but tastes good. The mice are very cute. I just hope that when I write it later, everything will fall into place and success will fall into place. Don't slow down the pace with some messy things.

I also immediately came to give a five-point vote to the delicious rat rat [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The author's great plot advancement is very comfortable to watch, and the daily stories give me little surprises all the time. The descriptions of the various small reactions of the mice are also very cute, especially the interaction with Ain is really sweet to me (shocking and delicious). In short, thank you very much [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

A very good novel, good luck to the author [Like]

It's so delicious, the author must keep updating it [crying][crying][crying]

The writing is good, I look forward to the author continuing to write [Love]

Looks good, come on, don't stop [blowing kiss]

Although the writing is beautiful, I didn't feel the apocalypse. When else can we get the knife [laughs]

A very nice book.

Interesting, very novel subject matter

See the new book around the world +3 Reading on the floor-3

Sushu and Ayin are so delicious (>_<), the two people's life is really ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ with the alternating tranquility and surprise.

It's pretty good, but the author doesn't know how to spell it [laughs evilly]

Shushu is cute +3 I want to ask the author what kind of mods he will have. It would be fun if there are incapacitating mechanisms and edge thunder😋

Shushu is super cute, and the writing is definitely top-notch in Tomato. It's quite interesting to read it as a road novel. No one thinks it's an environmental problem. If you don't bring Sese, you won't be able to attract people. [Cry]

It's delicious. I've never played the game before and I enjoyed watching it. The writing and plot are pretty good, and there's also emotional confusion. Shushu is cute.

It's a good daily routine, it feels very leisurely and not empty, and the main character has the feeling of a mouse, which is very cute

Cute Shushu, love comes from extraordinary intelligence [blowing kiss]

Well enough. It's just that the protagonist has too much inner drama during the battle, and the action is pushed to the back, which makes him feel dull. But fortunately, he has grown up and is not cute.

Nice! Although I have never played the game, it does not affect me at all. Instead, I find it very novel. I hope the author can continue to update it slowly [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The feeling is very delicate, and the rhythm of plot advancement is very good. I hope the author can stick to it [I learned it]

It's a ring + 1 star, a rat + 1 star, it's not time travel, it's the survival of local rats 🤔

Excellent emotional expression, solid writing techniques, and just the right details. Highly recommended