A Ratkin from the RimWorld Finds a Slave Girl

Very good Shushu, love comes from Fried Rice Smart

According to the description of Rimworld as a background, there is a cute rat that does exist in Rimworld. It is a very interesting subject to innovate the story of her experience and describe it in detail. Most of the stories and plots that appear in the book are well-founded in rimworld. Although the game does not tell the trivial matters of daily life from a personal perspective, after playing rimworld, reading this novel makes people's eyes shine and makes people curious about what Shushu will experience in the future. It's very interesting and interesting, and I highly recommend everyone to try playing Rimworld and experience the dual fun brought by the novel and the game.

Shushu is cute, straight out of 50~ To be honest, the story structure is well-proportioned and relaxed at the moment. Although the rhythm is not tight, it definitely does not feel sluggish. The emotional line is slightly backwards, but it is within a reasonable range. The most important thing is that there is no AI flavor, which is rare in Tomato. See, the author can consider the DLC story lines and anthropomorphic story techniques of Ring World, turn the simple accidental generators of Ring World into hidden threads, and finally form various major events such as facing mechanical disasters - establishing the Rat Empire - colonial wars, etc. This will also make it easier for the author to think about long-term stories.

(The following review contains spoilers) The story lacks a beginning. From the perspective of readers who have not played Ring World, the initial hunting process of Iron Heart is very abrupt. The first chapter is not attractive enough to retain readers who have not played Ring World, nor does it introduce the story and character background. The first thought when reading is "Why is Iron Heart hunting here? Does chewing the birch bark by the camp mean that Iron Heart is not alone?". It feels like a lollipop with its head cut off. You can only rely on the stick in the middle to tell that it was originally a lollipop. It is also difficult to tell what flavor the lollipop is with just this stick. Subsequently, Iron Heart expresses the town being destroyed by the machine race and the ability to hear the voice of extraordinary intelligence, both overtly and covertly. It is suitable to be placed at the beginning. The town is destroyed by the terrifying power and Iron Heart hears the extraordinary voice to retain the audience. The follow-up can also be written as Iron Heart escapes the town with extraordinary guidance and survives alone. Then comes the original plot of the first chapter Saw a novel with a ring-world theme +10 Saw the cute Rat Rat +5 Sitting on the floor reading a novel -3

It's pretty good. It suits your appetite. I give it four stars to prevent it from being regarded as a troll.

Very good rat, love comes from the ocean ice cap where there is little food and clothing. It took me a long time to finish reading it in one go. It was really fun. I suddenly wanted to open a Mouse archive. The 300 MODs were so terrifying that my archive became crazy popular.

Compared with other Ring World fanfics, this one focuses more on daily life/joy. The writing is not bad, and it has cute/cute/light elements. The player of the game (extraordinary intelligence) exists like a supporting role, but there is no feeling of overpowering the protagonist. The balance is very good, and it can be regarded as an unsystematic novel in a broad sense.

I have never played games (I have never even heard of games 🤦), and I was mainly attracted to Shushu, because it is indeed rare for Tomato Lily to write about mouse girls. It seems to be a pretty good novel so far. In my mind, it can be rated as a home-cooked meal. It's not very amazing but tastes good. The mice are very cute. I just hope that when I write it later, everything will fall into place and success will fall into place. Don't slow down the pace with some messy things.

Recently I started playing Ring World again. I haven't played it for a long time and there is a mod called World of Rim. Then I remembered this book. Start the game as a single rat race, the Snow Orphan, and then adjust your setting to Snow Rat Goldfinger, and chat and dialogue with Rat Rat to build a colony step by step. The mod environment is a little more righteous and feels more immersive. I have found various tutorials and now I can chat normally. Then I have to write prompt words. I haven't thought about this yet. I plan to read what the big guys have written first, and then edit the world view settings by myself. It is really troublesome, but the sense of immersion is very strong. I feel like I can write novels based on the game situation directly after playing the game with this mod.

The book is very interesting and comes with two rat jokes. Leader Qiluo told the rat soldiers that we are about to fight a difficult battle. The new recruits asked what a campaign was, the veterans asked what the difficulty was, and all the mice asked together what a high level was. A Shushu came to my colony. She was very powerful and a powerful Shushu knight, but other people in the colony teased her with Shushu jokes every day, so Shushu asked me: How can I grow taller? It is best to grow taller painlessly and continuously. Me: That's very simple, just sew your hate book on the sole of your shoe. #Already included in the book of hatred