Traveling back in time to the time of the Great Crusade, as a Word Bearer, loyalty was carved into his soul under the guidance of the Emperor. In the ruins of the "Perfect City", his faith remains intact. Until the conspiracy of the Warp threw him into another mirror universe, where he met the Primarch and learned that the Lion Lion had launched a rebellion. (The introduction is weak, and the pace of the previous article is a bit slow. You can jump directly to Chapter 33 to start the main story)
Reader comments
I really miss it. I remember it was 2015. I was alone, without a team, without advanced equipment, without reporting, without telling my family, and without going. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It feels okay, but I can't tell that the protagonist has traveled through time. It feels like he's from Warhammer.
What does it mean to travel through time in the middle of writing?
How come you have traveled through time [what] [what] even though you are halfway through writing it?
Come on. . . .
It feels different from the introduction
Don't let me meet you. If I do, I'll pluck a hood for you [angry]
It's ok, no big flaws
What kind of stuff did I write? Apart from the fact that it started out like that, it became more and more nonsense later on. Not to mention the writing using AI, it even went through time in the end.
It's hard to finish what I read, and I don't know what to write.
I really miss it. I remember it was 2015. I was alone, without a team, without advanced equipment, without reporting, without telling my family, and without going. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It feels okay, but I can't tell that the protagonist has traveled through time. It feels like he's from Warhammer.
What does it mean to travel through time in the middle of writing?
How come you have traveled through time [what] [what] even though you are halfway through writing it?
Come on. . . .
It feels different from the introduction
Don't let me meet you. If I do, I'll pluck a hood for you [angry]
It's ok, no big flaws
What kind of stuff did I write? Apart from the fact that it started out like that, it became more and more nonsense later on. Not to mention the writing using AI, it even went through time in the end.
It's hard to finish what I read, and I don't know what to write.